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1、Writing lesson,3.用词基本恰当，句子结构完整，语法正确，语言通顺，语句连贯，层次清楚，意思正确；4.会使用适当的过渡词，和一定比例的复合句提高作文的档次；5.书写规范，字迹工整（字体稍大一些），格式符合要求。,1.能在所学词汇、句型、语法范围内书写正确的句子，要求不得少于80词（1015句即可,不画蛇添足。）；2.要求能通过记叙某一件事表达真实情感、感悟人生的哲理；,答题要求,一档（13-15分）内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言错误；二档（10-12分）内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少；三档（6-9分）内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达较多错误；
2、四档（1-5分）有一定内容、但语言表达错误较多。,评分标准,一、认真审题、细读提示、把握体裁,二、明确要点、组织信息、构思文路,书面表达“四步法”,三、斟酌词句、连句成文、动笔书写,四、核对修改、查缺补漏、规范誊写、卷面整洁,How to write a good article?,How to write a good article?,记叙文“三段式”结构：,第一段（首段）：“凤头”（文章开头应给人以美感）,第二段（正文）：“猪肚”（文章内容要充实）,第三段（尾段）：“豹尾”（文章结尾要圆滑有力）,2004 Highs and lows in my life2005 Love for my
3、 parents2006 Understanding2007 A Gift2008 A letter(To be strong)2009 Sunshine in my life,04 09年中考考题回放,After Wenchuan Earthquake,soldiers,the greatest love,parents love,teachers encouragement,friends help,Sensation is everywhere.(感动无处不在。),In our life,we are often moved by,提示：生活中，令我们感动的事很多很多。父母的关心、照顾，
4、老师的鼓励与帮助，朋友、同学的理解和支持，甚至是陌生人的一次小小的帮助都会令我们深深地感动，而我们也会尽自己所能关心、帮助、感动着周围的人。请你以“I was moved by”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，记叙生活中你经历过的一件令你感动的事，说明生活中充满着爱与感动。,I was moved by,实战演练,（2）Tense（主要时态）,The Simple Past Tense（一般过去时态）,words,sentences,article(文章),1.审题（1）体裁,记叙文,2.列要点,3.连句成文,4.修改誊写,paragraph(段),请用“四步法、三段式”完成写作,I was
5、moved by 提示：生活中，令我们感动的事很多很多。父母的关心、照顾，老师的鼓励与帮助，朋友、同学的理解和支持，甚至是陌生人的一次小小的帮助都会令我们深深地感动，而我们也会尽自己所能关心、帮助、感动着周围的人。请你以“I was moved by”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，记叙生活中你经历过的一件令你感动的事，说明生活中充满着爱与感动。,实战演练,Useful expressions,remember,cant help crying,happiness,help,grateful,worry about,sensation(感动),fill with,move,happy,luck
6、y,love,colorful,make,experience,feel,understand,be moved by,Wonderful sentences,Beginning 开头句,1.Moving thing is the sweetest candy.2.In our life,there must be many people or things make you moved.,From the moving thing,I know I m so lucky to live in the moving world.,Ending 结尾句,Body 中间句,1.,重复关键词,One
7、 possible version:,Sensation is the sweetest candy.It makes me feel that my life is colorful and its filled with love and happiness.In our life,there must be many people or things make you moved.I have ever experienced one thing which makes me moved deeply.,Beginning(首段),主题句,连接词,Last year,my right f
8、oot was hurt in a basketball match.And I felt so painful that I couldnt move.A t that moment,my friend,Jack,sent me to the hospital.I felt happy,although my foot was still painful.But because of my illness,I worried about my study very much.I was too upset to say a word.Seeing this,Jack said,Body（正文
9、）,From my friends love,I know I m so lucky to live in the moving world.,结尾句，表明态度,Ending（尾段）,“Take it easy!I will carry you to school everyday.”I was moved deeply,SO I couldnt help crying out.He gave not only a help but also the greatest love to me.I was so grateful.,热门话题,1.Moved/Something in my hear
10、t 2.Happiness3.Love around me4.Love for the people in trouble/When someone in trouble,what should I do?5.The person I want to thank most,6.Learn to smile7.To be strong8.Confidence and success9.Do something for our environment10.Saving water is our duty11.Study in a happy way,热门话题,Homework Finish off the composition carefully.,Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.心之所愿，无事不成。,Thank you!Goodbye!,
