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1、中考英语作文复习,怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？,一、写作要点,“一审”即审题。“二写”即列纲。“三连”即连句成文。“四改”即修改润色全文。,审题：做到三审,体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么 时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。,列纲：做到三思,词汇短语句式 列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。,连句成文,根据短文的内容要求，确定
2、先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。,文章分3段：,综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题 正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话 结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华,修改润色全文做到三查,要点、拼写、语法是否连贯看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。,开头用语：,A.Just as every coin has
3、two sides,cars have both advantages and disadvantagesB.Compared to letters,e-mails are more convenient.C.Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside.D.As we all know,computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.E.Why do you
4、go to university?Different people have different points of view.FWith the development of internet more and more popularG.As a studentK.As an old saying goes.,句式：,1.too.to.He is very young.he cant go to school.He is too young to go to school.2.so.that.He is very clever.He can work out the problem.He
5、is so clever that he can work it out the problem.He is clever enough to work out the problem.3.not only.but also.4.It has many advantages.First,Besides,5.However,every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand,On the other hand,连词：连贯句子,1)表层次 first,firstly,second,secondly,th
6、ird,thirdly,to begin with,to start with,what is more,last,also,and then,next,besides At first;at last;in the end then/next/after that when/while/as soon as/not until in addtion finally On one hand.on the other hand，each/one coin has two sides，,连词：连贯句子,2)表转折；but,however,though,although,after all,in s
7、pite of，fortunately，unfortunately，at the same time3)表递近：in addition,besides,moreover,whats more4)因果 because,so,because of,thanks to,due to,for,since,owing to,as a result(of),hence,thus5)例证 for example,for instance,such as,连词：连贯句子,6)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;have grea
8、t/much influence on sb.;sth.benefit sb.;sb benefit from sth.;affect;have an effect on sb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;be fond of;be interested in;show great interest in;lose oneself in;put ones heart into;7)总结 As I see,As for me，As we all know,in general,generally speaking,I think.,in fact,in a word,in br
9、ief,in conclusion,in short,in summary,to sum up,二、各类作文常用框架,1、话题作文，演讲 总-分-总 Its adj for us to.On the one hand,On the other hand,Whats more,In a word,/In short,.,2、讨论报告，列举不同观点 总-A方-B方-我方-总 Recently,we have a discussion about.Different people have different opinions.A thinks.B thinks differently.As for
10、 me,/In my opinion,.All roads lead to Rome,we can choose the way we like to.,3、写信，建议 总-分-总 Im adj to hear that you Here is some advice for you.Firstly,.Secondly,.Finally,.In a word,If you,you will,习作点评,Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it.Tell the magazine
11、 readers.What exactly your hobby is;When and how you became interested in this hobby;Why you enjoy your hobby;About your hopes and plans for the future.写作要求：1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。3.词数60-80.,学生习作AMy hobby is read books.When I was seven years old.I became interested i
12、n reading books.I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books.Books also can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.,改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。,also
13、的位置应放在can之后。,1,2,点评：档次9-11分。要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者 但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自 然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。有少量错误。,学生习作BMy hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they we
14、rent enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future
15、,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.,开门见山、点题。真情流露，理由充分。文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡 自然、巧妙使用句型以表决心。点评：档次13-14分。清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实 感，文章有感染力。恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错 误，是一 篇高质量的作文。,高分突破,文体：记叙文。要点：what when how why hope and plan for the future.时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化
16、。,三、提高写作的方法,1、造句,Let life be beautiful like summer flowers and death like autumn leaves.,使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美,2、摘录好句、积累名言谚语,学习A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。A good book is a good friend.好书如挚友。All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。All things are difficult before they are easy.凡事总是由难而易。All work and no
17、 play makes Jack a dull boy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之计在于晨。Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。Doing is better than saying.与其挂在嘴上，不如落实在行动上。Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。Every minute cou
18、nts.分秒必争。Easier said than done.说得容易，做得难。,Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。Never say die.永不言败。No pains,no gains.没有付出就没有收获。Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上
19、无难事，只怕有心人。One cannot put back the clock.时钟不能倒转。One hour today is worth two tomorrow.争分夺秒效率高。Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。Reading enriches the mind.开卷有益。Rome is not built in a day.冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。,健康An apple a day keeps th
20、e doctor away.一天一苹果，不用请医生。Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。Health is better than wealth.健康胜过财富。Health is happiness.健康就是幸福。,议论文Every coin has two sides.事物有两面性Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。Money isnt everything.钱不是万能的。Many heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠，赛过诸葛亮。You
21、 cannot eat your cake and have it.鱼与熊掌，不可得兼。Unity is strength.团结就是力量。Think twice before you do.三思而后行。,句型转换，句式多样性,Tom is a student.He is 16 years old.He likes running,Tom,a 16-year-old student,likes running.,多使用短语,I got up quickly.,I got up as quickly as possible.,He studies English well.,He is good
22、at English.He does well in English.,The girl likes reading.The pretty girl likes reading novels.The pretty girl likes reading novels carefully.The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.,扩写,句子的衔接词,并列关系：and，or，either.or，both.and，not only.but also.as well as转折关系：but，howeve
23、r，yet，although条件关系：if,whether，unless时间关系：when，as，before，after，while，until，since，as soon as因果关系：because，as，since，for，so,（一）表示“起”的词/词组：用于开篇引出扩展句。at firstat presentfirst（ly）in generalin the beginning one the one hand（on the other hand）to begin with first of all generally speakingin the first place on t
24、he whole,（二）有关“承”的常用词语：用来承接上文。after/after that/by this timeafter a few days certainlyafter a whilethereforealso/too for example/for instance at the same time Besides/whats more from now on in addition second/secondly in factsimilarlyin other words so in particular soon,in the same way still then thi
25、rd/thirdly meanwhilemoreover for another no doubt such asobviously laterof coursetrulyParticularlyunlike what is more,（三）有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见。after all fortunatelyall the same however anyway in spite ofat the same timeLuckilybut by this time though/although,no doubt on the contraryeven thoughothe
26、rwisestill unfortunatelyin fact unlikeas a matter of fact yetespecially,（四）有关“合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。above allas a resultin sumas has been noted in summaryas I have said on the wholeat last thereforeThuseventually surely,finally to concludein brief no doubtin conclusion undoubtedly in short trulyin
27、 a word so certainly obviouslyall in all,In my life,I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.she does housework and works hard in the factory.I am in trouble,she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.I am ill,she looks after me carefully.I will thank my mother for giving me
28、life.I will thank her for helping me.I love my mother very much.,In my life,I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.(But)she does housework and works hard in the factory.(When)I am in trouble,she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.(When)I am ill,she looks after me carefu
29、lly.(In a word),I will(not only)thank my mother for giving me life,(but also)thank her for helping me.(So)I love my mother very much.,卷面、书写,英语格言ENGLISH PROVERBS,PPT模板下载：行业PPT模板：节日PPT模板：PPT素材下载：PPT图表下载：优秀PPT下载：PPT教程：Word教程：Excel教程：资料下载：PPT课件下载：范文下载：试卷下载：教案下载：,1、If you are doing your best,you will not
30、 have to worry about failure.如果你竭尽全力，你就不用担心失败。2、Winners do what losers dont want to do.胜利者做失败者不愿意做的事！3.Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.Alexander Dumas(Davy de La Pailleterie,French Writer)生活没有目标就像航海没有指南针。(法国作家 大仲马.A.)4.Nothing is impossible!没有什么不可能！5.Do what you say,say what you do 做你说过的，说你能做的,
