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1、北京卷 中考真题 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于 60 词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假如你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并淡谈你的感受。 Hi! Liu Jing， My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himselfHe says the bu

2、s service in Beijing is very good now，and people can go anywhere by busIs he right? Can you tell me something more about it? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours， Tony Hi! Tony， Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing_ If you have more questions，please ask me Yours， Liu Jing 名

3、师解析 1试题解读 这则书面表达要求考生写一则回信，内容涉及北京良好的公交服务。公交服务与考生日常生活息息相关，故该写作任务所涉及的写作内容具体，只要平时稍作留意应会有所了解。动手写作时能详细加以表达。但写作要求中不仅涉及介绍，还涉及谈论感受，故考生应注意表达内容全面，不可遗漏要点，所表达观点尽量有自己的独特性，这样才能在数篇中考作文中脱颖而出。 2写作信息要点 回信的基本客套语； 介绍北京良好的公交服务； 谈论自己对北京公交服务的看法。 3可用素材 (1) 词汇： bus service，excellent，seat，environment，wait for a bus，tickets，ch

4、eap，good manners，take，bus lines，spend (2) 句式： Its right that your grandpa says that the bus service in Beijing is very good now Its true that the bus service in Beijing is very good now There is no trouble for your grandpa to go anywhere in Beijing There are bus lines all over I believe your grandpa

5、 will enjoy our good bus service here 4注意事项 (1) 写回信应对来信中所提及的问题有针对性地进行回答，不可避重就轻； (2) 注意正确使用信件的格式； (3) 介绍北京良好的公交服务应为本文的重点写作内容； (4) 注意避免表达的语言平淡化。 满分文展示 1 Dear Tony， Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing (What your grandpa say is right)The bus service in Beijing is now really very good(As a

6、matter of fact，buses play an important role in our daily life)(Its very convenient to travel everywhere because there are bus lines all over，even to villages)There are bus stops here and there，so you neednt wait for a long timeWhats more，the tickets are very cheap(The drivers are not only good at dr

7、iving but also kind to passengers) I really enjoy taking a bus here(Its so comfortable here) If you have more questions，please ask me Yours， Liu Jing 旁批 What your grandpa says 在句中为一个主语从句，属于语法高级结构。 As a matter of fact 在句中起过渡作用，后面的 play an important role 表示“充当重要角色”，是一个高级词汇。 这是一个主从复合句，其中 its convenient

8、 to do 句型表示“做某事是方便的”。属于高级表达方式。 该句中使用了 not only. but also. 结构，该结构的使用，使表达尤为简洁明了。 此处是一个 so. that. 引导的结果状语从句，表明了作者的观点和态度。 标准范文 Dear Tony， Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing Your grandpa is rightThe bus service in Beijing is really good nowThere are bus lines all overBuses can even take yo

9、u to a small villageBesides，special seats are offered on busesPeople do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap I like taking a bus because I think its comfortable and also good for the environmentSo its a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Beijing If

10、you have more questions，please ask me Yours， Liu Jing 中考真题 回想三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的印象。请你以“What should we do in English class?”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。 提示：(1) Listen to the teacher (2) Take part in activities (3) Be confident in ourselves 要求：(1) 文稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 (2) 文稿中不得出现真

11、实的人名、校名和地名。 (3) 词数：60 80 个。 参考词汇：take notes，work in groups with.，not be afraid of. What should we do in English class? In English class，we should _ 名师解析 1试题解读 本文为提纲式说明文体裁。文章要求学生就“在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效”这一话题谈一下自己的具体想法。此话题与学生生活紧紧相关，因此在写作时，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，就能写出一篇内容丰富的文章；同时要注意文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当

12、、准确。 2写作信息要点 学生要做到课上认真听讲。 学生要积极参加课堂活动。 学生应该保持自信的态度。 标准范文What should we do in English class? In English class，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessaryTry to answer questions in English We should take part in all kinds of activities，like reading，writing，having discussion

13、s and playing gamesWe need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other Its very important to be confidentSpeak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakesIn this way，we can make much progress 中考真题 假定你叫张华，最近你从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂

