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1、批改网高分表达It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the studying abroad become more significant. A case in point, we can have it. On account of an accident, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take pride in. Whats more ,
2、it is universally acknowledged that studying abroad is of consequence. For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to others pain since they might go through some surge. That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence. For the other thing, we may as well go a
3、ll out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well. For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for
4、all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals. What,more 提高文章连接性 studying 4.1 When there is love, there comes hope. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇: affection, love, attachment 均含“爱，热爱”之意。 4.2 The picture depicts a common sense of a lamp brightening the darkness, telling a philosop
5、hy to us as to love. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇: lamp, light 均有“灯”之意。 4.3 As we can see, evidently, love compared to be a lamp and when the darker surrounding is, the brighter it will be. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇: enclose, encircle, envelop, fence, surround 均有“包围”之意。 4.4 The drawing is undoubtedly meaningful and pays to thin
6、k that has we ever attach importance to love surrounding us. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“认为”之意。 第4段 5.1 It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the love become more significant. 修改 优秀词汇 whereas意思是然而，是经典转换话题类词汇。 学习提示 易混词汇
7、: significant, important, momentous 均含“重要的，重大的”之意。 精彩句型 it goes without saying that 意为：不用说.，很明显.。类似的表达有：属于经典高分句型， (It is) needless to say (that)，It is obvious that， Obviously, .。用得很棒！ 5.2 A case in point, we can have it. 修改 闪光短语 a case in point 意为：一个恰当的例子，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 拓展辨析 动名搭配 have.it 在语料库中出现过 34
8、 次 5.3 On account of an accident, he died of tetanus and his son was completely paralyzed. 修改 学习提示 accident表示“意外事故”。注意与incident的区别。详情点击 闪光短语 on account of 意为：由于，属于经典高分短语。 5.4 Without her help and affection, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take prid
9、e in. 修改 闪光短语 高分词组，not to mention意为“更不用说/别提”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of。 学习提示 易混词汇: plan, design, plot, scheme, project, blueprint, programme 均含“计划”之意。 闪光短语 take pride in意为：以自豪，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 5.5 Whats more, the Brooklyn indeed light up the world, so do their love. 修改 闪光短语 whats more有助于提
10、高文章衔接 闪光短语 whats more意思是另外，而且，是经典补充类词组。 学习提示 易混词汇: earth, world, globe 均可表示“地球”之意。 第5段 6.1 As far as I am concerned, it is universally acknowledged that love is of consequence, while loving each other is our obligation and being loved is our privilege. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇: acknowledge, admit, confess, reco
11、gnize, concede 均含“承认”之意。 精彩句型 It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都认为，是经典句型。 闪光短语 高分词组，be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。 6.2 For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to others pain since they might go through some surge. 修改 精彩句型 On no account can意思是.绝对不能.，是经典句型。 学习提示 易混词汇: energy, force, pow
12、er, might, strength, vigour 均有“力”之意。 闪光短语 on no account 意为：决不，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 精彩句型 on no account can we 意为：我们绝对不能.，属于经典高分句型，用得很棒！ 6.3 That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence. 修改 精彩句型 that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是经典句型。 学习提示 reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击 精
13、彩句型 the reason why 意为：.的原因是.，属于经典高分句型。 6.4 For the other thing, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well. 修改 闪光短语 may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 闪光短语 take advantage of的意思是利用，是经典短语。 闪光短语 go all out意为：全力以赶；鼓足干劲，
14、属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 拓展辨析 动名搭配 lend.hand 在语料库中出现过 559 次 6.5 To conclude, only when we fall into the darkest place, will we truly understand how precious love is. 修改 拓展辨析 注意conclude和deduce区别。 6.6 For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in o
15、ur power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇: battle, war, campaign, struggle, warfare, fight, combat, engagement 均有“战斗，战争”之意。 闪光短语 once for all意为：一劳永逸地，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 闪光短语 cope with 意为：对付，妥善处理，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！
