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1、Continuation writing,读后续写的具体要求,提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。,1,如何构思续写的内容,Step 1 Read for elements(要素）,Step 2 Read for plots（情节）,Step 3 Gather ideas,Step 4 Make predictions（预测）,Step 1 Read for elements,when:where:who:what:why:,my mom,I,receptionist,betw
2、een spring and summer,on the road through the countryside,gave flowers to nursing home，,Leaving flowers for someone makes mom feel good.,Tip1:We can get the main idea with the help of_.,broke down,5W questions,Step 2 Read for plots,No garage,no passers-by,Read for plots and feelings,were driving,unh
3、appy,impatient,annoyed,“Do you know someone there?”,curious,confused,“Did you leave your name?”,heard the car burst,worriedhopeless,somewhere between spring and summer,Suddenly，in the middle of nowhere,Before she started the car,Not long after we continued driving,Suddenly，,adj.,actions,dialogues,su
4、rroundings,times,cried,skimmed,looked back,“What?”,“What did you do with the flowers?”,no garage,no passers-by,rebellious(叛逆的）,.drove to ask:,Tip2:While writing,we can express our inner feelings by,adj,Actions,Dialogues,Surrounding,Simile(比喻),Beginning,Climax,Ending,always unhappy,curious,confused,m
5、isunderstanding,worried,hopeless,impatient,annoyed,Feeling analysis,development,?,The writer has_with his mom,Step 3 Gather ideas,gather the ideas信息整理：,genre(体裁)：narration(记叙文)tense(时态)：the past tense(一般过去时)main idea原文核心信息解读：Between spring and summer,on the road through the countryside my mom gave f
6、lowers to a nursing home,because leaving flowers for others made her feel good.Unluckily,our car broke down.,Step 4 Make predictions,Group talking for the plot developments,Para.1：We were worried about what could be done.,1.How would the writer show their worries?2.Did anyone come to help them?Who?,
7、feeling,3.How did the writer feel about being helped?,Tip3 The ending of Para1 should be connected with Para2,The car should have been repaired,Various ways to express worries,adj.:,actions:,dialogues:,surroundings:,After what seemed to be ages,I scratched my head,stamped my foot and walked back and
8、 forth hopelessly.,“What if no one is willing to help us?Would we die from thirsty?”I murmured in a low voice.,The air was thick and the hot sun was burning us,I stood there clumsily with nothing to do.Deadly silence swallowed the road thoroughly,leaving nothing but hopelessness.,Worried and depress
9、ed,I was wandering along the road aimlessly.,simile:比喻,I was walking back and forth like an ant on a hot pan.,Group talking for the plot developments,Para.1：We were worried about what could be done.,1.How would the writer show their worries?2.Did anyone come to help them?Who?,feeling,the receptionis
10、t?,an old garage man?,a stranger?,relieved,thankful,hopeful,3.How did the writer feel about being helped?,1.Seeing a flower shop,what would the writer do?2.How would the writer feel?3.How could para.2 be ended reasonably?,Para.2：As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.,buy some f
11、lowers to mom?,be given some flowers?,.,excited?,proud?,understanding?,Group talking for the plot developments,active or negative?,Tip4:passage can be ended variously using,feeling ending,surrouning ending,meaningful ending,natural ending,feeling ending:,Just at that moment,a ripple of(一阵)excitement
12、 began to cross my face.,surrounding ending:,A pleasant breeze was blowing,making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering for us.,meaningful ending:,What mom did reminded me of a famous saying:Roses given,fragrance in hand.,natural ending:,We continued our travel with a sweet smile
13、.,especially for the ending,Para.1：We were worried about what could be done.After what seemed to be ages,under the hot burning son,I scratched my head,stamped my foot and walked back and forth hopelessly.All of a sudden,one man with his hands waving at mom came into our view.“He is the receptionist
14、from the nursing home.”Mom explained to me.“Why are you here?”Mom asked excitedly.“I just intended to thank you for your flowers formally.”How lucky we were!What amazed me most was that he was a retired garage man.As a consequence,he had our car repaired in a short while.,One possible version,Paragr
15、aph 2：As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.I paced quickly into the flower shop,where a bunch offlowersglowing(绚丽夺目)red in full bloom caught my eye.Having witnessed the effect of my mothers kindness,I decided to send mom the sweet flowers.Soon,the heavenly scent filled the car
16、 again.Mom tried to conceal(隐藏)her excitement,but the glittering(晶莹的)tears filled her eyes.Through this trip,I discovered that,despite my occasional anger towards her,I actually felt proud of her.Just at that moment,a pleasant wind was blowing,making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering for us.,One possible version,Roses given,fragrance in hand,赠人玫瑰，手留余香,Continue the rest part of the story.Polish your writing with your partners.,Assignment,
