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1、基础写作应对技巧,五句话作文：审题(找准时态、要求）布局结构 翻译要点整合信息（句型、连词）全文检查（信息点、语法表达）,五句话作文：审题(找准时态、要求）布局结构翻译要点（句型）整合信息（连词）全文检查（信息点、语法表达）,根据以下信息，介绍邵逸夫的生平。,Tense:Past,根据以下信息，介绍邵逸夫的生平。,出生日期，出生地，身份,Tense:Past,卒,合成3句话,合成1句话,合成1句话,1句,1句,1句,根据以下信息，介绍邵逸夫的生平。,be born in/on,卒,die/pass away,出生日期，出生地，身份,作文中出现的“高频”错误 Lets correct mista
2、kes!,表达时间和地点at 1907,at 2014at Ningbo City,Zhejiang Province19岁时When he 19 years At 19 years,in,in,in,Zhejiang Province,Ningbo City,When he was 19 years old,At the age of 19,he,3.1958年与哥哥共同创立了“邵氏兄弟有限公司”，成为当时亚洲最大的电影制造商。He co-founded Shaw Brothers Ltd.with his elder brother and became the biggest produ
3、cer of movies at that time.4.邵氏公司遍布上海、新加坡和香港，制作了超过1,000部电影。Company around Singapore,Shanghai and HK and produced more than 1000 movies.,成为,and it became,谁成为？是人还是公司？,produced,（,）,in,Company in Singapore,Shanghai and HK producedmore than 1000 movies.,1.19岁进入电影行业，并对其逐渐产生了极大的兴趣。,进入产生兴趣,enter,go into,bec
4、ome interested in,develop an interest in,At the age of 19,he went into the film industry.He gradually became interested in the movie business.,When he was 19,he went into the filmindustry and gradually became interestedin the movie business.,2.1958年与哥哥共同创立了“邵氏兄弟有限公司”，成为当时亚洲最大的电影制造商。,共同创立电影制造商In 1958
5、,he established Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with his elder brother.It was the biggest producer of movies at that time.,establish with/co-foundwith,film maker/producer of movies,In 1958,he established Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with his elder brother，_was the biggest producer of movies at that time.
6、,which,2.1958年与哥哥共同创立了“邵氏兄弟有限公司”，成为当时亚洲最大的电影制造商。,共同创立电影制造商In 1958,he established Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with his elder brother.It was the biggest producer of movies at that time.,establish with/co-foundwith,film maker/producer of movies,In 1958,he established Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with hi
7、s elder brother，_was the biggest producer of movies at that time.,which,3.邵氏公司遍布上海、新加坡和香港，制作了超过1,000部电影。,Show s companies in.made more than 1000 movies since their establishment.It produced 50 films in 1974 at its peak time.,4.颠峰时，仅1974年一年就有50部电影面世。,信息整合,超过1,000部电影,more than 1,000 movies,颠峰时,at peak
8、 time,Shaw Show s companies in Shanghai,Singapore and Hong Kong made more than 1000 movies since their establishment,_.,with peak production at 50 films in 1974,3.邵氏公司遍布上海、新加坡和香港，制作了超过1,000部电影。,Show s companies in.made more than 1000 movies since their establishment.It produced 50 films in 1974 at i
9、ts peak time.,4.颠峰时，仅1974年一年就有50部电影面世。,信息整合,超过1,000部电影,more than 1,000 movies,颠峰时,at peak time,Shaw Show s companies in Shanghai,Singapore and Hong Kong made more than 1000 movies since their establishment,_.,with its peak production at 50 films in 1974,慈善 1.热衷慈善，热心教育事业；2.很多大学建筑都以他的名字命名,With a passi
10、on for education,Run Run Shaw devoted himself to eharity and many buildings are named after him in a lot of universities and colleges.,热衷慈善,a passion for;charity,以命名,be named after,He devoted all his life to charity with a passion for education.Many buildings are name after him in many universities.
11、,范文,Run Run Shaw was born in Ningbo city,Zhejiang province in 1907 and passed away in 2014.At the age of 19,he went into the film industry and gradually developed a keen interest in the movie business.In 1958,he co-founded Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with his elder brother,which was the biggest prod
12、ucer of movies at that time.Shaw Show s companies in Shanghai,Singapore and Hong Kong made more than 1000 movies since their establishment.With peak production at 50 films in 1974.With a passion for education,Run Run Shaw devoted himself to charity and many buildings are named after him in a lot of
13、universities and colleges.,Practice makes perfect,首先，了解熟悉五句话作文要求其次，提高组织、整理信息的能力再次，练习复合句打造亮点最后，巧用衔接词语、规范表达,复合句,状语从句,定语从句,主语从句,宾语从句,表语从句,同位语从句,名词性从句,1.Steve Jobs was born in San Francisco on Feb.24,1955.2.Steve Jobs was the CEO of Apple Inc.,1)Steve Jobs _was the CEO of Apple Inc.(定语从句),who was born i
14、n San Francisco on Feb.24,1955,Drinking tea is a good habit for us.Drinking tea can improve our health.,Drinking tea,which can improve our health,is a good habit for us.,with,Common,Good,我无法继续学习，因为这里太吵了。I couldnt go on studying because here was so much noise.I couldnt go on studying _ so much noise
15、here.,那个口袋里揣着三部Iphone 6的家伙肯定是土豪。That guy _ must be too rich.,with three Iphone 6 in his pocket,besides，,however，,for one thingfor another,etc.,to begin with,later,meanwhile,finally,etc.,while,though,but,on the contrary,etc.,whats more，,in addition，,表示补充的:,表示时间顺序的:,表示转折的:,表示举例:,such as,for example,et
16、c.,表示强调:,above all,indeed,first of all,etc.,表示个人观点:,In my opinion,As far as I am concerned,etc.,根据句意填上适当的衔接词语,What should a journalist remember when he goes out to cover a story?First,he needs to be curious,_ only if he asks many questions can he acquire what he wants to know._,he shouldnt miss the deadline.For one thing,he has to listen for the details;_,he has to prepare for the next question.,because,Besides,for another,THANKS,Do make progressstep by step.,
