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1、写作提分三要素,内容满足阅卷要求大作文 段落,关注新浪微博：韩苏_suger,考研真题的要求,2013 Part BWrite an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay you should1)describe the drawing briefly2)explain its intended meaning,and3)give your commentsYou should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points),关注新浪微博：韩苏_suger,大
2、作文的段落,描述图片,说明现象,分析原因,建议对策,关注新浪微博：韩苏_suger,大作文的段落,描述图片,方法：格式化！,方法：格式化！,不要拘泥于具体事物,要从具体升华到抽象,不要纠结于图片现象,要透过现象引出本质,大作文的段落,描述图片,为什么要提升本质,大作文的段落,描述图片,目的：引出主题,描述图片的五种句式,套话一：引入描述：As is vividly depicted in the picture,描述内容.引出主题：Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is 主题内容.,描述图片的五种句式,套话二：引入描述：As is s
3、ymbolically illustrated in the cartoon,描述内容.引出主题：The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed主题内容.,描述图片的五种句式,套话三：引入描述：As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal,描述内容.引出主题：The purpose of the cartoonist is to show us 主题内容.,描述图片的五种句式,套话四：引入描述：As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon,
4、描述内容.引出主题：From the portrayal,we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message:主题内容.,描述图片的五种句式,套话五：引入描述：As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon,描述内容.引出主题：The aim of the portrayal is to illustrate 主题内容.,描述方法：,完全倒装1.介词首置,完全倒装1.介词首置,As is vividly depicted in the picture,beside the t
5、able are two elderstwo elders are beside the table S v o,描述方法：,完全倒装1.介词首置2.分词首置,完全倒装2.分词首置,As is vividly depicted in the picture,refusing the job is a girla girl is refusing the job S v o,描述方法：,完全倒装1.介词首置2.分词首置3.There be,完全倒装3.There be,As is vividly depicted in the picture,there is a traveler,描述方法：,
6、完全倒装定语从句1.who v o2.which v o,定语从句,As is vividly depicted in the picture,beside the table are two elders，who are waiting for their chiidren,定语从句,As is vividly depicted in the picture,refusing the job is a girl，who has graduated from university,定语从句,As is vividly depicted in the picture,there is a tra
7、veler，who is coming for the traditional culture of china,描述方法：,完全倒装定语从句独立主格doing sth,独立主格,As is vividly depicted in the picture,beside the table are two elders，who are waiting for their chiidren，looking at the empty room,独立主格,As is vividly depicted in the picture,refusing the job is a girl，who has g
8、raduated from university，expecting for better one.,独立主格,As is vividly depicted in the picture,there is a traveler，who is coming for the traditional culture of china，finding that there are only modern buildings,大作文图片描述之主题内容,大作文六类主题,（1）人:健康,好写,physical health 生理健康 mental fitness 心理健康 keep optimistic 保
9、持乐观 pessimistic 悲观的 commit suicide 自杀 do physical exercises 进行体育锻炼 junk food 垃圾食品 well-balanced diet 均衡饮食 infectious diseases 传染病 anxiety 焦虑；渴望；挂念 despise 轻视，鄙视 disturbed 扰乱的envious 嫉妒 admire 钦佩 esteem 尊重grieved 伤心的 impatient 没有耐心的 courteous 礼貌 diligent 勤奋,好写,（2）人:成长,好写,generation gap 代沟 the old/age
10、d/elders/elderly,senior citizens 老年人independence 独立 persistence 坚持 doting care 溺爱 spoil 溺爱 success 成功 achievement 成就 成功 triumph 胜利 attainment 成就 conquer 征服 surmount 克服 acquire 获得 innovation 创新 striving spirit 奋斗精神 determined spirit 拼搏精神 outlook of life 人生观 confidence 信心,difficulty 困难 challenge 挑战 cr
11、isis 危机 employment 就业cooperation/teamwork 合作 team spirit 团队精神 pursue 追求 satisfy 满足 thirsty for 渴望 yearn for 渴望 bravery 勇气 indulge 放任，纵容 inspire 鼓舞 stimulate 激励 tolerate 容忍 opportunity 机会 chance 机会 choice 选择,（3）社会：环境,好写,contaminate 污染 environmental protection 环境保护 keep ecological balance 保持生态平衡 susta
12、inable development strategy 可持续发展战略 save the energy 节约能源 resource 资源reduce the emission of greenhouse gases 减少温室气体排放（减排）greenhouse effect 温室效应 clean renewable energy 清洁可再生能源low carbon economy 低碳经济 disaster 灾难 catastrophe 灾难 deforestation 滥砍滥伐 desertification 沙漠化 water and soil erosion 水土流失 sandstorm
