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1、Task-writing,How to write a summary,读写任务评分原则(assessing principles),1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 短文概括5分 主题写作 20分。2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
2、,评分标准(assessing criteria),1.概括的准确性。,语言简洁明了，能客观、准确、全面地转述所给文字材料。,2.语言的规范性。,语言合乎语法，地道自然。（无中国式英语）,3.内容的合适性。,选材必需切题；内容符合写作要求；论据能证明论点,Identify the style of the passage,Skills of writing a summary?,Skill1:Omit(省略)the details Skill2:Omit the examplesSkill3:Use general(概括性)words instead of specific(具体的)words
3、 Skill4:Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech(间接引语，第三人称),Skill 1 Omit the details,examplesEX:Last Sunday,I went fishing.I went fishing.,I met a friend.,1).Yesterday,I met an old friend on the way to the bus station.,2).She bought a lot of vegetables such as cabbage,carrots,cucumbers a
4、nd tomatoes.,She bought a lot of vegetables.,1).He likes swimming,running,playing football,basketball and so on.,Skill 2 Use general(概括性)words instead of specific(具体的)wordsEX:In the following six hours,I caught over 10 fish.I caught some fish.,He likes sports.,2).She bought a few copies of China Dai
5、ly,English Weekly and People Daily.,She bought some newspapers.,Patience is the key to success.,Skill 3 Paraphrase,The key to success is patience.,Patience leads to success.,Patience is the secret of success.,Patience is very important to success.,The secret of success is patience.,When Sam first go
6、t to his boarding school with his parents,he was very happy.He thought he would be able to go home every weekend.When he was told he would not,he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the t
7、erm.He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave.He was then taken to the dorm,where he saw other children happy.He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home.He started feeling homesick(想家)and wanted to go home as soon as possible.He got sick soon
8、because he could not eat the school food.He could not concentrate in the classroom.All he could think was being at home with his family.He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents.He was angry and felt lonely.He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him
9、in a boarding school.,第一类：记叙文,例文(1)谁做了什么？Sam got to a boarding school and he felt homesick.(2)结果如何？He got sick.He was angry with his parents and felt lonely.,Summary,Sam could not get used to the life of the boarding school,and he thought his parents hated him and left him in it,which made him sick,
10、angry and lonely.（31words）,Summary,Alan was given more money by the clerk mistakenly.In order not to put the clerk intotrouble,he returned the money.Finally,he was praised for his honesty.,巩固练习,第二类：说明文,例文“对象+性质功能+利好”模式,The writer introduces the idea of a balloon robot,especially how it helps to guid
11、e people to their destination without being connected to the Internet,from which we know it may become popular in the future.,“问题+解决方法”模式 The passage tells us how to be a good friend,including listening more to friends talking,offering help when necessary,staying with them and making plans together.
12、,巩固练习,1.we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning,Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit,2.build our bodies and become much healthier,3.have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day,例文 第三类 议论文,getting up early is a good habit and
13、try our best to keep it,例文,The passage tries to tell us that getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot,including a better memory,healthier body and better preparation for the day.,1.work keeps people busy,away from loneliness,work is helpful to health,2.work serves a
14、s a bridge between man and reality,3.work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement,巩固训练 第三类 议论文,The author highlights the effect of work on peoples health,because it can rid one ofloneliness,and make one feel successful and proud of himself,which always contributes to a good body.,巩固练习,
