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1、假如你是杨方，你要竞选班长(class president)，请根据以下内容写一篇竞选演讲词。1.你认为自己具备什么条件可以胜任班长工作？2.如果当选你会为班级同学做些什么？注意：词数140个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。,审题：1.体材：应用文-竞选演说词2.时态和人称：第一人称，现在时II.谋篇:1.竞选演说词一般要求有称呼语、开头语、结束语以及拉票，表达谢意等内容。（本文开头语已给出。）,2.本文内容要点：1）个人所具备的竞选班长的优越条件 2）如果当选你打算要为班级做什么,即竞选目标 3）表决心，拉票，表示感谢 3.段落层次：根据三个内容要点，可分三段来写。4.注意点：该文体写作应朴
2、实，真诚(sincere)，条理清楚，话语要具有感染力（powerful），煽动性，让听众（选民）信服你，感受到你的真诚及能力。,范文 My name is Yang Fang.Im glad to have this opportunity to tell you why you should vote for me as class president.（开头语，引出话题）,I am responsible,sociable,and easy-going by nature.I like class work and enjoy serving others.Additionally,I
3、have varied interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well as soccer.I am also a good listener and always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job well.(本段描述个人所具备的条件优越：responsible,sociable,easy-going,like class work，a good listener，have various interests,在罗列这些优点时，既有“笼统
4、的”responsible,sociable等“词汇”又有“具体的”例子love singing and playing the drums as well as soccer，open to different opinions等，最后表明自己有信心胜任班长工作:I am confident that I can do the job well.。内容真实可信，语言具有感染力与说服力。,Being a student myself,firstly,I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our class will i
5、mprove their studies.For those students who are falling behind,I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly,I will serve as a bridge between the teachers and us students.Finally,I will arrange parties to relax ourselves.（本段具体描述你的竞选目标：1create an academic atmosphere 2 serve as a bridge 3 arrange
6、 parties to relax ourselves；描述时 分别用了firstly，Secondly，Finally，使得层次清晰，逻辑有序）,I believe I am the right person for this post and I hope to have your support and vote.Thank you!（结束语简明扼要，态度真诚，自信）,典型错误Im a kind and outgoing people.(Im a person.)I want to serve for my class.（serve+n.）I have a kind-heart.(a k
7、ind heart)Ill make the environment more clean.(cleaner)I also good at sports.(I am good at)Creat harmony atmosphere(harmonious atmosphere)Ill spare no pains to do things what will benefit our class.(things that will benefit our class)As you known.(As you know)Ill hard working and try my best.(work h
8、ard)Ill help you when you have difficult.(difficulty)I get on well with them and they are like me.(they all like me),要点1I love our class.I enjoy class daily work.Im good at communicating with people and it can close the distance between teachers and students.A good relationship can make it easier fo
9、r me to manage our class well.I like to be helpful.Whenever you need my help,Im always there.I have enough confidence that I can run our class perfectly because of my rich experience Ive got from my previous work.,要点2If elected,the first thing I will do is to decorate our classroom to be a nice plac
10、e.Ill manage to lead our class to the top of our school.And Ill put my heart into class daily work.If I have the honor to be class president,Ill work harder not only to further improve myself but also do more things for our class.Im supposed to let other students voice their opinions about class bui
11、lding and try to keep our class in order.,要点3Im sure I would be an excellent class president.Give me a chance.I wont let you down.Im eager to get the position so that I can do more things for our teachers and classmates as well.I promise that I ll manage the class in a nice way,more scientifically a
12、nd effectively.It is self-evident that a class needs a good class president,and a teacher needs a good assistant.Thats ME!Dont hesitate to vote for me.,I am so devoted to class that Ill perform functions as expected.Leadership enables me to keep the class in order.Responsibility reminds me to serve
13、classmates without complaining.,decorate the corner of classroom as“Telling you”place where we can convey our thoughts to our teachers and classmates.bridge the gap so that students can benefit from teachers.announce the distribution of duties among the classmates/improve a sense of glory psychologi
14、cal instruction course will be included in the plan for we bear too many expectations.,advocate/launch a jogging campaign.Without health,no one can harvest achievement.make our class a place where we obtain pleasure and graduate with knowledge as well as perfect memory.strengthen a good class image.
15、/present the gift to whoever ranks the first place in every field.,In general,Im convinced that I have the ability to be the class president.For one thing,I do well in most subjects specially in English,which enables me to set a good example for our classmates.For another,I have taken part in variou
16、s activities,ranging from research work to volunteer work,from which I reap a lot of experience.In addition,I get on well with most of you with whose help I have made continuous progress.,Therefore,I think it beneficial for you to vote for me.If I were the class president,I would devote myself to ma
17、king contributions to creating our class a harmonious family.Firstly,I would help classmates who have difficulty in study,thus offering us a better atmosphere to study well.Secondly,I would organize colorful outdoor activities,such as sports meeting and hiking,which benefits us not only mentally and but also physically.Last but not least,I would smile at everyone for the purpose of motivating us to keep a positive attitude towards life.,I would appreciate it if you could offer me a chance.Thank you!,