13、 沙尘暴 snowstorm 雪灾 typhoon 台风 flood 洪水 earthquake 地震,（3）社会：环境,好写,contaminate 污染 environmental protection 环境保护 keep ecological balance 保持生态平衡 sustainable development strategy 可持续发展战略 save the energy 节约能源 resource 资源reduce the emission of greenhouse gases 减少温室气体排放（减排）greenhouse effect 温室效应 clean renewa
14、ble energy 清洁可再生能源low carbon economy 低碳经济 disaster 灾难 catastrophe 灾难 deforestation 滥砍滥伐 desertification 沙漠化 water and soil erosion 水土流失 sandstorm 沙尘暴 snowstorm 雪灾 typhoon 台风 flood 洪水 earthquake 地震,（4）社会：责任,好写,责任：duty/responsibility责任感：sense of responsibility承担：shoulder/assume/undertake逃避：avoid/shun/
15、shirk奉献：devote/devotion/dedicate/dedication职业道德：professional ethics欺诈行为：dishonest behaviors伪劣产品：fake commodities 虐待：abusemistreat,maltreat,ill-treat(ment)赡养：do good to,care,look after,take care of,financially support 扭转趋势：reverse the trend,（5）文化：好,好写,cultural exchange 文化交流cultural integration/blendi
16、ng 文化融合multi-culture,mosaic culture,pluralistic culture 多元文化preserve and cherish 保存珍惜 absorb its essence 取其精华cross-cultural 跨文化的 cultural differences 文化差异diversity 多样性 tradition 传统 treasure 财富 civilization 文明 mainstream 主流 diploma 学历,（6）文化：坏,好写,去其糟粕：resist its dark side 学术抄袭：academic plagiarism偶像崇拜：
17、idol worship 上网成瘾：web addiction数码产品：digital products 电子游戏：electronic games手机入网：mobile-phone subscription 手机短信：text message电子媒体:electronic media 大众媒体:mass media 流行文化：popular culture 反智主义:anti-intellectualism,（4）社会：责任,好写,责任：duty/responsibility责任感：sense of responsibility承担：shoulder/assume/undertake逃避：a
18、void/shun/shirk奉献：devote/devotion/dedicate/dedication职业道德：professional ethics欺诈行为：dishonest behaviors伪劣产品：fake commodities 虐待：abusemistreat,maltreat,ill-treat(ment)赡养：do good to,care,look after,take care of,financially support 扭转趋势：reverse the trend,引入主题,As is vividly depicted in the picture,beside
19、the table are two elders，who are waiting for their chiidren，looking at the empty room.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that the young men should take the responsibilty of take care of their old parents(51),（2）人:成长,好写,generation gap 代沟 the old/aged/elders/elderly,senior citizens 老年人i
20、ndependence 独立 persistence 坚持 doting care 溺爱 spoil 溺爱 success 成功 achievement 成就 成功 triumph 胜利 attainment 成就 conquer 征服 surmount 克服 acquire 获得 innovation 创新 striving spirit 奋斗精神 determined spirit 拼搏精神 outlook of life 人生观 confidence 信心,difficulty 困难 challenge 挑战 crisis 危机 employment 就业cooperation/team
21、work 合作 team spirit 团队精神 pursue 追求 satisfy 满足 thirsty for 渴望 yearn for 渴望 bravery 勇气 indulge 放任，纵容 inspire 鼓舞 stimulate 激励 tolerate 容忍 opportunity 机会 chance 机会 choice 选择,引入主题,As is vividly depicted in the picture,refusing the job is a girl，who has graduated from university，expecting for better one.S
22、imple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is the phenomenon that,引入主题,Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is the phenomenon that the youngsters who want to acquire the great achievement must have the determined spirit.(65),（5）文化：好,好写,cultural exchange 文化交流cultural integration/blending
23、 文化融合multi-culture,mosaic culture,pluralistic culture 多元文化preserve and cherish 保存珍惜 absorb its essence 取其精华cross-cultural 跨文化的 cultural differences 文化差异diversity 多样性 tradition 传统 treasure 财富 civilization 文明 mainstream 主流 diploma 学历,（6）文化：坏,好写,去其糟粕：resist its dark side 学术抄袭：academic plagiarism偶像崇拜：id
24、ol worship 上网成瘾：web addiction数码产品：digital products 电子游戏：electronic games手机入网：mobile-phone subscription 手机短信：text message电子媒体:electronic media 大众媒体:mass media 流行文化：popular culture 反智主义:anti-intellectualism,引入主题,As is vividly depicted in the picture,there is a traveler，who is coming for the traditiona
25、l culture of china，finding that there are only modern buildings.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that,引入主题,Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that we must take practically actions to preserve and cherish our traditional culture when our nation absorb the essence of fo
