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1、,初三英语书面表达指导,What do you think of the problem?,Think of the problemIts serious problem because it does harm to our health.Its common for students to have difficulties in sleeping,and this does harm to our health.One is that we have a wrong diet.The other is that we fail to reduce our pressure.Too muc
2、h fried food and too many sweets are not only bad for our teeth but also make us fat.Students dont take as much exercise as before.Students are eating junk food in place of vegetables and fruit.It is the huge pressure that brings you many difficulties.Were too busy to do sports.The reason of the inc
3、reasing weight is our bad behavior in health such as eating junk food,staying still in front of TV and so on.,How can we solve the problem?,Health,diet,sports,relax,Give adviceYou should/shouldnt.Why dont you Why not Its a good idea to How about Try(not)to,DietDont eat too much junk food,it makes yo
4、u put on weight _becoming less healthy.Its essential to eat fruit and vegetables _junk food.A healthy diet can _peoples health.Try to eat more fruit and vegetables _junk food.A bad diet might lead you t make a real difference to you,_a bad diet might lead you into trouble._to eat more vegetable s an
5、d fruit.,Solve the problem,as well as,in stead of,make a real difference to,rather than,Its better,while,SportsDo sports regularly _put on weight.Its a good idea to take some outdoor sports _jogging and playing basketball.Choose the sports you like best_ you wont feel bored.Its a great way to do som
6、e sports_eating less food.,in order not to,including,so that,instead of,RelaxHave enough sleep_you can.Please do not_ too late or take exercise in the night.A relaxing feeling will help you_fast and make your body stronger._ is more effective than listening to some light music.Listening to some soft
7、 music is a good way to_.A nice feeling can_during keeping healthy.,as possible as,stay up,fall asleep,Nothing,relax yourself,play an important role,最近，学校校园网的英语论坛上，正在进行以“健康生活”为话题的大讨论。下面是学生们在讨论中提到的两个实际问题，请你任选其一，从健康生活的角度谈谈你的想法。内容提示如下：1.What do you think if the problem?2.Whats your advice?要求：1.中心突出，语义连
8、贯，层次清晰，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名 3.词数在80词左右,审提示语及要求,确定中心内容,Health1.What do you think of the problem?2.Your advice,审,时态的确定,一般现在时,列,列提纲确定文章结构（段落及段落中心）,Talk about the problems and the reasons,Paragraph 2,Give the advice,Paragraph 3,Show your hope and best wishes,Paragraph 1,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。(一)
9、段落写作，达到各个段落的统一、完整和连贯性。(二)段落间的衔接过渡。,段落的连贯性连贯性包括意连内在的逻辑型 形连使用过渡词语、过渡句等 使用某种逻辑顺序 表示原因：because,because of,for,since,now that 表示让步：though,although,even though,whetheror,No matter what/how,表示时间关系：when,while,until,before,after,as sonn as,since 表示并列关系：and,so,but,or,otherwise,bothand,eitheror,neithernor,not
10、onlybut also表示目的：in order to,so that表示条件：if,unless,如何做到行文连贯:恰当使用语句之间的连接成分开始陈述:first of all，above all,at first显示事件的先后顺序firstly/secondly/thirdly；first/second/third,then,next,after this,after that,before this,before that表示“另外,还有”whats more,besides,also,in addition,still,as well as结束陈述:finally，lastly，in
11、 the end提供例子:like,such as,for example换一种方法表述:in other words,That is to say用于陈述事实:in fact,To tell you the truth显示资料来源:according to对一个话题进行总结:In short,All in all,In a word,段落间的衔接（过渡句）：,1.The problem isnt serious because there are many ways to lose weight.Heres some advice.2.However,what should we do to solve this problem?3.However,you dont need to worry because there are some correct ways to stay a healthy body.,改,选好词句，修改文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,书面表达写作技巧,审 列 连 改,Lets enjoy our compositions!,
