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1、,高考复习-书面表达评析及指导,How to improve the writing skills,If you are the teacher 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:1.我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步；2.但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法；3.今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信；4.我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化；5.如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。,注意：1.词数100左右
2、；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。June 8,2008 Dear Peter,Im very glad to receive your letter.I will tell you something about my English study and hometown.,字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。,samples of student work,Bad sample,卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得10分,samples of student work,read and write,find it hard,fluent English
3、 to write,Great changes,roads,had taken place in my hometown,buildings,widened,It will be wonderful when,you come to China if you are free,show you around,I will be glad to,未用黑色水笔；语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分11分,samples of student work,learn,of the teachers and my,progress,read and write,it hard to learn,h
4、ard work.,write letters in fluent English,found,had become,Welcome to China if you have time,show you around,语言素质 较好;基本功不差;语句仍有毛病；得15分.,samples of student work,progress,well,widened,are,词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得17分.,samples of student work,roads,My hometown is becoming more and more,影响书面表达得分的因素：,“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结
5、构错误、中式英语等，如：My hometown had big change,build many houses,My hometown has great changes.,语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”,Great changes had taken place in my hometown there.For example,many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.,3.If you get to China that have time,me with you look my hometown.4.I wi
6、ll welcome to you.“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如：Under my teacher and classmates all help to me,.,I hope youl l get a chance to come to China and Ill show you around my hometown if you are free.,Welcome to China.,With the help of my teachers and classmates,没有使用高级词汇和复杂句1.I will visit my hometown
7、with you.2.If you have time,I will take you to travel around my hometown.,I will show you around my hometown if you are free.,书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！,审题不认真，要点有所遗漏,1.彻底理解题意，看准答题要求（包括字数要求）。2.把内容要点在稿纸上列成提纲。3.连词成句，连句成文。4.成文后认真检查，确信无一遗漏。,注意：,完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结
8、构和词汇方面有些错误，但 为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,书面表达评分最高标准（第五档 21-25分）,One possible version:June 8,2008 Dear Peter,Im very glad to receive your letter.I will tell you something about my English study and hometown.It is six years since I began to learn English.With the help of my
9、teachers and classmates,I have made some progress in English.However I still find English hard to learn,such as some difficult idioms which made me confused.No matter how hard it is,I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.,Not long ago I returned to my hometown and foun
10、d great changes had taken place there.Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.My hometown is getting modern and more and more beautiful.I hope if you have a chance to come to China and I ll show you around my hometown when you are on leave.Best wishes,Li Hua,My Suggestions:,1.beaut
11、iful words and expressions2.proper sentence structures3.connections between sentences4.proper complex sentences5.writing models,Six steps for writing(写作六步骤）,Dear Smith,Li Hua,Yours,22,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.Youre right.Quite a few chang
12、es have taken place in our school.On one side of the road is a new teaching building;On the other side,where the playground used to be,stands another new building-our library.The playground is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and round the school.I hope that you will
13、 be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,1.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.(幸亏)2.We all think he is a great man.（评价很高）3.Suddenly
14、 I thought out a good idea.（occur）,Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.,I.怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him.,A good idea occurred to me.,/A good idea suddenly struck me.,4.The students there neednt pay for their books.（免费的）5.She went to Australia in order to study music.（purpo
15、se）6.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.（the 比较级，the 比较级）,She went to Australia for the purpose of studying music.,The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.,Books are free for the students there.,II.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。How happy I was when I received your letter!It wa
16、s this young boy who helped the old granny.Only in this way can you solve this problem.They read while walking or riding on a bus.,1.感叹句,2.强调句,3.倒装句,4.省略句,I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.Lets come to the main teaching building,at the back of which stands th
17、e school library.Thats what I should do.Time passed quickly before we knew it.,5、with短语,6、定语从句,7、各种名词性从句,8、各种状语从句,III.常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：2.表示转折关系 但是，然而，相反：,whats more;besides;also;moreover;in addition,but;however;yet;instead;on the other hand;on the contrary.,3.表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以:4.表示条件关系 如果
18、，只要:除非:否则:,since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;,if;on condition(that);as long as,unless,or else,5.表示时间关系 当 的时候:when;while 在之后:after 在之前:before 直到:until 直到才:notuntil 一就:as soon as 后来，然后:later;afterwards 不久:soon 近来:lately;recently 自从:since 从那时起:from then on,6.表示特定的顺序关系 首先:firstly 最主要的:a
19、bove all 其次:secondly 然后:then;next 最后:finally;in the end7.换一种方法表述 换句话说:in other words;that is to say;,8.进行举例说明 例如，比如:9.用于陈述事实,for instance;for example;like;such as that is to say,namely,actually,and so on,believe it or not,to tell you the truth,for this reason,实际上:in fact;actually;as a matter of fact
20、跟你说实话:to tell you the truth,10.对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说:,on the whole;in short;all in all;in general;in a word,finally,in conclusion,generally speaking,as you know,in the end,其它常用到的副词 therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;,12.表示结果：thus,therefore,so,as a result
21、,seeing that,luckily,unfortunately 13.表示强调：above all,indeed,surely,certainly,of course,after all,without any delay,at least,at most,most important,undoubtedly,6.表示特定的顺序关系 首先:firstly 最主要的:above all 其次:secondly 然后:then;next 最后:finally;in the end7.换一种方法表述 换句话说:in other words;that is to say;,Practice,La
22、dies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!,This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor.,However,it has changed a lot since 1978,and has been developing very fast.,People here live a much better life than before.,书面表达：,Now it is taking,o
23、n a new look.,In the past,the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school.,But now it has been rebuilt and,which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.,All the school-age children can study here.,Whats more,they enjoy free education.,May you enjoy you
24、r stay here,the newly built teaching building,/May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,假定你是李华,你的一位内地朋友张贵来信向你咨询如何才能学好英语，请你根据下列要点写回信.要点:1.学英语的意义；2.参加英语口语学习班;3.看英文书刊、电视；4.学唱英文歌曲；5.与以英语为母语的人交朋友。,Writing,注意：1.词数100-120左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。November 26,2008 Dear Zhang,Im glad to receive you
25、r letter asking for my advice on how to learn English well._ Best wishes,Li Hua,to take a spoken English course;read more English newspapers and magazines;watch more English TV programmes;to learn and sing English songs;make more English friends/make friends with the people who speak English as thei
26、r first language/mother tongue,Brainstorming,评析：南京市三模书面表达,在高中即将毕业之际，给你的学弟学妹们写一封信。内容包括：1.高中三年的收获 2.在此期间你的遗憾 3.大学生活即将面临的挑战 4.对高一、高二学弟学妹们的建议,审 题,1.高中三年的收获-(In the past three years,)时态:现在完成时2.在此期间你的遗憾-(后悔)时态:一般过去时3.大学生活即将面临的挑战-时态:一般将来时4.对学弟学妹的建议-时态:一般现在时,存在问题:,整篇文章时态混乱一篇幅分布不均匀(第二要点:遗憾。很多同学一带而过，忽略了对这一点的描述）主谓不一致,Thank you for your listening,Goodbye!,
