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1、2013年中考复习,写作指导 No.52Middle School 左红,大作文（长春市）,2012年长春市初中毕业生学业考试英语作文假如你是张明，想参加一家英文报社组织的“美国中学生走进中国家庭”活动，并成为中国家庭中一名接待者。请你按照下面的提示，用英文写一封80词左右的自荐信。（10分）提示：1.表达想要邀请美国中学生的愿望；2.介绍你的个人及家庭情况；3.简单陈述你的活动计划。2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试作文（全国卷一）假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括；1.自我介
2、绍（包括英语能力）；2.参加意图（介绍中国，了解其他国家）；3.希望获准。,大作文（吉林省）,大作文复习策略 选题,大作文复习策略 选题,大作文,第五档（9-10分）评分标准：很好地完成了规定的写作任务。包含所有的内容要点，结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚连贯。使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇，语法和词汇错误极少，格式正确，书写规范。（要有思想性）,写作步骤,审清主题：文章的中心，文体，人称，时态是什么。是否有标题。选择材料：材料为主题服务，量要充足。列好提纲：把材料整理得井然有序，计划好文章的整体结构。如：开头、正文和结尾初写文章：语法、用词得当，语言地道检查修改：反复修改润色。准确抄写：清楚工整，
3、美观大方。,How to write a good BODY part?,1.立意要新2.内容要全3.逻辑要强4.表达要准5.文采要妙,立意要新 提高思想性和感染力,一家英语杂志社正在调查不同国家孩子母亲节给妈妈送礼物的情况。假如你是林超，请根据表中的信息并结合自身看法，给杂志社写一封信。,立意要新提高思想性和感染力,I am Lin Chao from China.I will cook breakfast for my mother.I want to give her a surprise and thank her for her taking care of me for so ma
4、ny years.Also,I want to tell her I am not a child any longer and I can look after her and myself.,内容要全1.表达想要邀请美国中学生的愿望2.介绍你的个人及家庭情况；3.简单陈述你的活动计划。Dear Sir/Madam,When I got the news that some American students would come into Chinese families,I was very excited.So I am writing to you to see if I can h
5、ave the chance to be one of the hosts.I am an active and outgoing boy who likes making friends very much.I like Chinese painting and playing ping-pong is also my favorite.I have a happy family.My parents are quite warm-hearted.My mother is good at cooking.She can cook lots of traditional Chinese foo
6、d for our American friends.So they may enjoy it while tasting Chinese culinary(厨房的，烹饪的)culture at my home.We have got everything ready,just waiting for you to say“Yes,you are the right person.”Yours,Zhang Ming,逻辑要强 常用连词,表示并列：eitheror;neithernor;bothand;not onlybut also;表示递进的：besides;whats more 表示原因的
7、：because(of);thanks to表示结果的：so;as a result;sothat;表示目的的：so that;in order that/to;表示对比的：while;on the one hand+on the other hand;Each coin has two sides.;preferto;would rather dothan do;,常用连词,表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：for example;for instance;such as;like;that is to say表示总结的：in a word;last;表示利弊的：be good
8、/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;have great/much influence on sb.;sth.;affect;have an effect on sb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;be interested in;show great interest in;lose oneself in;put ones heart into;be good at;be poor at;be weak in,常用连词,表达个人想法的：I think/believe;(as)for me;in my opinion/vi
9、ew;as a student;from the bottom of my heart其他：in general;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up ones mind to do;in a way;in a word,恰当使用过渡词语，使文章层次分明，逻辑性强。,First,Second,third,lastFirstly,secondly,thirdly,finallyThe first,the second the lastTo begin with,then,furthermore,finallyT
10、o start with,next,in addition,finallyFirst and foremost（首要的是）,besides,last but not least（最后但同样重要的是）Frankly speaking,besides(In addition),as for,whats more,last but not least,教材原文展示-八上Unit8,Class 9 had a great time on the school trip.They went to Blue Water Aquarium for the day._they visited the Visi
11、tors Center and watched a movie about sharks._they watched a dolphin show._,they went to the Outdoor Pool and saw a big octopus._,they went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts._,tired but happy,they took the bus back to school._,the science teacher was very happy because the class monitor clea
12、ned the bus after the trip.,Class 9 had a great time on the school trip.They went to Blue Water Aquarium for the day.First they visited the Visitors Center and watched a movie about sharks.Then they watched a dolphin show.After that,they went to the Outdoor Pool and saw a big octopus.After lunch,the
13、y went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts.Finally,tired but happy,they took the bus back to school.At the end of the day,the science teacher was very happy because the class monitor cleaned the bus after the trip.,市模范文展示（一）According to the survey,most students want to study in our own country
14、.But Id like to study abroad._,I think studying abroad will give me the opportunity to open my eyes._,I can experience cultures that are different from ours.It is _ an important way to develop my ability to live independentlyI m going to learn about some foreign ideas._,I can improve the ability of