14、，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下： 表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等； 感到担忧：造成环境污染等； 希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。 注意：1词数 80 100； 2请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； 名师解析 1试题解读 这是一种半开放的题型：美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，自己既欢喜又担忧，同时还要求了解有关环保措施及更多信息。对于此类文章，作者应该开门见山地说出自己的高兴心情，建没工厂将给家乡的人们带来很多的好处。接着表达自己对环境问题的担忧，担忧恶化的环境对经济造成的反作用。这为下面的了解环保措施做了铺垫。文章结构要清晰，按照题目提示的顺序展开。句式要多变，注意长短句的结合，以彰显

15、错落有致。用词新颖，要学会用同义词、短语替换很普通的词汇。这两条会使你的文章脱颖而出，与众不同。 2写作信息要点 (1) 自己很高兴； (2) 有利于家乡的发展； (3) 担忧会带来环境问题； (4) 希望了解该公司的有关环保措施及更多信息。 标准范文 Dear Sir or Madam， Im a middle school studentI have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometownThere is no doubt that it is

16、 good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobsMost of us stand by the programHowever，some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the areaI would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protectionWould

17、 you please offer us more information about it? Im looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully， Zhang Hua 浙江杭州卷 中考真题假如你是李明，你的笔友 Peter 将随团来你校进行为期一天的学习交流活动，请你将以下安排发邮件告知。学校安排上午活动1meet teachers and students2have a Chinese music class3learn how to make Chinese paper cut你安排下午活动及理由 注意： 1内容必须包括上午的安

18、排，下午的安排及理由； 2开头已经为你写好，你只需接着写； 3词数：70 个左右。开头和结尾部分内容不计入总词数。 Hi Peter， I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit_ Im looking forward to seeing you soon Li Ming 标准范文 Hi Peter， I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit In the morning，you are supposed to meet our teachers

19、 and schoolmates first，and then have a Chinese music classNext，you will be taught how to do Chinese paper cutting In the afternoon，I suggest you start by taking a boat trip on the West LakeYoull admire the beautiful sights around the lakeThen you can visit some interesting museums and famous temples

20、 to get to know the history of the city Im looking forward to seeing you soon Li Ming 河南卷 中考真题 请以“_ is fun”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1先把题目补充完整(空格处可以是单词、短语，也可以是从句)； 2短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息； 3词数 80 左右。 _ is fun 名师解析 1试题解读 本文属于开放式作文，其特点是要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力和创造力，把所给题目补充完整，然后再根据所补充的题目设想内容要点，组织篇章结构。这就为考生张扬个性提供了广阔的空间，从而能够考查考生的发

21、散思维和创新思维能力。 2写作信息要点 (1) 简洁明了地引出主题。 (2) 展开论述主题。 (3) 照应开头，总结主题。 标准范文Cooking is fun Why is cooking fun? Here are two reasons First，it is a good way to show my love to my parentsBoth my parents are very busySo when I come back home early，Ill cook for themAfter they return，we sit together and enjoy the m

22、ealI can see them smile happily Second，it is a kind of creationI always try to cook different dishesWhen my new dish is praised by others，I feel proud I like cookingIt brings me a lot of fun 江西卷 中考真题 To：Emma Subject：Ask for your help Dear Emma， I have a problem and I need your helpMy parents are rea

23、lly strict and never let me do anything! For examplewhen I go out with my friends，my mom always asks，Where are you going? Who are you going with? My parents want to control everything I doI try to talk to them，but they dont listenThey say，This is our house and these are our rules Why is it so hard f

24、or them to understand me? Josh 假设你是 Emma，你的笔友 Josh 给你写了一封电子邮件，向你倾诉他在家里的一些烦恼。请根据来信和提示，给 Josh 回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法，再给出建议，并适当发挥。 提示：1内容要点：(1) 看法：在父母看来，我们仍是孩子；父母这样做是为了保护我们。 (2) 建议：给父母写信谈谈你的想法；主动帮你父母做些力所能及的事情。 2回信应包括以上所有提示的信息，做到行文连贯，不要逐字翻译。 3词数：不少于 80。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Josh， Thanks for your e-mailI have

