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1、How to beautify your essay?,Lexicon Chunks词块写作(人物描写&理由陈述),Can you translate this sentence into beautiful Chinese?,If you dont leave me,Ill stay by your side until life ends.,If you dont leave me,Ill stay by your side until life ends.,你如果不离开我，我就和你同归于尽。（四级水平）你若不离不弃，我必生死相依。（六级水平）问世间情为何物？直教人生死相许。（八级水平）天
2、地合，乃该与君绝。（专家水平）你在或不爱，爱就在那里，不增不减。（活佛水平）,Can you translate this sentence into beautiful English?,旅行是我的最爱。,旅行是我的最爱。,Travel is my favorite.,Theres nothing more appealing to me than travel.,I am crazy about travel.,I have a deep love for travel.,I am(so)fond of travel.,I take a keen interest in travel.,I
3、 love travel more than anything else.,Lexicon Chunks词块,义工旅行是由国外传到中国的一种非常流行的旅行方式，指青年旅行者在青年旅舍做义工换取免费食宿并借工作空余时间在当地游玩。假设你是李明，今年暑期想以这种方式到丽江去游玩。请你根据自己的情况写一封自荐信给当地的青年旅社，申请一份为期一个月的义工工作。要求：1.简要介绍个人情况；2.简述自荐承担何种工作及理由（不少于两条）；3.词数不少于120。,Lijiang,Dear Sir,Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming.I am a s
4、tudent from the middle school.I am writing this letter for volunteer travel in your hostel in LiJiang.I am kind,outgoing and humorous.I like making friends.I want to be a cleaner in your hostel this summer for a month because I am hard-working and often do the cleaning at home.I can make all your ro
5、oms clean.Other people will like working with me because I am helpful.And I enjoy drawing cartoons so I think I can make beautiful postcards on the wall to attract tourists and you can get extra money,too.I hope you can reply to my letter.I will wait for you day by day.Li Ming,How to write a letter
6、of application?自荐信,Dear Sir/Madam,Im writing this letter to apply for the position of.(advertised in.).,(personal informationBODY&reasons for applying for the post),I would appreciate it if I hear from yousoon.,With many thanks,Yours sincerely XXX,Article Frame自荐信框架,Lets make a difference!,Step OneR
7、econstruct the frame,Dear Sir,Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming.I am a student from the middle school.BODY.I hope your can reply to my letter.I will wait for you day by day.Li Ming,Dear Sir/Madam,I am applying for the position of volunteer cleaner(advertised on the website)in your hos
8、tel for a month this summer.,I would appreciate it if I hear from you soon.,With many thanks Li Ming,Step TwoBeautify the BODY,I am kind,outgoing and humorous.I like making friends.,_ and _,I _ making friends and my _ _ _ has gained me great _.,Easy-going,open-minded,修饰人的合成词peace-lovinggood-lookings
9、trong-willedwarm-heartedlong-hairedleft-handed,I am kind,outgoing and humorous.I like making friends.,Easy-going and open-minded,I _ making friends and my _ _ _ has gained me great _.,enjoy,am fond of.am interested in.am keen on.take an interest in.Nothing can delight me so much as.I love.more than
10、anything else,I am kind,outgoing and humorous.I like making friends.,Easy-going and open-minded,I enjoy making friends and my _ _ _ has gained me great _.,sense of humor,荣誉感a sense of pride责任感a sense of responsibility方向感a sense of direction,I am kind,outgoing and humorous.I like making friends.,Easy
11、-going and open-minded,I enjoy making friends and my sense of humor has gained me great _.,popularity,gain confidencegain strengthgain experiencegain weight:(,Other people will like working with me because I am helpful.,_ _ teamwork,Im _ that I can _ _ well with my workmates as Im always _ to helpan
12、d is _ of dealing with different situations.,As for,至于As toAs regardsRegardingWhen it comes to.,Other people will like working with me because I am helpful.,_ _ teamwork,Im _ that I can _ _ well with my workmates as Im always _ to helpand is _ of dealing with different situations.,As for,convinced,I
13、m(fully)convinced that.(Of this)Im sure that.Im(quite)positive that.You have good reason to believe that.You can count on it that.,Other people will like working with me because I am helpful.,As for teamwork,Im convinced that I can _ _ well with my workmates as Im always _ to helpand is _ of dealing
14、 with different situations.,get on/along,willing,be willing to dobe glad/pleased/ready/content to doshow willingness to donever hesitate to do,Other people will like working with me because I am helpful.,As for teamwork,Im convinced that I can get on/along well with my workmates as Im always willing
15、 to helpand is _ of dealing with different situations.,capable,be capable of doing.be able/qualified to do.be fit/suitable for.be the right person for.have the ability to do.have no difficulty(in)doing.,I want to be a cleaner.because I am hard-working and often do the cleaning at home.I can make all