15、my language communication by talking with my foreign friends every day._,I am willing to make a contribution to the cultural exchange.In a word,I will study abroad after I graduate from the middle school.,According to the survey,most students want to study in our own country.But Id like to study abr
16、oad.First,I think studying abroad will give me the opportunity to open my eyes.Second,I can experience cultures that are different from ours.It is also an important way to develop my ability to live independentlyI m going to learn about some foreign ideas.At the same time,I can improve the ability o
17、f my language communication by talking with my foreign friends every day.Moreover,I am willing to make a contribution to the cultural exchange.In a word,I will study abroad after I graduate from the middle school.,市模范文展示（二）Nowadays,many tend to study abroad,while I prefer to learn at home,and I have
18、 several reasons for my choice._,I dont want my parents who are less wealthy to work so hard to afford the high tuition._,it is difficult and takes time to get used to a new environment,_ the weather,food,culture and living conditions are totally different._，by taking the risk of not having local fr
19、iends,anyone will feel lonely.Actually,Ive determined to do all my effort to enter Tsinghua University.I strongly believe that in the near future,I can not only look after my parents well but also help achieve China Dream!,Nowadays,many tend to study abroad,while I prefer to learn at home,and I have
20、 several reasons for my choice.Frankly speaking,I dont want my parents who are less wealthy to work so hard to afford the high tuition.Besides,it is difficult and takes time to get used to a new environment,for the weather,food,culture and living conditions are totally different.Whats more，by taking
21、 the risk of not having local friends,anyone will feel lonely.Actually,Ive determined to do all my effort to enter Tsinghua University.I strongly believe that in the near future,I can not only look after my parents well but also help achieve China Dream!,文采要妙,1 文章中不要总用同一个常用的词，相同意思可用不同单词表达如many可换用mil
22、lions of，a number oflike可换用enjoy,prefer,favorite,fall in love withHope 可换成look forward to Want to可换成be willing to doDecide to do可换成be determined to doOften do sth可换成tend to do,2 采用多种句式，避免重复和单调。引入各种从句:强调句，感叹句，各种语态、语气，或谚语,3 改变句子的开头方式。不要一味地用主语开头,适当使用状语提前。4.用形容词，短语来修饰句子,Dear mum,thank you for your loveD
23、ear Mum,I was very upset because I failed an exam.Then I decided to go out to relax myself without telling you.Several hours passed,then it got dark.When I walked home,I saw you waiting for me.When you saw me,you ran to me,held me and cried“Dont worry.I will always be with you.”,Dear mum,thank you f
24、or your love Dear Mum,I was very upset because I failed an/a _(adj.)exam.Then I decided to go out_(adv.)to relax myself without telling you.Several hours passed,then it got dark.When I walked home,_(phrase),I saw you waiting for me_(adv.).When you saw me,you ran to me _(phrase),held me_(adv.)and cri
25、ed“Dont worry.I will always be with you.”,Dear mum,thank you for your loveDear Mum,I was very upset because I failed an important exam.Then I decided to go out alone to relax myself without telling you.Several hours passed,then it got dark.When I walked home,to my surprise,I saw you waiting for me a
26、nxiously.When you saw me,you ran to me at once,held me tightly(紧紧地)and cried“Dont worry.I will always be with you.”,Im going to Hong Kong to visit my uncle.My parents and I go and visit him regularly every year.As we all know,Hong Kong is an _ place to shop,look for entertainment and taste _ foods f
27、rom all over the world.First,we are going to spend an _ day hanging out in Disneyland,which is one of the most _ amusement parks in the world.Second,we are planning a day shopping in Hong Kong.Its well known that Hong Kong is _.Last but not least,I will spare some of my time wandering in Hong Kong,f
28、or those _ buildings have always been _ to me.,Im going to Hong Kong to visit my uncle.My parents and I go and visit him regularly every year.As we all know,Hong Kong is an excellent place to shop,look for entertainment and taste fabulous foods from all over the world.First,we are going to spend an
29、entire day hanging out in Disneyland,which is one of the most famous amusement parks in the world.Second,we are planning a day shopping in Hong Kong.Its well known that Hong Kong is the paradise of shopping.Last but not least,I will spare some of my time wandering in Hong Kong,for those marvelous buildings have always been attractive to me.,检查修改,用词方面是否正确句子写的是否恰当篇章方面是否严谨细节方面是否准确,Thank you so much!,Wish you success!,
