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1、作文高分技巧,1、卷面整洁，书写清楚2、构思简单，少犯错误3、中心突出，层次分明4、固定经典，名言注目5、重在变化，宁简勿滥,熟悉老师的评分习惯,评分重点:文章的结构和语言水平两个基本点:闪光点和语法点 应对策略:提问法、衔接词语、从句、并列句、谚语总结法、灵活的词汇和句型、以及被动语态等闪光点.“It is not what you say/write,but how you say/write it that counts for much more.“Give the teacher exactly what he/she wants to see.”给阅卷老师最想要看到的。,最常用的写
2、作模式,综观近几年的四级考试作文,尽管实用性提高了，但行文大多可以套用:“中心句1、2、3展开句”模式。每段第一句是topic sentence，改编自该段相对应的中文提纲，后面的1、2、3句是衔接词，每句后接分支观点,尽量多用衔接词。利:中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考生构思结构的时间。弊:忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型,对策:多掌握常用词句,多运用不同的句型,多使用不同的衔接词,时间分配写作:时间共30分钟，分值共142分9:00发答题卡，9：10分9：40作文正确涂卡后可以构思作文，约有5分钟左右先用铅笔写，再用钢笔定稿审题构思-3分钟拟定提纲-5分钟正文写作-20分钟检查修改-2分
3、钟,考试作文的润色和修改只需要达到三个目的：1.拼写正确，看文章中是否有汉字、多余符号、糊乱涂改、划线、和错别字；2.搭配正确,动宾,动词短语,形容词与副词,非谓语动词等；3.语法正确，特别是人称、时态、和单复数的不一致。,衔接词是文章逻辑关系的体现，可用于各段,且各段尽量用不同的衔接词,多用为妙.,“起”的过渡词：nowadays,in the first place,for one thing,on the one hand,“承”的过渡词：in the second place,for another,(besides,moreover,furthermore,obviously,in
4、addition,in other words,)what is more；“转”的过渡词：however,on the other hand,but,instead,conversely；“合”的过渡词：last but not least,It followed that(由此可见),therefore,as a result,in short,in brief,in a word,in conclusion。,Key Sentences for CET-4 Writing 一)开篇,When it comes to,peoples opinions differ from each ot
5、her.Recently the problem of X has been brought into focus.has become a heated topic.has aroused great concern.Nowadays there is a growing concern over.,There is a public discussion today about It is said/reported/estimated/believed/suggested+thatWith the rapid development of.,According to a recent s
6、urvey,.,二)结尾,As far as I am concerned,+主句As is mentioned above,we may safely come to the conclusion that From what has been discussed/mentioned above,we can draw the conclusion that.Judging from all evidence offered,we may safely come to the conclusion that,In summary/conclusion,if we continue to ig
7、nore the above-mentioned issue,more problems will crop up.To solve the above-mentioned problem,we must.It is high time that strict/efficient measures were taken to stop V-ing.It is necessary/essential that steps/measures should be taken to V.It is high time that we should take measures to It is esse
8、ntial that effective measures should be taken to What really matters is that+从句 not that从句 重要的是 而不是,三）比较,1）利大于弊 The advantages of A far outweigh its disadvantages.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.2)利弊并存Just as every coin has two sides,everything has its advantages and disadvantag
9、es.Evidently,it has both negative and positive effects.,3)求异/同,A and B differ in several ways.A and B has several points in common.The same is true of B.4)It is reasonable to maintain that.but it would be foolish to claim that.People used to think.,but things are different now.,四)原因,1）A number of fa
10、ctors might contribute to/lead to/account for the phenomenon.2）The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that.3）The change in.largely results from the fact that.4）Another contributing factor(cause)is.,5)Some reasons are responsible for this.6)There are lots of reasons responsible for the dramatic gr
11、owth/decrease.7)The reason why is that8)It is because,五)后果,1）It may give rise to/result in a lot of problems.2）The immediate result it produces is.3）It will exercise a profound influence upon.4）Its consequence can be so great that+从句.5）A good case in point is.表示典型的例子,六)证明,1)No one can deny the fact
12、that.2)Recent studies indicate that.3)There is sufficient evidence to show that+从句.,That 引导的名词从句,功能：它相当于一个名词，可以充当主语、宾语、表语、同位语、介宾.that 无具体含义，只有语法功能,有时可省,有时不可省.句型：It+be+adj./N./NP/V/V-ed+that Eg.It is obvious that money does not grow on trees.It is common knowledge(that)the earth goes round the sun.It
