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1、2015,年,6,月大学英语四级作文真题,?,Directions:For this part you are allowed 30,minutes to write a composition entitled,On,Excessive Packaging,following the outline,below.You should write at least 120 words,but no more than 180 words.,?,1.,目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象,?,2.,出现这一现象的原因,?,3.,我对这一现象的看法和建议,?,大纲要求：写作,(writing),部分是测
2、试学生,用英语进行书面表达的能力，所占分值比,例为,15%,，考试时间为,30,分钟。,?,要求：三段式，字数,120,，时间,30,分钟,?,四级考试题型为六大类：现象解释型，问,题解决型，观点对比型，谚语论证，以及,应用文和图表作文。,?,描述现象、分析原因、个人看法仍是四级,考试写作部分主要考查的重点,提高写作的五条原则,?,practice,：从现在开始到考试，本学期至少写五,篇作文；选其中三篇最好作文，作为成绩。,?,input,：,要有必要的输入。要多看范文，背范文。,在理解的基础上，把范文的精彩句子、词汇和结构,默写。同时熟记不同类型论文的句子框架。,?,outline,：动手写
3、作文前要根据题目或者中文提纲，,把英语关键词写下，以确保作文不离题。,?,vary,：作文的句子要多变。要在练习中敢于尝试,使用新的句型和词汇表达。,?,revise,：作文最后定稿前，至少改三遍。第一遍自,己改，第二遍请班上两名同学帮改，第三遍重新检,查，抄正后再交给老师。,观点对比选择型议,论文写作训练,Learning Objective,?,Evaluate two points of view and,choose which one you agree with.,?,Practice writing an introduction,body paragraph and a con
4、clusion.,?,Writing practice,?,要求从正反两方面对某一事物加以论,述。这类议论文有其固定的模式，如,就某一事物或现象给出两种完全对立,的观点，然后再摆出自己的看法；或,是先说明某一事物的重要性，积极因,素，然后再说明该事物的危害性、消,极因素等。,?,观点,1+,观点,2+,个人观点,?,描述现象,+,观点,1,、,2,（积极性、消极性）,+,个人观点,对比选择型,(,正反两点论式,),议论文,历年四级作文,?,20015,年,12,月,?,Should the University Campus Be Open,to Tourists?,1.,名校校园正成为旅游新
5、热点,（描写现象）,2.,校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同,（观点,1+,观点,2,）,3.,我认为,（个人观点）,历年四级作文,?,20014,年,12,月,?,On the Spring Festival Gala,1,、许多人喜欢看,cctv,春节晚会,（现象,+,观点,1,）,2,、但有的人认为应该取消,（观点,2,）,3,、你的看法,（个人观点）,历年四级作文,?,20013,年,6,月,?,Recreational Activities,1.,娱乐活动多种多样,（描写现象）,2.,娱乐可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性,（积极性,+,消极性）,3.,作为大学生，我的看法,（个人观点）
6、,?,例题一：,?,My View On Job-hopping,?,有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为,?,有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为,?,我的看法,对比选择型,(,正反两点论式,),作文分析,1,Paragraph 1:introduction,My View on Job-hopping,?,Everyones attitude toward job,-hopping is,different.,Some people think they will do one,job until retirement.,They often say something,like this:Take
7、up one thing,like it and be good at,it.,（引用法）,These people think that,only,when,they are absorbed in one job can they do it well.,（半倒装句型）,?,第一段：第一句首先概括主题现象。本段第二句,为主题句，第三、四句通过引用某类人的观点，,对主题句进行解释或者说明。,?,By contrast,other people like to,change jobs from time to time.,In their,opinion,the aim of doing a
8、job is only to,get more money.So when they have a,chance to get a better-paid job certainly,they ought to seize the chance.,?,第二段：段首句为主题句，中心思想是,“,like to change jobs from time to time”,；,第二、三句为发展句。在对第一、二段进,行衔接时，文章使用了信号词“,By,contrast”,。,Paragraph 2:body,Paragraph 3:conclusion,?,My view on job-hopping
9、 falls between the,two viewpoints expressed above.,I think if I,have a job that really suits me,Ill do it all my life.,No other job can attract me no matter what the,benefits may be.But if I dont get a suitable job,Ill change it until I find something satisfactory.,In,a word,I want to find a job tha
10、t suits me;money,and other things are not under consideration.,?,第三段：谈论“我的看法”时，作者并没有单纯,倾向于哪一种观点。段首句中作者首先解释：我,的观点介于两者之间；之后，又在发展句中对其,态度作了进一步说明。,point 1,point 2,Your view,Further explanation(reason),Summary(restate),Further explanation(reason),Further explanation(reason),?,例题二：,?,Private Cars,：,Good Or
11、 Evil,?,1.,有人认为我们应积极推广私人汽车,?,2.,有人认为我们不应推广私人汽车,?,3.,你的看法,?,Private Cars:Good or Evil,?,With the improvement of peoples living,standard,some people have bought cars of their,own,and others are planning to buy cars.,（用一,到两个句子描写现象，不要过度描写）。,There,is a general discussion nowadays about,the,good or evil e
