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1、英语写作技巧,创造闪光点，作文亮一点,高分作文标志,1：是否长短句交叉；2：是否会使用插入语；3：用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；4：关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；5：句型使用是否准确、地道。,写好一篇作文的注意事项,1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I。eg:It is,therefore,high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competit
2、ive edge will be sharpened effectively.,写好一篇作文的注意事项,2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。eg：Other individuals,however,take the attitude that,写好一篇作文的注意事项,3.一定要学会换词，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,p
3、eople,opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carry out,sharpen ones competitive edge替换enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力),Computer and IBy Simmy,I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present,which exerted a tremendou
4、s fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless,feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,替换very,替换exciting,替换sb.be interested in sth.,替换search,替换a lot of,范文,The dawn of th
5、e new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology,computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them,in large measur
6、e!,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；,替换more and more popular,替换with,替换development,替换enter into,替换now,替换sb.be interested in sth.,替换more and more people,经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的,范文,For a start,we can,freely,search desired information at any moment.Little by little,our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be gr
7、eatly broadened.Additionally,we can get huge recreations online by chatting,playing games,or delivering email.,To begin with,插入语,被动,替换 In addition/Besides,替换 send,范文,There is no denying that,however,computers can function in the disservice of human beings,in a way,especially the growing violence,por
8、n pictures,which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.,替换 do harm to,网民，精彩用词,范文,As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives,despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should,therefore,take advantage of the fruits and
9、avoid the opposite facet.,替换 Every coin has two sides,强调,替换 important/good 等,替换 a part of,替换 bad,替换 effects/influences,插入语,替换 aspect,30个最经典的替换词,1.individuals,folks替换(people,persons)2:positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good,30个最经典的替换词,3:dr
10、eadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games,enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation,as a result,they find their academic records ar
11、e less impressive.,30个最经典的替换词,4.(an army of,an ocean of,a sea of,a multitude of,a host of,many,if not most)替换many.注：用many,if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg.Many individuals,if not most,harbor the idea that.同理 用most,if not all,替换most.,30个最经典的替换词,5:a slice of,quiet a few,several替换some 6:harbor the idea
12、that,take the attitude that,hold the view that,it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that替换think(因为是书面语，所以要加that),30个最经典的替换词,7:affair,business,matter 替换thing 8:shared 代 common 9:reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits)10:for my part,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion,30个最经典的替换词,
13、11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.,30个最经典的替换词,12:little if anything,或little or nothing替换hardly13:beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,14:s
14、hopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer15:exceedingly,extremely,intensely 替换very,30个最经典的替换词,16.hardly necessary,hardly inevitable.替换 unnecessary,avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb,sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in/sb.be interested in 18.capture ones attention替换attract o
15、nes attention.19.facet,sphere代aspect,30个最经典的替换词,20.be indicative of,be suggestive of,be fearful of代 indicate,suggest,fear21.give rise to,lead to,result in,trigger 替换cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth23.desire 替换want.,30个最经典的替换词,24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to2
16、5.bear in mind that 替换remember26.enjoy,possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)27.interaction替换communication,30个最经典的替换词,28.frown on sth替换 be against,disagree with sth29.to name only a few,as an example替换 for example,for instance 30.next to/virtually impossible,替换nearly/almost impossible,一二三原则,1）first,second,
17、third,last（不推荐，原因：俗）2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐，原因：俗）3）the first,the second,the third,the last（不推荐，原因：俗）4）in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）5）to begin with,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）,一二三原则,6）to start with,next,in addition,finally（强烈推荐）7）first an
18、d foremost,besides,last but not least（强烈推荐）8）most important of all,moreover,finally9）on the one hand,on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）10）for one thing,for another thing（适用于两点的情况）,开头段常用核心句型,The arguer may be right about,but he seems to neglect to mention the fact thatContrary to generally accepted views,I
19、argue thatIt is true that,but this is not to say thatThe main/obvious problem with this argument is that it is blind to the basic fact thatIt would be natural/reasonable to think that,but it would be absurd to claim that,开头段常用核心句型,There is absolutely no reason for us to believe thatAt first thought,
20、it may seem an attractive idea,but on second thought,we find thatThe problem/fact is thatAs far as I am concerned,I believe that Those who object toargue thatBut people who favor,on the other hand,argue that,中间段的常用核心句型,The change inmainly results fromThe increase inis due to the fact thatMany people
21、 would claim thatOne of the reasons given for is thatThere are a variety of reasons for this dramatic growth in First Second FinallyWhy are(is/do/did)?For one thing For another,中间段的常用核心句型,History is filled with the examples ofAs is shown in the table released by the government,it can be learned that
22、There is(no)good evidence toWe must admit the undeniable fact thatNo one can deny the fact thatExperience(Evidence)suggests thatThe same is true of,结尾段的常用核心句型,It is high time that we placed great emphasis on the improvement ofIt is high time that we put an end to the unhealthy situation(tendency/phe
23、nomenon)ofThere is no easy solution to the problem of,but might be useful.Unless there is a common realization of,it is very likely thatIt is essential that effective measures should be taken to prevent the situation.,结尾段的常用核心句型,It is suggested that great efforts should be made to control the growth
24、 ofIt is hoped that great efforts should be focused on finding(developing/improving)Anyway,more publicity should be given to the potential effects ofTo control the tendency is not an easy job,and it involves a different state of attitude towardsTo put all into a nutshell,I,1.人的活动是有意识的。这决定了人类活动的预期性、目
25、的性。2.人类社会是有组织的。这种组织性决定了人类活动的秩序性、规则性，导致人类活动的领导与被领导、权威与服从关系的确立。3.人类社会是不断发展的。从这三方面来说，人类社会从其诞生开始，就有了领导活动。4.是若干领导者按照一定的原则、制度科学地排列组合起来的，彼此间相互作用、相互影响的具有高度组织性和能动性的有机整体。这一集体，由其中的最高层的领导者负责和统领，次级领导者充当集体成5.第一种方法是不提及纠纷的具体内容，晓以大义。这种调解法就是告诉纠纷的一方或双方，个人的事再大也是小事.6.在语言的发展过程中，逐渐形成了约定俗成的语法规则，并随着社会的发展而进行必要的更新；其中，尤以某些词语在词
26、性、词义和用法的变化，新词汇的不断涌现最为显著。7.磁砖是一种陶瓷，但许多人并不知道，陶是陶而瓷是瓷，陶瓷是对它们的合称，实际上指的是两回事。8.在历史上，陶器比瓷器的出现要早得多，比如我国彩陶时期，距今约有七千年左右，而到了商代才有原始青瓷，可以说瓷器是在陶器的基础上发展起来的。9.在空调空调压缩机的电动机绝缘击穿、匝间短路或绕组烧毁以后，由于电动机烧毁后产生大量酸性氧化物而使制冷系统受到污染。10.因此，除了要更换压缩机、毛细管与干燥过滤器之外，还要对整个制冷系统进行彻底的清洗。轻度污染时制冷系统内冷冻油没有完全污染，从压缩机的工艺管放出制冷剂和冷冻油时，油的颜色是透明的。若用石蕊试纸试验，油呈淡黄色。,感谢观看！,
