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1、,怎样写好书信体作文 作文讲评课Welcome to our class!,情景作文：假如你是湖南某中学学生张强，你与一名叫李华的地震灾区孤儿结成了一对一助学对象。为了和他结交朋友，并在学习上给予他一定帮助，请给他写一封信，信的内容包括；1 你个人的基本情况（年龄，爱好，特长，理想）；2 向他介绍你的学习经验（至少两条）；3 欢迎他来你校参观。词数100左右。,Yesterdays homework:,佳句欣赏:,Im a 17-year-old boy.(陈彬）I think it can make me become stronger and improve the friendship
2、with my classmates.(胡丹）3.When I grow up,I want to be a boss that can help those poor people.(唐卓）4.I often go to the gym to work out.（方厅）5.If you have time to visit my school,we will certainly have a good time together.(陈海强）6.Having a happy life with my family is my dream.（郭婧）7.,写作中出现的错误:,1.拼写错误：come
3、 ture belive frist,2.谓语动词错误：Im like，I like play,3.修饰错误：I very like;Im happy very much.;I play basketball very good.,4.名称单复数错误：I am a students.,5.非谓语动词错误：I think work hard is very important.,6.句子结构混乱：如 There are many students like football.,Task One:Evaluate your writing(评分),学考情景作文评分标准：满分15分。其中内容占12分
4、，形式占3分，按四档计分第一档15分：文章内容完整，语言形式正确；第二档1411分：文章内容较完整，语言形式错误不多；第三档105分：文章内容不完整，语言形式错误较多；第四档40分：写了个别词语或基本没有作答。,Task Two:Better your writing,一）审题（写什么？）,1.文体,英语书信常见格式：,称呼（Dear),正文,结尾语(Best wishes),谦称(Yours)署名(),开头语,书信体常用语：,常用开头语：,1.Thank you for your kind letter.2.I was so pleased to receive your letter.3.
5、How is everything going?4.What a surprise it was to hear from you.5.Im writing to tell ask you.6.I was very sorry to hear that.7.,常用结尾句：,1.Good luck to you.2.Take good care of yourself and write soon.3.Please remember me to your parents.4.Im afraid I have to stop now,but I will write again.5.Im look
6、ing forward to hearing from you.6.Best wishes!7.,Task Two:Better your writing,一）审题（写什么？）,1.文体,2.要点,3.字数,5.如果有提示词，要尽量用上。,二）写提纲（怎么写？）,1.写成几个自然段？,2.每段写什么？,3.文章主要用什么时态？,4.可能用到的句式，句型，词组和短语。特别是可以 用哪些连接词来连接？,三）修改成文（包括标点符号）,(总-分-总）,常用连接词（整体性，连贯性）,Firstlysecondlythirdly,For one thing,For another,On the one h
7、and,on the other hand.,besides,whats more,in addition,in a word,in my opinion,as far as I know,as we all know,however,generally speaking,otherwise,therefore,after all,of course,in conclusion,to tell you the truth,Task Three Correct and evaluate again,Task Four Group work,范文：,Dear Li Hua,Its really m
8、y pleasure to make friends with you.Im Zhang Qiang and Im 17 years old.I like playingfootball and reading.Im good at writing and playingthe piano.But I want to be a writer after graduatingfrom university.To get good marks,firstly,I think listening carefullyin class is very important.Secondly,we shou
9、ld askthe teachers questions we have in time.Finally,getting rich knowledge out of class is also necessary.I hope these suggestions can help you in your study.,Welcome to our school if you have time.I will show you around our school.Also I can play a piece of piano music for you.Im looking forward t
10、o hearing from you.Best wishes!Yours,Zhang Qiang,Task Five Practice,假如你是李平，你的好友王华最近病倒了，并由此而耽误了学习。请你给他写封信安慰他，并给他提一些保持身体健康的建议（至少3条）。词数100左右。,学业水平考试情景作文写作要求：,1.能用文字及图表提供信息并进行简单描述；2.能根据上下文进行简单的翻译；3.能写出常见体裁的应用文；4.能描述人物或事件，并进行简单的评论；5.能填写有关个人情况的表格。,Task six Summarise,文体要辨清；,段落要分明；,时态用准确；,要点写齐全；,发挥应适度；,字数达要求。,中心思想亮出来；,主题句子站出来；,句子结构写准确；,句式变化连接词；,漂亮书法秀出来；,学考写作牛起来！,Practice makes perfect.You can make it!,Homework for today:To finish the writing above.,Thank you!,