26、reigns(60),2012,2012As is vividly depicted in the picture,in front of the falling bottle are two boys，who have different attitudes to this crisis,one crying and sighing,the other trying and saving.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that if someone wants to acquire the achievement in t
27、he future,he must conquer himself with the striving spirit and the determined spirit which can help him surmount the crisis descrbed as the picture.(75),2011,2011As is vividly depicted in the picture,on the boat are two young men，who throw the garbage,rubbish and other things into the waters,paying
28、no attention to the result of what they do.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that if all of us pollute the environment,which is the only home,we will bring ourselves the disaster and catastrophe.(66),2010,2010As is vividly depicted in the picture,in the pot are so many elements of cu
29、lture，which are coming from china and other foreign countries,blending together into a big delicious meal.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that if we want to absorb the essence of foreign culture,which is so popular in the world,we should preserve and cherish our traditional culture
30、.（69）,2009,2009As is vividly depicted in the picture,in the enormous net are so many people，who are communicating with each other,keeping themselves away from talking in the way of face to face.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that if we want to acquire the achievements in the futur
31、e,we must conquer himself with the striving spirit and the determined spirit and get out of the net to confront the real world.（77）,2008,2008As is vividly depicted in the picture,on the road are two persons，who are cooperating to running ahead,although each of them has only one leg.Simple as it is,w
32、hat the picture conveys to us is that if someone wants to acquire the achievement in the future,he must conquer himself with the striving spirit and the team work which can help him surmount the challenge descrbed as the picture.(71),2007,2007As is vividly depicted in the picture,in front of the goa
33、l are two persons，who are playing foot on the ground,all of them having no self-confident.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that if someone wants to acquire the achievement in the future,he must conquer himself with the striving spirit and the determined spirite which can help him su
34、rmount the challenge descrbed as the picture.(70),2006,2006As is vividly depicted in the picture,on the face of the boy is one superstars name，who is famous for playing foot,and,spending a lot money,the other boy want to imitate the superstar hair stlye.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us
35、 is that if someone wants to acquire the achievement in the future,he must conquer himself with the striving spirit and must have the clear idea that who he is.(76),2005,2005As is vividly depicted in the picture,in the center of the playground is a elder，who is the father of the players who are figh
36、ting for shunning from taking the responsibility of their father.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that if our nation wants to acquire the achievement in the future,we must shoulder the duty of looking after our elders.(68),2004,2004As is vividly depicted in the picture,across the fi
37、nal is a young boy,who has just finished the game,finding that there is a new starting in his life.Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is that if someone wants to acquire the achievement in the future,he must conquer himself with the striving spirit and the determined spirit which can help him surmount the crisis descrbed as the picture.(75),