25、ever had the same experienceI even had a fight with my parentsBut now，I understand them_ I hope this helps! Emma 名师解析 1试题解读 本次写作任务要求写一封电子邮件，具有鲜明的时代气息，属于应用文体裁。因格式已给出，因此本次写作的关键应放在结构的安排和语言的组织上。就邮件内容而言，本文要求写一封建议信。此题要点明晰，容易成文，因此考生可根据题目中的内容要点合理地整合信息，在表达上要注意句子衔接自然、语言流畅。 2写作信息要点 (1) 告诉 Josh 自己对他所面对问题的具体看法：在

26、父母看来，我们仍是孩子；父母这样做是为了保护我们。 (2) 给 Josh 提出解决问题的具体建议：给父母写信谈谈你的想法；主动帮你父母做些力所能及的事情。 (3) 自然地给出结尾。 标准范文 Dear Josh， Thanks for your e-mailI have ever had the same experienceI even had a fight with my parentsBut now，I understand themWe are growing up，but often，its hard for our parents to see thisTo them，we ar

27、e still children and they want to protect us Sometimes，its hard for you to talk to your parentsHeres an idea：Write your mother and father a letterIn the letter，tell your parents what you are thinking aboutThen maybe they will understand you betterAfter your parents read the letter，try to talk to the

28、mIn your free time，youd better do something you can to help your parentsFor example，you can help your parents with some housework Whats more，you can describe your friends to your parents and tell them more about you and your life I hope this helps! Emma 上海卷 中考真题 以“我为自己感到自豪”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文。(标点符号不占格

29、) (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)。 以下内容仅供参考： What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself? (Give an exampleexamples) Why are you proud of yourself? 名师解析 1试题解读 这篇中考书面表达是一则开放式作文，题干中仅提供了标题“我为自己感到自豪”，没有给出具体的写作内容，且从所给题目来看内容也比较宽泛，无疑给考生写作带来一定的困难。该书面表达有一定的难度，它需要考生充分发挥想象力，充分利用所提供参考的三个方面，找到

30、自己身上的闪光点，并结合实例说明自己能引以为豪的个性品质，从而构思出与众不同的优秀作文来。 标准范文Im proud of myself I am an outgoing boyHowever，one year ago，I was so shy that I dared not speak in publicAs a result，my classmates often laughed at meThat troubled me a lot，but I didnt know how to change myself Then，last year，my school was going to h

31、old the 60th anniversary celebrationMy teacher recommended me to be the host because of my sweet voiceThat was too terribleI wanted to give upBut my teacher encouraged me and helped me practice again and againThe moment cameWhen I faced so many people，I was still a little afraidI remembered my teach

32、ers words：Believe in yourself!So I took a deep breath and began my self challengeEverything went wellWhen my classmates congratulated to me，my eyes were filled with tears From then on，I havent been shy any moreI have been willing to take on challengesI am proud of myself 福建福州卷 中考真题 为满足人们日益增长的健身需求，我国

33、政府于 2009 年将每年的 8 月 8 日定为“全民健身日”。今年的“全民健身日”即将来临，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，某英文报纸举办了一场征文比赛。现在请你以“Lets Do Sports”为题写一篇短文，向该报投稿。 内容提示： Do you think it is important for everyone to do sports? What sports do you like? Why do you like itthem? Do you often do sports with your friends and parents? How often and how long

34、do you do sports? How do you feel after doing sports? 要求：1短文词数 80 左右； 2必须包括上述提示内容，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，可适当发挥； 3短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Lets Do Sports 名师解析 1试题解读 本文为典型的半开放式作文，以在“全民健身日”即将来临之际，呼吁人们参加体育活动为话题。此话题紧跟时代步伐，有较强的现实感，使考生很容易下笔。但如果想使自己的作品成为一篇考场佳作，考生必须在语言组织上多下工夫，注意高级词汇的选择、复杂句式的运用以及句子信息的有效整合。 2写作信

35、息要点 (1) 锻炼身体对于每个人来说都很重要。 (2) 你喜欢的运动及选择该运动的理由。 (3) 你平时运动的时间及运动后的感想。 标准范文Lets Do Sports I think its very important for everyone to do sportsI like sports because theyre not only good for my health but also good for my studyMy favorite sport is swimmingWhenever I am free，I will have a swim with my frie

