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1、industrialgoods概要写作,Summary五步法,1.阅读并理解大意,把握文章结构2.找出主题句，要点主题句，关键词。3.用自己的语言整合信息。4.修饰文章使之更有连贯性。5.检查语言，语法，和标点。,step2:Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Nowada
2、ys industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Thin
3、k of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then w
4、e will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?,（例子-expensive）,（例子-such as used cars and the expensive packaging material）,.,（信息整合-后果+措施）,step3:Once upon a time,industrial goods were ma
5、de to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.,（例子-expensive）,.,_,industrial goods were made _.And they were very expensive.And they cost a large sum of money.,Some time ago;In the past;,to function well fo
6、r a long time;,step3:Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because
7、 they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!Products nowadays cannot last long._,_,（例子-such as used cars and the expensive packaging material）,People perfer,to throw them away rat
8、her than repair them,which is a waste of earths resources,Which has led to a great waste of earths resources,has caused/has resulted in,step3:Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,th
9、en we will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?1.后果+2.措施1.This wastefulness _now because we have no resources left.has brought us great trouble2.We should take immediate action to s
10、top wasting resources.,.,（信息整合）,has caused great trouble for us,step 4.连贯性 In the past,industrial goods were made to function well for a long time and they were very expensive.Nowadays,products cannot last long.People prefer to throw it away rather than repair it,which has led to a great waste of ea
11、rths resources.This Wastefulness has caused great trouble for us now because we have no resources left.We should take immediate actions to stop wasting resources.,However,Therefore,Step5.检查In the past,industrial goods were made to function well for a long time and they were very expensive.However,pr
12、oducts Nowadays cannot last long.People prefer to throw it away rather than repair it,which has led to a great waste of earths resources.This Wastefulness has caused great trouble for us now because we have no resources left.Therefore,we should take immediate action to stop wasting resources.,Decade
13、s ago,industrial goods were of high quality and cost a lot.(要点1)But this is not a good idea to manufacturers.过渡句 They advised us to throw them away rather than repair them,which has caused a great waste of the worlds resources.(要点2)This wastefulness has brought us great trouble.Now we are running ou
14、t of resources.Therefore,we should act immediately to save what we have before its too late.(要点3)69W,Model essay,Writing skills,Skill 2:Rewrite sentences.,Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.Some time ago,manufacturers made industrial goods last forever.,改变语态（主动被动）,2.This was
15、tefulness has got us into great trouble.We have got into great trouble due to this wastefulness.,改变主语（人物）,3.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them.It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.People would rather throw the
16、m away than repair them as it is cheaper to do so.,改变主语（形式主语）,正话反说、反话正说,Step 1：Step 2:Step 3:Step 4:,Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.(Reorganize information.),Organize the key points logically.,How to write a good summary?,Conclusion,Begin to write.,Paraphrase some words or phr
17、ases.Rewrite sentences.Use the minimum of words.,Read and check.,Polish your writing,Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever and they were very expensive.Nowadays,however,industrial products cant last long and it is cheaper to throw them away than to repair it.This has led to a g
18、reat waste of the earths resources.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in,so we should try to act immediately and build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue.(78W),Decades ago,industrial goods were made durable,people would rather throw them away,than repair i
19、t,which has resulted in,brought us great trouble,everyone stops wasting resources,(64W),1.wandering 2.account3.seek4.scene5.adventure6.permits7.appearance8.stared 9.spotted10.contrary,1.seek out2.account for 3.was brought up4.stare at 5.earned my passage6.on the contrary7.cares about 8.go ahead9.by accident10.as a matter of fact,1.scream2.envelopes3.manners4.unbelievable5.seeking5.indeed7.bowed8.rude9.amount10.genuine,1.account for2.in rags3.by accident4.As for5.stare at 6.On the contrary7.go ahead8.taking a chance9.brought up 10.a large amount of,此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢,
