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1、满分作文的标准：,?,包含所有要点,（,不能丢落要点）,?,围绕内容适当发挥，内容具体、丰富,（,不能限于回答问题或逐句翻译）,?,应用丰富的语言结构和词汇,（,表达不能过于单一）,?,用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,（,表达有层次，会用关联词，注意周围呼应）,?,没有语言错误,（,杜绝任何小错）,.,无“过”便是“功正确为先；流,畅为好；文采为妙。注重衔接与连贯,写作,:,1.,分析体裁,2.,选定人称,3.,时态,：时态错误扣,三,分,4.,要点全,5.,字数要够,6.,书写,一定,要工整,书面表达要求：,1,）使用正确的时态,2,）使用正确的词语,3,）要有清晰的思路,4,）要有
2、不同的句子,5,）要有一定的连接,分析河北近,10,年中考真题的书面表达可,知，针对“计划安排”这一话题，主要考查了,介绍自己的周末计划。结合全国近年与“计划,安排”这一话题相关的书面表达可知此话题主,要涉及以下命题角度：活动时间及地点安排、,具体活动内容安排等。,命,题,探,索,人教课本中涉及“计划安排”这个话题,的单元有：,教,材,链,接,英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人的周末计,划，,假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲，请根据表,格中提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你,的周末计划，并在班上与同学交流。,审主题：周末计划；审时态：一,般将来时,审文体：,应用文,审人称：,第一人称,Satur
3、day,Watch TV,Go to a bookstore,Sunday,Visit grandparents,.,要点,1,：周六,的计划,要点,2,：周天的,计划,要求：,(1),发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补,充要点；,(2),发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；,(3),发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名,和地名；,(4),词数：,80,个左右,(,已给出的开头和结,尾不计入总词数,),。,Hi,everyone!Heres my plan for the,weekend._,【教材好句范例】,1.,I,would,like,to,invite,you,to,the,opening,of,
4、our,new,library,at,No.,9,High,School.,八,(,上,)Unit,9,P71,2.,I,m,making,some,plans,to,work,in,an,old,peoples,home,this,summer.,八,(,下,)Unit,2,P10,时间地点安排,3.,I,want,to,put,off,my,plan,to,work,in,an,animal,hospital,until,next,summer,.,八,(,下,)Unit,2,P12,4.,My,family,is,taking,a,trip,to,Wuhan,at,the,end,of,
5、this,month,to,visit,my,aunt,and,uncle.,八,(,上,)Unit,9,P66,【句子仿写】,1.,我想邀请你和我们一起去公园野餐。,_,_,2.,九月末的时候我将去上海旅行并拜访我的朋友,们。,I would like to invite you to go on a picnic in the,park with us.,Im taking a trip to Shanghai at the end of,September to visit,my friends.,3.,我们班正计划于六月十日在我们教室里举办一,个聚会。,_,_,_,4.,我们想去田地里
6、采摘水果和蔬菜。,Our class is making some plans to have a party,in our classroom on the tenth day of June.,We want to go to the fields to pick up fruit and,vegetables.,【教材好句范例】,1.,Mary,decided,to,try,out,for,a,job,at,an,after-,school,reading,program,last,year.,八,(,下,)Unit,2,P11,2.,Our,class,is,trying,to,com
7、e,up,with,some,ideas,to,cheer,up,sick,children,because,they,are,often,sad.,八,(,下,)Unit,2,P12,3.,I,m,going,to,bring,my,new,camera,to,take,lots,of,photos,！,具体计划内容,【句子仿写】,1.,今年夏天我决定去海南度假。,_,_,2.,我这周末将去市图书馆借一些关于科学的书。,3.,Frank,正尽力在用一种友好的方式和他的同学们交流。,_,_,I decide to go to Hainan for vacation this,summer.,I
8、m going to the city library to borrow some science books,this weekend.,Frank is trying to communicate with his classmates in a,friendly way.,【句子扩写范例】,1.,I,hope,to,be,a,teacher.,I,hope,to,be,a,teacher.,I,would,be,nice,to,my,students.,2.,Maybe,I,ll,be,an,airplane,pilot.,Maybe,I,ll,be,an,airplane,pilot
9、.,That,would,be,a,cool,job.,理想愿望,3.,So,why,do,I,want,to,be,a,farmer?,So,why,do,I,want,to,be,a,farmer?,Because,it,is,really,an,important,job.,Everyone,needs,food,and,I,want,to,grow,the,best,crops.,【句子扩写】,1.,I,will,work,hard,in,the,new,year.(,扩写具体做法,),_,_,_,_,I will work hard in the new year.I will pa
10、y,more attention to my study.,I will spend more time with my family.I will,share my joys and tears with them.,3.,I,want,to,be,healthier,than,before.(,扩写具体计划,),_,_,4.,I,hope,to,be,a,doctor.(,扩写原因,),_,_,I want to be healthier than before,so I will eat,healthy food and do sports.,I hope to be a doctor.
11、Because it is a great job.,Everyone needs healthy bodies,and I can help,patients.,Our,class,are,going,to,have,a,picnic,in,a,park.,We,are,supposed,to,arrive,at,the,park,at,8,：,00,a,m.,After,arriving,there,some,of,us,are,going,to,_(,活动,1).,At,the,same,time,a,few,classmates,who,are,interested,in,music,
12、can,_(,活动,2).,At,noon,we,will,_(,活动,3).,I,n,t,h,e,a,f,t,e,r,n,o,o,n,w,e,p,l,a,n,t,o,_,_(,活动,4),play games,活动安排,sing songs together,sit around and have a wonderful lunch,collect rubbish,that is thrown away by careless visitors,Hi,everyone!Heres my plan for the weekend.,On Saturday morning,I,m going t
13、o,watch TV to,relax,myself,after a long week,s study.I am fond of watching,comedies and cartoons.On Saturday afternoon,I,m going,to a bookstore to buy some books.Reading is,one of,my,hobbies.I miss my grandparents,so,much,that,I,m going to,visit them on Sunday.Ill help them do some housework.,After
14、I come back,I,ll do my homework to,get ready for,the,next week.That,s my weekend.How do you like it?,Thank you!,(2019,黄石改编,),假如你是李华，你的外国同,学,Tom,写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请你根,据所给提示和要求，给,Tom,回封邮件。,提示：,(1)Read some useful books.,(2)Help my parents do some housework.,(3)Do exercise with some friends.,写,作,练,兵,?,要求：
15、,(1),邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适,当发挥。,?,(2),邮件中不得出现真实的人名，校名,和地名。,?,(3),词数,80,个左右。,(,开头和结尾已给出，,不计入总词数,),Dear Tom,，,I,m very happy to hear from,you._,_,_,_,_,_,_,写,作,练,兵,Now Im,going to tell you my plans for the summer vacation.,First of all,I want to read some meaningful,and good books.Maybe these books will be h
16、elpful,for my future study.Then,I want to spend more,time helping my parents do some housework,such,as,_,_,I wonder how do you plan your vacation?Write to me soon.,Yours,，,Li Hua,写,作,练,兵,sweeping the floor or washing dishes after dinner.,Finally,I plan to go to the park with my friends,every morning or afternoon for exercise.,Exercising can help me keep healthy.,