36、nds or my parents in the swimming poolAfter swimming，I usually feel happy and relaxedWhats more，I can put more energy into my studySo lets do sports，and we will become stronger and stronger 江苏苏州卷 中考真题 假设在英语课上老师给你们欣赏了电影太空大灌篮的主题曲 I Believe I Can Fly。这是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲。请你根据以下要点以“I Believe I Can Fly”为题，用英语写一

37、篇短文，参加某英语杂志社的写作比赛。 内容要点： 1这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性； 2自信给人勇气尝试，使人成功； 3梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难； 4没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功； 5你的感悟(考生自拟，至少一点)。 注意： 1词数 90 左右。短文的开头为你写好，不计入总词数； 2参考词汇：自信 confidence(n)； 3短文不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 I Believe I Can Fly I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by RKelly_ 名师解析 1试题解读 这种给出内容要点的题型相对

38、来说是比较好写的，正常的写作步骤是：按照要点的顺序翻译，用适当的连接词连接，变换性地使用各种句型，长短参差，错落有致。本文应分两段写，1 至 4 条为第一段，第 5 条感悟，也就是一句话或两句话，单独成段。在写作过程中，要注意人称的使用，最好主语使用 We，不要与 he 或 you 混合用。 2写作信息要点 (1) 这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性； (2) 自信给人勇气尝试，使人成功； (3) 梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难； (4) 没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功； (5) 你的感悟 标准范文I Believe I Can Fly I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song

39、by RKellyThis song tells us that confidence is very importantWhen a person has confidence，he believes in himselfHe believes that he can and will succeed，and this gives him the courage to try new thingsDreams and confidence are what keep us going on in face of difficultiesNo one can achieve success w

40、ithout themIf you believe you can fly，then you can really fly some day I think I will never give up whenever I meet any difficultiesIll remember confidence is the promise for achieving success 湖北黄冈卷 中考真题 假如你是小刚，请谈谈你在学习中遇到的问题及解决的方法。 遇到的问题 1作业太多，休息时间太少；2压力太大，厌倦学习；3迷失自我，易怒、易生气 解决的方法 1劳逸结合，学会放松；2学会沟通，释放

41、压力；3学会学习、注重方法 要求：1围绕以上内容进行合理表述。 2所表述的内容必须包含表中的六个方面。 3文中请不要出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。 4词数不得少于 80，开头语已给出。(不计入词数) 提示词：too much，little，nervous，pressure，be tired of，lose，angry，relax，talk with，suggestion，make a plan，find out Our Steel Rose lost a chance to take part in the Womens World CupBut the players never gave u

42、pThey said they would try their best to improve themselves I always meet some problems in my study _ 名师解析 1试题解读 首先要读懂题目：(1) 谈谈你在学习中遇到的问题及解决的方法。(2) 所表述的内容必须包含表中的六个方面。(3) 提示词。对于此类文章，作者应该紧紧围绕提示词合理地组织句子，展开思路。构建文章结构：主要谈你在学习中遇到的问题及解决的方法，即表格中的六个方面；表格以上的文字只用来做例子，用来表达自己在失败面前不气馁的精神风貌。好的文章须具备以下三个条件：(1) 有话可说；(2

43、) 句式多变；(3) 用词新颖。 2写作信息要点 (1) 作业太多(提示词 too much)，休息时间少(little) (2) 压力太大(pressure)，(nervous)厌倦学习(be tired of) (3) 迷失自我(lose myself)，易怒、易生气(angry) (4) 劳逸结合，学会放松(relax) (5) 学会沟通(talk with，suggestion)，释放压力 (6) 学会学习、注重方法(make a plan，find out) 标准范文 Our Steel Rose lost a chance to take part in the Womens Wo

44、rld CupBut the players never gave upThey said they would try their best to improve themselves I always meet some problems in my studyEvery day I have too much homework to do，while I have too little time for restI feel nervous because of too much pressureSometimes I really tired of studyingI even dont know what to doI think I have lost myselfThis feeling makes me angry easily What should