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1、What makes a good essay?,I.The essay,A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph,some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.,Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1Body Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3Concluding paragraph,To many students,school life is boring and tir
2、ing.However,I find my school life meaningful and colorful.,Supporting Paragraphs(Body)Paragraphs,Conclusion PartPersonally,in conclusion,in brief,From what has been discussed above,we may draw the conclusion that.In summary,it is wiser.,II.The paragraph,What makes a good paragraph?,1.A good paragrap
3、h is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences.,There are different kinds of bee.Some live in large groups like the honey bee,and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks.Other species make their nests in holes in the ground.There are also varieties that do not live in gro
4、ups at all,topic sentence,Wherever you go in our school,you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers.Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles.A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water.,just like a garden.,Our schoo
5、l is,just like a garden.,Our school is,2.A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.,I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons.First of all,English is spoken by a large number of people,and these people are the most widely spread across the wor
6、ld in a great many countries.Secondly,English is the most widely used language on the internet.It has become an on-line language.Thirdly,the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful.Lastly,Linking words help you to connect ideas and sentences,so that people can
7、follow your ideas.,Adding information：besides,what is more,also,as well,moreover,furthermore,in addition,Giving a reason or result:because(of),since,as for,so,thus,therefore,as a result,so that,Giving examples:for instance,for example,like,such as,on the whole,Summarising:,in short,all in all,at las
8、t,in a word,finally,in the end,Contrasting ideas：but,however,although,despite,nevertheless,while,whereas,3.A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.,e.g.What a kind boy he is!How disappointed he was!,感叹句,强调句,e.g.It was this young boy that helped the old granny.I do hope you can come if
9、possible.,e.g.Only in this way can you solve this problem.There comes the police car.Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.,e.g.They read while walking or riding on a bus.Come to me if necessary.,e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.
10、,倒装句,省略句,with短语,e.g.In my opinion,cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.Lets come to the main teaching building,at the back of which stands the school library.,定语从句,e.g.Thats what I should do.We should do a favor to whoever needs help at present.,各种名词性从句,e.g.Time pa
11、ssed quickly before we knew it.The moment we reached the farm,we got down to harvesting.So long as we work harder at our lessons,well catch up sooner or later.,各种状语从句,1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）2.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the
12、 newspaper.(使用强调句型),What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,3.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词)4.They sang and laughed as they went
13、 back to school.(使用V-ing形式)5.I wont believe what he says.（no matter what状语从句）6.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（祈使句+and）,Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing,they went back to school.,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make
14、 rapid progress.,Summary:,A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph,some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.,A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.,A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.,A good paragraph is on
15、e with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.,Lets improve it:,Good afternoon,everyone!The topic of my speech today is“My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”.Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion.Somestudents live a very expensive life._._,they hope to look smart and s
16、pecial._,they want to win others admiration and respect.In addition,it makes them feel cool._,we students should hold the right sense of values.We should practice thrift in our daily life._,it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school._,it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable.Thank you for listening!,the reasons why they do so are as follows B.firstly C.last but not least D.whats more E.as far as I am concerned F.Secondly,A,B,C,D,E,F,
