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1、托福写作中的30条良言金句 今天整理了托福写作中的30条良言金句，快来一起学习学习吧，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作中的30条良言金句As a Chinese saying goes, “A gentleman puts basic principles first, which will illuminate the way forward.”“君子务本，本立而道生。”(这是习大大在第三届互联网大会开幕式的视频演讲金句)Whats past, is prologue.凡是过去，皆为序章。(依然来自习大大的金句)“To be or not to be, that is the que
2、stion.” This line from Hamlet has left a lasting impression on me.“生存还是毁灭，这是一个问题。”哈姆雷特的这句话，给我留下了极为深刻的印象。No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着
3、毕业而结束这一事实。An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。When it comes to education， the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。Many experts point out that physical exercise con
4、tributes directly to a persons physical fitness.许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国
5、际旅游业的不利影响。An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However， this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents， who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.越来越多的专家相信移
6、民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和卖淫。Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus， which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。There is no
7、 denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。A proper part-time j
8、ob does not occupy students too much time. In fact， it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。Any government， which is blind to this point， may pay
9、 a heavy price.任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。Nowadays， many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately， for most young people， it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，
10、校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。In view of the seriousness of this problem， effective measures should be taken before things get worse.考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills， which may put
11、them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。Although this view is wildly h
12、eld， this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。People equate success in life with the ability of operating compu
13、ter.人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。In the last decades， advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。In fact， we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。We should
14、 spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful tha
15、n most people think.从这几年我搜集的信息来看，这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。Now， it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。This is a matter of life and death-a matter no country can afford to ignore.这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。For my
16、 part， I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:我同意后者，有如下理由：Before giving my opinion， I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。This view is now being questioned by more and more people.这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。Although many people claim that， alo
17、ng with the rapidly economic development， the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information Ive collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展，用自行车的
18、人数会减少，自行车可能会消亡， 然而，这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会发挥极其重要的作用。Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。In view of such serious
19、 situation， environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.考虑到这些严重的状况，我们比以往任何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。Using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。Despite many obvious advantages of bic
20、ycle， it is not without its problem.尽管自行车有许多明显的优点，但是它也存在它的问题。Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.在速度和舒适度方面，自行车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的 托福写作备考写作备考1个月综合写作篇一个月备考期的话，综合写作部分的练习建议在模考软件中按照考试流程来进行，在规定的时间内读阅读、听听力、然后计时写作，写的过程中注意以下几点：1. 单词的拼写，边打字边检查;2
21、. 三单的问题，也就是每句话的谓语要重点关注语态和时态;3. 不能出现与阅读内容连续超过6words的重复，也就是说写作中需要用到阅读内容时必须要自己改写;4. 注意听力内容的转述，不要盲目概括，要清楚听力内容的逻辑;5. 不要去套用网络上盛行的各种模板，自己的创新更重要;P.S. 有些同学遇到听力一遍听不懂的情况，最好再去重听几遍补充笔记，听力内容大体掌握后，再去写作，毕竟综合写作部分听力内容的转述才是关键。独立写作篇正常来说，写作备考应该有一个初期词汇和素材积累的过程，但是如果只有一个月备考时间的话，大家最好直接从范文开始学起，不单独去积累词汇和素材。很多学生也知道通过看范文来充实自己的写