16、 your rooms clean.,Im _ that I am _ _ this job _ _ the fact that Im _ a(n)_/_ and well-organized person as never leaves my room in _ _,confident,(quite)sure(fully)convinced,capable of,fit forsuitable forqualified for,due to,industrious diligent,such,a mess,I want to be a cleaner.because I am hard-wo
17、rking and often do the cleaning at home.I can make all your rooms clean.,Im confident that I am capable of this job due to the fact that Im such an industrious well-organized person as never leaves my room in a mess.,leave sb.让我们陷入困境leave us in trouble把门开着leave the door open,让她站在外面leave her standing
18、 outside把包忘在公车上leave the bag on the bus,I want to be a cleaner.because I am hard-working and often do the cleaning at home.I can make all your rooms clean.,Im confident that I am capable of this job due to the fact that Im such an industrious well-organized person as never leaves my room in a mess.,
19、.due to/owing to the fact that.for the reason that.The reasons for this can be listed as follows.Therere several reasons accounting for.The reason why.is that.,And I enjoy drawing cartoons so I think I can make beautiful postcards on the wall to attract tourists and you can get extra money,too.,On _
20、 of that,I might bring get extra profit to the hostel for _ _ that I am _ in drawing cartoons,which means I can make beautiful postcards for _ to tourists.Isnt it _?,top,BesidesWhats moreMoreoverIn addition,And I enjoy drawing cartoons so I think I can make beautiful postcards on the wall to attract
21、 tourists and you can get extra money,too.,On _ of that,I might bring get extra profit to the hostel for _ _ that I am _ in drawing cartoons,which means I can make beautiful postcards for _ to tourists.Isnt it _?,top,the reason,expert,擅长be good atdo well inbe expert/skilled/accomplished in,And I enj
22、oy drawing cartoons so I think I can make beautiful postcards on the wall to attract tourists and you can get extra money,too.,On _ of that,I might bring get extra profit to the hostel for _ _ that I am _ in drawing cartoons,which means I can make beautiful postcards for _ to tourists.Isnt it _?,top
23、,the reason,expert,sale,fantastic,Step ThreeLets appreciate our work!,Dear Sir,Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming.I am a student from the middle school.I am writing this letter for volunteer travel in your hostel in LiJiang.I am kind,outgoing and humorous.I like making friends.I want t
24、o be a cleaner in your hostel this summer for a month because I am hard-working and often do the cleaning at home.I can make all your rooms clean.Other people will like working with me because I am helpful.And I enjoy drawing cartoons so I think I can make beautiful postcards on the wall to attract
25、tourists and you can get extra money,too.I hope you can reply to my letter.I will wait for you day by day.Li Ming,Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing this letter to apply for the position of volunteer cleaner(advertised on the website)in your hostel for a month this summer.Easy-going and open-minded,I enjoy
26、 making friends and my sense of humor has gained me great popularity.As for teamwork,Im convinced that I can get along well with my workmates as Im always willing to help and is capable of dealing with different situations.,Im confident that I am capable of this job due to the fact that Im such an i
27、ndustrious and well-organized person as never leaves my room in a mess.On top of that,I might bring get extra profit to the hostel for the reason that I am expert in drawing cartoons,which means I can make beautiful postcards for sale to tourists.Isnt it fantastic?I would appreciate it if I hear fro
28、m you soon.Yours sincerelyLi Ming,Show your stuff!Work in teams and beautify Passage B on your paper.,Dear Manager,I want to be a tour guide at Lijiang Youth Hostel this coming summer.I want to introduce my self first.I have just finished high school.I plan to spend one month in Lijiang.I am confide
29、nt and you can trust me.I always have new ideas and I can do things well.Im also kind and out-going.I speak both Chinese and English well.I like making friends and I love changes.I think I can be a good tour guide because I am good at languages.Besides,I never lose my way,and a good guide must have it.At the same time,I can learn from foreigners and teach them Chinese culture.Please write to me soon.Thank you.Yours,Li Ming,Show time!,A teachers version,HOMEWORKRewrite your essay.,Thank you!,
