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1、雅思写作口语重要一环：批改 由于雅思口语写作是属于语言输出的主观性考试，很难有像阅读听力那样的一个标准答案供你自我诊断自我总结。偏偏口语写作的特点决定了自我是难以做出准确的评价的。雅思写作口语批改应运而生。雅思写作口语重要一环：批改批改的重要性批改的重要性无须多言，以大部分雅思考生写作口语5.5分左右的水平，面对自己的答案/表现，除了能知道自己表现得糟糕，跟平时差不多，或者比平时发挥似乎流畅些之外，大约也讲不出个所以然来。所以，一个更高水平的人的点评，指出答案的诸多毛病以及些许亮点，并提供一些修改的建议，最重要的是为以后的提高指出方向，就显得弥足珍贵，像我看到的一些优秀的批改，可能你的答案才一
2、页纸，点评写出了三页纸;你的答案才2分钟，别人的点评却有10分钟。可以说练习一篇+精修一篇+再自我修改+再批改，这种组合产生的效果比你练10篇都要好。批改的内容有哪些无论是写作还是口语，批改的方向都是按照各自的考试评分标准表来的，雅思官方给了那么详细的评分标准，资深老师可以严格的按照评分标准一条条的捋。语法，词汇各种细节别想跑，逻辑思路是否清晰，内容上是否言之有物，当然，口语的话，还有一项最麻烦的发音。我看到的精修版写作，一篇*被指出30+的错误/不当，如果在考试下，基本就是5.5分下的水平。所以，不是高人给你批改，你很难知道自己的问题在哪里。批改就是一面镜子，照出自己的不足。个人体会：所以，
3、雅思写作和口语，能有几次宝贵的批改，是突破自己的瓶颈的最好方法。不要省略掉了这个环节，虽然自己对照着范文反复研读，反复写，是可以提升，但一个人永远有自己的文风，别人的范文你不可能学得来，也不应该照搬。那么，在自己的写作习惯下的*的问题，只有在自己的*里才能看得出来。一个优秀的批改老师，就是帮你看出你的写作习惯下有什么可以改进的地方，而不是让你去模仿他人。雅思口语Part2物品类题库：电视教育节目Describe an educational TV program.You should say:what the program iswhat type of program it iswhat c
4、ontents it hasand explain what you learned from the program.Id like to talk about a program from my childhood called “How 2”, I believe its originally a British TV show that was televised in my country with subtitles. The presenters certainly spoke with a British accent.Its hard to pin down exactly
5、what type of program it was, I guess a mixture of science and history, with some everyday facts thrown in for good measure. The title itself is a play on words, as the series would show you how to do certain things.The show is aimed at kids in middle school or high school. The hosts would routinely
6、do experiments to demonstrate science in action, I remember one in particular where the presenters were trying to pour water out of a bottle in the quickest way possible. The winner had a very good technique whereby she would swirl the water, creating a vortex and causing the liquid to fly out of th
7、e bottle far quicker than any of the others.As you would expect, the show got me interested in science and learning, but it also showed that you could do many experiments yourself and have fun at home, with everyday objects and materials that were easy to get hold of. At school we would need equipme
8、nt and the teacher would have to supervise us, but at home we could be left to our own devices, with just a bottle and some water to keep us amused.雅思口语Part2物品类题库：室内游戏Describe an indoor game that you played when you were a child.You should say:what the game waswhere you played itwho you played it wi
9、thand explain why you enjoyed this game.I think Id have to go for puzzles. Jigsaw puzzles to be precise. I have a huge collection, although most of them are hidden in a cupboard somewhere in my parents house, these days.I used to have a special table exclusively for doing my puzzles on. Once I got i
10、nto the groove, I would become immersed in the puzzle and get lost in a world of my own. Occasionally I would try to solve one with my grandmother, but this was more for her benefit as I much prefer doing it by myself. I know it sounds selfish, but its just not as much fun sharing the responsibility
11、 with someone else and the pay off isnt as big at the end.I started when I was just a toddler, putting shapes into pre-cut holes, but slowly I graduated to more complex pictures. These days its not unusual to find me tackling a really complex puzzle, like an “Impossipuzzle” which are double-sided an
12、d feature a picture of something very small but in large quantities, like a plate of baked beans or loads of Brussels sprouts.In my opinion as well as being an enjoyable pastime, jigsaw puzzles are good for your mind. The brain is basically just a muscle and so it should be given a work out every no
13、w and then. Jigsaw puzzles are challenging and although they are time consuming, they provide great satisfaction once youve finished one.雅思口语Part2物品类题库：重要的礼物Describe an important gift you had in your childhood.You should say:what it iswho gave it to youwhat it looks likeand explain why it was import
14、ant to you.The first thing the pops into my head are my cats, Topsy and Turvy. They were my little bundles of joy whilst I was growing up.When I was much younger I had another cat, called William. Sadly he was run over by a bus one day in front of our house. I can remember very vividly, one day I ca
15、me home from school and my mum told me to look in the kitchen. I saw Topsy and Truvy and it was love at first sight. She told me when she had gone to collect them she only intended to buy one kitten, she put Topsy into the box and Turvy was mewing so loudly and scratching the box. She decided they w
16、ere soul mates and couldnt separate them.I have no idea what kind of cats they were, all I can tell you is that they were painfully cute. Topsy was ginger and Turvy was ginger and white. Turvy had little white patches on his paws that made it look like he was wearing mittens. Topsy was a little furr
17、ier and made him look fat. One was shy and the other more outgoing. Like all brothers, they would sometimes fight and at other times cuddle up together.Alas, they are no longer with us. Topsy passed away a few years ago and years finally caught up with Turvy finally as she bit the bullet last year.
18、I knew that they would not live as long as me, but its still depressing to lose someone you love.雅思口语Part2物品类题库：好建议Describe A piece of advice youve received.You should say:what it iswho gave it to youwhy you took the adviceand explain what the result was.I can remember a time when I sought advice fr
19、om a wide range of different people. It was a couple of years ago, at a previous job, when I fell for a colleague. From my perspective it was love at first sight, but I was unsure whether the feeling was mutual and I didnt know my companys stance on office romances.I didnt know what to do and I didn
20、t want to listen to just one person, so, as I said, I asked a few of my friends to get a broad set of opinions and points of view. A couple of people had reservations and advised caution, they recommended that I should take things slow, after all, “good things come to those that wait”. However, the
21、general feeling was that I should go for it and ask her out. They said I had nothing to lose and I should strike while the irons hot. I had butterflies in my stomach, but despite being a nervous wreck, I eventually plucked up the courage to ask her out.As it happens, I shouldnt have listened to them. She turned me down in front of all my co-workers and I had to walk back to my desk with my tail between my legs. Ive never been so embarrassed in my life and Ill definitely think twice before putting my heart on the line again. As they say, “once bitten, twice shy.雅思写作口语重要一环：批改