22、作食粮，然而往往看与不看貌似没多少差别。阅读高分及满分范文，不是去赏析一篇散文，阅读过程中需要我们去分析范文中的词汇、句式以及一些素材，然后把这些内容都做一个积累本。一篇范文看完后，学习到哪些内容应该自己再去总结一下，最后在自己写作的时候尽量的去套用。另外，范文建议分门别类看，这样积累下来的素材在对应应用时会更高效。写作备考2个月以上综合写作篇2个月相对来说是比较普遍的一个备考期，2个月的时间足够让那些综合写作听力听不懂的童鞋有一个质的飞跃。如何短期内攻破综合写作的听力，获得高分，有些步骤和1个月备考期稍显不同：1. 先3min读阅读，找出阅读的主题和3个中心论点;2. 听听力，把握听力的中心
23、论点，分论点及论据;3. 听力内容听懂之后，20min计时写作，写完后检查自己的语法错误(三单、人称和时态);(参考1个月备考期综合写作注意事项)4. 听力内容听一遍之后没有听懂，则先不进行第三步，反复听听力音频直至听懂为止，补充第一遍的笔记，然后再去计时写作;5. 对于听4、5遍仍然听不懂的，不进行写作。直接做听写，在听写的文本中标出听力的中心论点、分论点和论据;6. 听写完成之后，再按照考试的流程，进行上述前三步;上述过程，一方面是练习学生对于听力内容把握的能力，另一方面还是要练习写作，毕竟听力听懂之后能不能写明白还是要考察的是写作的能力，所以听写完成之后一定要再次按照考试流程去写作。独立
24、写作篇2个月以上的备考期，独立写作分为两个阶段：词汇和句型的积累和限时写作练习。【第一阶段】词汇和句型的积累首先，背诵高频词汇。可以参考学习的资料有新托福写作1180必备的词汇，或者是托福写作词汇小伴侣。其次，句型的积累，也是很多学生觉得看完用不上的，下面就给大家展示一下，如何去积累句型：| 句子结构1Significant advances have been made in A。 结构*Significant advances have been made in the understanding of the biological and chemical nature of olfac
25、tion, but many fundamental questions have yet to be answered。译 虽然在理解气味的生物学和化学性质上已经取得了重大进展，但是很多基本问题还没有得到解答。 结构解析此结构可表达“A这方面取得了重大进展”的意思，这里A是一个名词性成分。这个结构可以用来表示某个问题的研究取得进展，或者某个方面得到改善。这个结构的亮点是使用了被动语态，可以强调“significant advances”，而忽视谁带来的“significant advances”。我们在作文的时候，可以比较一下这个句型和你常用的句型，明白它们之间的区别，从而选用合适的句型。
26、模仿使用In recent years, significant advances have been made in the quality of life。译 近几年，生活质量有了很大的提高。| 句子结构2：A give B a huge advantage over C 结构*It may seem that this cultural continuity gives us a huge advantage over ants。译 似乎这种文化的延续性使我们与蚂蚁相比拥有巨大的优势。 结构解析此结构可表达”A使B与C相比拥有巨大的优势”的意思。这个结构暗含一种因果关系，A使得B拥有了某
27、种优势，而且远远强过C。使用这个结构的时候注意在一般现在时中谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式。建议研究一下例句，并且多模仿造句，让自己完全掌握这个结构。 模仿使用The low price of labor gives China a huge advantage over other countries。译 廉价的劳动力使得中国与其它国家相比拥有巨大的优势。【第二阶段】限时写作练习前期的词汇和句型积累一定的量之后，就可以参照我们前面讲的一个月备考期的复习计划，可以看范文，限时练习写作即可。总之，写作部分不同于阅读和听力，需要的是先积累，后练习，方能赢得托福写作高分。托福写作技巧怎样提升?牢记三步
28、走写法，扫去迷茫不彷徨。什么是三步走写法呢?这就以our jobs have more effect on our happiness than social life does这个题目为例子来逐一解释。第一步：背景引入如果*的第一句话就是亮出自己的立场，未免有些太过唐突。我们需要娓娓道来，给出一个语境，也就是背景。给出背景的方式是提取关键词。关键词也就是题目的核心话题之所在，引入关键词也就是引入题目的话题。在寻找题目中的核心词，抽象词值得更多的关注。这个题目中，我们找到happiness这个关键词。套以一定的句式，就可以成为很好的背景信息。比如：For centuries, people h
29、ave been pursuing happiness.当然，我们也可以选择social life, job这两个关键词。值得注意的是，在这个题目中，social life和job处于二选一的地位。为了保证背景信息不失偏颇，我们需要将这两个关键词打包套入模板中。比如：Work and social life are always the center of peoples attention.第二步：立靶子独立写作是要我们向一个给定表述说Yes or No. 所以在表达我们的立场的时候，需要先给出这个给定表述。为了展示我们的表达能力，在立靶子的时候，尽量不要照搬题目，而是改写题目。比如：Som
30、e argue that ones job affects his or her happiness more instead of social life.第三步：给出自己的立场同意：Personally, I disagree with it.不同意：Personally, I agree with it.中立：Personally, I think both of them are equally important.不过呢，在实际的写作过程中，我们并不建议写中立的论点哦。原因在于中立的立场没有想象中地那么容易，反而是异常复杂。以这个题目为例。在论证工作和社交生活同等重要的时候，你可能会
31、选择说一下工作是收入*，再说一下社交生活可以释放压力，表明各有利弊。但实质上，中立的立场要求同等的比较标准。比如说，在人际关系上，工作和社交生活是同样对幸福影响很大的。工作领域有主要的人脉圈，而社交生活有利于与朋友家人的人际关系的维系。托福写作技巧分享KEY 1：Budget your time carefully.you have only a half hour in which to complete your work， You should use your time more or less as shown below：Reading and thinking about the
32、 topic 2-3 minutesPlanning and taking notes 2-3 minutesWriting the essay approximately 20 minutesChecking the essay 3-5 minutesKEY 2：Read the question carefully.You must write on the topic exactly as it is given.KEY 3：Brainstorm.Before you begin to write， spend a minute or two “brainstorming。” Think
33、 about the topic and the best way to approach ti.4KEY 4：Plan your essay before you write.You dont have to write out a formal outline with Roman numerals， capital letters， and so on. However， you should make some notes. By following your notes， you can organize your essay before you write， leaving you free to concentrate on the task of writing.5KEY 5：Be sure your handwriting is as clear and legible as possible.Handwriting that is hard to read may unconsciously prejudice the readers who are grading you essay. Be sure your handwriting is not too small or too large.