13、 seems/happens/occurs to me that It is believed that,That引导的主语从句句型,It+be+N.that eg.It is a fact that=事实是It is common knowledge that=是常识It is a question that=是个问题It is a pity that=可惜的是It is an honor that=非常荣幸It is a shame that=真是可耻It is a wonder that.=真是奇迹,It+be+adj.+that,It is certain that=诚然It is s
14、trange that=很奇怪,奇怪的是It is clear/evident/obvious that=很清楚,很显然It is(un)likely/probable that=很可能It is better that=最好It is natural that=很自然It is essential that=很必要,It+be+V-ed that,It is said/reported/estimated/believed/suggested+thatIt has been proved that=已经证明It must be pointed that=必须指出It is demanded
15、that=按要求以上句型在表示建议、要求、命令等意思时，从句要用虚拟，即(should+)V,It+Vi+that,eg.It seems that=好象是It happened/happens that=碰巧It followed that=由此可见It matters that=要紧的是(=What matters is that not that)It occurred to me that=我想到It struck me that=我突然想到,1.对比论述型作文模版,Is Money All Powerful?1.一些人认为2.另一些人认为3.我的看法 The Pros and Con
16、s of Dormitory Life 1.很多人认为学校应该要求大学生住在宿舍内，理由是2.很多人认为学校不应该强制大学生住在宿舍，理由是3.在我看来，.结构模式：第一段：导言+观点A。提出问题，阐明甲方观点及理由。第二段：观点B。阐明乙方观点及理由。第三段：我的观点。写作重点在以对比的方式展开两种对立观点,1)When it comes to _,peoples opinions differ.2)Many people believe that _.3)For one thing,_.4)For another,_.5)Some people,however,take a differe
17、nt attitude.6)They regard_.7)In their views,_.8)Furthermore,_.9)As far as I am concerned,_.10)On the one hand,_.11)On the other hand,_.12)So _.填充内容第一段 1）文章主题 2）一些人的观点 3）理由一 4）理由二 第二段 5）另一些人反对 6）另一些人的观点 7）理由一 8）理由二第三段 9）作者自己的观点，看法 10）论点一 11）论点二 12）总结上文,范文,1)When it comes to whether university authori
18、ties should require students to live in dormitory,peoples opinions differ.2)Many people believe that there are great advantages of dormitory life.3)For one thing,students have the chance of enjoying the friendship of their roommates.This can be the most precious memory they have later in life.4)For
19、another,university dormitories do not cost much,while leaving off campus can be very expensive.Let alone the issue of security.,5)Some people,however,take a different attitude.6)They regard dormitory as an undesirable place.7)In their views,since 4 to 8 people live in one dormitory,there is not enou
20、gh privacy.8)Furthermore,dormitory is troublesome because it is very likely that one could have clashes with his dorm mates.,9)As far as I am concerned,students benefit greatly from dormitory life.10)On the one hand,dormitory life provides precious lessons on how to communicate with others.11)On the
21、 other hand,students do not feel lonely.There are always people of the same age around.And when they have trouble,there are always helping hands in the dormitory.12)So why live off campus while there is good life right here?Come and enjoy dormitory life.,The Pros and Cons of May 1st Golden Week,1、一些
22、人认为保留五一黄金周，赞成理由是2、另一些人认为取消五一黄金周，理由是3、我的看法是,1)When it comes to _,peoples opinions differ.2)Many people believe that _.3)For one thing,_.4)For another,_.5)Some people,however,take a different attitude.6)They regard.as_.7)In their views,_.8)Furthermore,_.9)As far as I am concerned,_.10)On the one hand,
23、_.11)On the other hand,_.12)So _.,2.问题解决型模版,该类的作文通常首先提出一个有待解决的问题，然后要求考生就该问题提出解决方法、途径，有时还要求考生最后谈论适合自己的方法。How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas,结构模式：,第一段：导言。描述现状、形势、困难，提出问题。第二段：方法。列举说明处理某事的方式或者解决某个问题的途径。第三段：评价、建议或个人选择。针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并简述理由。本题型的写作重点在“how”,即解决办法。,How to Succeed in a Job Intervie
24、w,1、面试在求职过程中的作用.2、取得面试成功的因素：仪表,举止,谈吐,能力,专业知识,自信,实事求是,How to Succeed in a Job Interview,1)With the development of _,_.2)So it is of great importance for us to_.3)On the one hand,_.4)On the other hand_.5)To _,we have figured out many ways to _.6)First,_.7)Second,_.8)Finally,_.9)In a word,_.10)To sum u
25、p,_.11)It is high time for us to _.12)Therefore_.填充内容1）问题出现的背景2）提出问题3）必要性或后果一 4）必要性或后果二5）提出解决问题的方法 6）方法一 7）方法二8）方法三 9）总结上文10）重申主题 11）进一步强调主题 12）总结上文,范文,1)With the development of our modern society,the interview is becoming more and more important in job-hunting.2)So it is of great importance for us
