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1、Legend of butterfly lovers,梁祝,高考新题型读后续写训练1,My father is a liar to me.,Sometimes love is hidden behind actions,which may be unseen to our eyes without special attention.,What have you learned from the video?,Selfless love,第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面350字短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：所续写短文的词数应为180左右；应使用5个以上短文中标
2、有下划线的关键词语；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；,若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。,Who:,What:,a couple of lovers,God,the woman doctor,_ couple of lovers led an _(envy)life in a town._(fortunate),the man had an accident and was severely _(injure).The woman _(attend)himday and night._ her lover was still sleep
3、ing,_(hope),she made a deal _God:to be a butterfly for three years in exchange for the mans _(recover),_ was a hard choice but easy to make to a willing heart.,A,enviable,Unfortunately,injured,attended to,But,hopelessly,with,recovery,which,Development,Ending,Beginning,Climax(高潮),A.The man was badly
4、injured and showed no signs of recovery.B.The woman dealt with God to save her lover but another girl appeared between them.C.The man and the woman had an enviable love.,Endings of our students,Endings of our students,Endings of our students,logic（逻辑）,白猫掉到河里，黑猫奋尽全力救它上岸，上岸后，白猫对黑猫说了什么？,Continue the st
5、ory,You should find the clues in the story.,logic,the title,the given story,the underlined words,the two given sentences,They are the clues to help you create your writing logically.,underlined wordsenjoying the sunrise the sunset consciousnessthe church God tearslove regret becamethe butterfly fly
6、sweetheart-stricken,underlined words（选5个以上）who(人物）：God the butterfly where（地点）：the church what（事件）：enjoying the sunrise the sunset consciousness tears lovebutterfly sweet heart-stricken,clues（线索）“I can help youfor three years”“Yes,I do!i wont regret doing that!”God also felt sad“Do you regret for wh
7、at you have done?”,logic,the title,the given story,the underlined words,the two given sentences,Paragraph1:The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her,but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on._,Single is simple,double is t
8、rouble,triangle is terrible.,利用已给信息将情节推向高潮,How to deal with the woman doctor?,When to get married?,Paragraph2:God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly,“Do you regret for what you have done?”_,利用已给信息得出一个完美结局,e.,b.The man and the doctor married,and the woman remained to be a butterfly.,The man an
9、d the doctor married,and the woman left.,c.The man proposed to the doctor,but God uncovered the truth to the man and gave the separated lovers a happy reunion.,d.The man proposed to the doctor,but God uncovered the truth to the man which involved him in a dilemma.Finally,the man left.,the two given
10、sentences,the underlined words,The two lead you,help you,and control you to go in the right direction.,There was once a placid 平静的；温和的；沉着的and beautiful town in which there were a couple of lovers who would often stay together on the top of the mountain enjoying the sunrise and by the sea appreciatin
11、g the sunset.Everyone who knew them could not help envying them and praying for their happy love.,Group A(paragraph 1)1.目睹；见证(vt)2.他说过的最甜蜜的话（提示词sweet）3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。(tears)4.变深；使加深(v)5.第三年的最后一天 6.他们的爱已成为回忆。Group B(paragraph 2)被打动的；受感动的(adj.)揭露真相 3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词regret,用倒装句式）4.唤醒(vt.)5.遭受许多挫折
12、 6.男人震惊了，越发觉得后悔和内疚（提示词the feeling of regrets/guilt）,1.目睹；见证 vt._,2.他说过的最甜蜜的话（提示词sweet）_,3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。（提示词tears）_,see/witness,The sweetest words he has ever said,The butterfly couldnt help bursting into tears sadly.,/The butterfly could no longer hold back the tears.,5.在第三年的最后一天 _,On the last day o
13、f the third year,4.变深；使加深 vt./vi._,deepen,6.他们的爱已成为回忆。_,Their love has become memories.,/Their love has become a past.,Paragraphy1:The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her,but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on._,It w
14、as heartbroken to see their love deepen day by day.Time went by quickly.On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost over,the man proposed to his girlfriend.He took out a beautiful ring and swore the sweetest words he has ever said.Hearing this,the butterf
15、ly couldnt breathe.Her darken eyes were full of tears.she flew away silently.At that moment,she realized that he wouldnt know her sacrifices and their love has become a past.,2.揭露真相 _,1.被打动的；受感动的 adj.be_ by,touched,uncover the truth,/expose/reveal,/moved/impressed,3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词regret,用倒装句
16、式）_,Never have I regretted for what I have done for him.,4.唤醒 vt._,awaken/arouse,5.遭受许多挫折 _,go through many obstacles,suffer many struggles,6.男人震惊了，越发觉得后悔和内疚（提示词the feeling of regrets/guilt）_,The man got shocked,and the feeling of regrets and guilt grew stronger.,setbacksfrustrations,Paragraphy2:God
17、 also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly,“Do you regret for what you have done?”_,The butterfly said,“No.Never have I regretted for what I have done for him.”moved by her words,God was lost in thought:she had gone through so many struggles and she shouldnt deserve that.So,the day before the man an
18、d the doctors wedding,God uncovered the whole truth to him.Obviously,the man was shocked and the feeling of regrets and guilt grew stronger.The love deep inside was awakened.He rushed to the church to beg for the womans forgiveness.And he determined that this time he wont let her go.He will take her
19、 to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset for a lifetime.,Step3 polish（润色）,Step 2 draft（拟稿）,Step 1compose(构思）,Paragraphy1:The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her,but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on._,It was heartbroken
20、 to see their love deepen day by day.Time went by quickly.On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost over,the man proposed to his girlfriend.He took out a beautiful ring and swore the sweetest words he has ever said.Hearing this,the butterfly couldnt bre
21、athe.Her darken eyes were full of tears.she flew away silently in great grief and despair.At that moment,she realized that he wouldnt know her sacrifices and their love has become a past.,How to polish your words?,“小”心思丰满人物内心 Inner thoughts to portray the figures,Tip1：“小”心思丰满人物内心,悲伤,快乐,2016年10月高考作文
22、23分,Tip1：“小”心思丰满人物内心,震惊,2017年6月高考作文 23分,How to describe your inner thoughts?,1.Feeling happy/sad/angry/guilty/depressed,2.Driven by curiosity/a sense of sympathy(同情)或者是 Deeply touched/moved by3.，full of regret/anger/fear/gratitude（感激）4.具体的动作描写 stand frozen,jump with joy,tremble with anger,with tears
23、 filling ones eyes,with ones eyes wide open 等等,Lets have a try!,1.God said to the woman,“Do you regret for what you have done?”Driven by a sense of sympathy(同情),God said to the woman,“Do you regret for what you have done?”2.She said to God,“Thank you,God.”With tears filling her eyes,She said to God
24、cheerfully,“Thank you,God.”,*inner thoughts*.*.1,*theme：negative/positive*interpretation（解意）,*key words（关键词）two given sentences*clues（线索）,Step3 polish（润色）,Step 2 draft（拟稿）,Step 1compose(构思）,Choose one of the following theme to write two paragraphsfor the story based on the given underlined words.a.The man and the doctor married,and the woman left.b.The man and the doctor married,and the woman remained to be a butterfly.The man proposed to the doctor,but God uncovered the truth to the man which involved him in a dilemma.Finally,the man left.,