12、ffects private cars may bring us.,To this problem,different people hold,different views.,?,开头段：段落第一句为概述，通过具体的现象,引起读者的共鸣。第三句为论点，论点的主题：,“,different views”,。,Paragraph 1:introduction,?,Those who,favor,private cars,maintain,that,private cars are highly desirable,for,obvious reasons,.,（主题句）,In the big ci
13、ties,of China,buses are often crowded and slow,especially during rush hours.If there are,more private cars,people can get around,easily.Besides,by driving cars,they might,be well protected from the bad weather,and,cover long distances rapidly and pleasantly.,（分论点；举例）,?,主体段：主题句为第一句。中心思想是,“,obvious re
14、asons”,；发展句中，作者运用了公,共汽车拥挤和小汽车的种种便利这两个事实，对,中心思想进行说明。,Paragraph 2:body part,?,However,there are three chief reasons for,those people who are against cars.,（主题句）,First,cars are the main cause of traffic,accident.,（分论点）,Thousands upon,thousands of people have been killed or,injured by car accidents all
15、over the world.,（举例）,Second,car owners have to pay vast,sums for road tax and other fees every year.,This is a big drain on their resources.,Finally,private car owners in China may have all kinds,of trouble,such as,getting a driving license,and finding a parking lot.,（举例）,Paragraph 2:body part,?,As
16、to me,the latter opinion is more acceptable.,Although cars have so many obvious benefits,they are too luxurious for the overwhelming,majority of Chinese people to own them.,Therefore,we may say that it is still early at,present for the popularization of private ears in,our country.,?,结尾段：本段中，作者先在第二句
17、话介绍了原因，,第三句话阐述了作者的具体观点,普及轿车为时,尚早。,Paragraph 3:conclusion,point 1,point 2,Your view,General statement(describe the phenomenon),Further explanation(example+reason),Summary,Further explanation(example),Further explanation(reason),小结,?,一篇好的作文首先要有好的结构（写提纲，,不离题）,?,句子、段落之间合理使用连接词,?,句子主题句明显,?,说理之后要举例丰富,?,恰当
18、地使用特殊的句式（强调句、倒装句、,条件状语从句）,?,争取在文章中要有一到三个亮点。（词汇、,词组、句型）,?,在写作正反两点论式文章时，我们可以借助以,下句型：,?,1.,When asked about.,quite a few/many/,most/the vast majority of people,think/believe,that,.,?,But other people regard/see/view/think of.,as.,?,I think quite/a bit differently.,?,2.,When it comes to.,some people,thi
19、nk/,believe that.,?,Others,argue/claim,that the opposite/reverse,is true.,?,There is probably some truth in both,arguments/statements,but I think.,?,在写作正反两点论式文章时，我们可以借助以下,句型：,?,3.,There is a public debate/discussion/,controversy today/nowadays on,/about/,over the problem/issue of.,?,Those who critic
20、ize/oppose/object to.,contend/argue that.They believe that.,?,But people who advocate/favor.,on the,other hand,maintain/assert that.,?,4.,Now a lot of/many/the majority of/most,people believe/think/feel that.,?,Admittedly,there is no/little evidence,that,结尾段常用引出“我”的个人观点的句型：,?,As far as I am concerne
21、d,I agree with,?,就我而言，我支持,?,As to me,the former/latter opinion is more acceptable.,?,对我来说，前,/,后一种观点更可以接受。,?,For my part,I am on the side of,?,对我来说，我站在,那边。,?,As I see it,?,就我看来,?,From my perspective,I,?,就我而言，我,?,两者都对,?,In my opinion,both sides are partly right,we should take into consideration all,as
22、pects of the problem,and then make the,right decision.,?,同意一方,?,Personally,I am on the side of the former,(latter)argument.,?,I stand on the side of the former(latter).,?,Is It Good for Colleges Students to,Have Part-time Jobs?,?,大学生打工的好处,?,大学生打工的害处,?,你的观点,Writing Practice,?,题目一：,?,My View on Studyi
23、ng Abroad,?,国外学习是发展的最佳途径；,?,国内学习也能施展才能；,?,你的观点。,Writing Practice,?,题目二：,?,My View on the Micro-blog,?,微博的好处；,?,微博的弊端；,?,你对微博的看法,写作要求,?,“Is It Good for Colleges Students to,Have Part-,time Jobs”,为必写题目。,?,然后在“,My View on Studying Abroad,”,和,“,My View on the Micro-,blog”,两个题目中,选其中一个为拓展题目。,?,每篇作文都是,120,字左右，都必须是三段式，,请使用课上讲过的文章结构，万用模板。,