26、to master skills on interview.3)On the one hand,if a job seeker can leave a good impression on the mind of the interviewer,he may be lucky enough to get the job competed for by many applicants.4)On the other hand,if the job hunter gives a poor performance during the interview,he is unlikely to stand
27、 a chance.,5)To be successful in a job interview,we have figured out many ways to make an excellent performance in an interview.6)First,the applicant ought to pay attention to his appearance and manner of speaking.7)Second,he is supposed to display his ability.8)Finally,a really impressive job seeke
28、r must convey a sense of self-confidence.9)In a word,if the interviewee displays these characteristics and presents his most attractive qualities during the interview,the interviewer might make an on-the-spot decision to take him on.,10)To sum up,the job interview is indeed important.11)It is high t
29、ime for us to pay attention to the skills.12)Therefore,if the interviewee has made full preparations for it and given a fairly confident and honest performance,his or her success can be ensured.,Online Shopping,With the development of technology,online shopping has become popular in peoples daily li
30、fe.As many of us might have witnessed,more people are buying products through the Internet.And to facilitate online purchase,stores provide pictures of their products together with other illustrations on the websites.Besides,online products range from small items such as clothes and books to large o
31、nes like computers.,Undoubtedly,online shopping has brought us many conveniences.Yet its potential dangers to the consumer could not be ignored.One possible risk is that consumers might not get the exact product they want because the information provided might not be enough or reliable.For a simple
32、example,a consumer who wants to buy a pair of shoes might end up getting a pair with desired style but unfit sizes.,After all,people have to try themselves when buying clothes or shoes.Moreover,if consumers do not pay attention to the credibility of online stores,they might get cheated.,Therefore,co
33、nsumers should firstly be aware of the credibility of an online store.Secondly,people should not jump on the bandwagon because not all online shopping brings about convenience.Instead,they have to make their own judgment as to the kind of products that could be bought online.Thus,they could avoid po
34、ssible trouble causing by inadequate or inaccurate information provided by an online store.,3、道理论证型模版,道理论证型要求考生针对反映生活哲理的某个成语、格言、谚语、警句等做出解释，并论证其寓意的正确性。结构模式：第一段：提出某种观点或现象第二段：论证。用举例法或正反证法论述其意义。第三段：结论。再次强调主题，或表明自己的态度。本题型的写作重点在解释和举例论证。,布局谋篇,结合题目及提纲，可判定这是一篇道理论论证型的文章；文章的主题是做人应该诚实。第一段 以说明文为主，列举社会上许多不诚实的现象，比
35、如考试作弊，报纸杂志广播电视经常披露的虚假广告，众所周知的刘晓庆逃税案等。第二段 做人应该诚实，诚实利人利己。通过正面展开论述。第三段 重述主题，结束全文。,It Pays to Be Honest,It Pays to Be Honest,1、当前社会存在许多不诚实的现象2、诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实 1)It is well-known that_.2)For example,_.3)And_.4)Whats more,_.5)Even_.6)However,_.7)First of all,_.8)Meanwhile,_.9)And _.10)Therefore,_.11)In a wo
36、rd,_.12)It pays to_.填充内容1）提出主题或现象2）举例一3）举例二 4）或 5）6）主题词 7）论证一 8）论证二 9）论证三10）总结上文 11）总结全文 12）强调主题,范文,1)It is well-known that nowadays dishonesty is a common phenomenon in society.2)For example,many good hearted doctors would not tell dying patients about their real condition.3)And poor students tend
37、to cheat on the exams.4)Whats more,greedy advertisers,armed with misleading advertisements,may lure customers into buying fake commodities.5)Even such“decent”and famous figures as Liu Xiaoqing,once considered Chinas movie queen,have cheated the government on income taxes.,6)However,honesty is always
38、 seen as an important part of the human character.7)First of all,if you treat others fairly,those associating with you will certainly profit from your sincerity.8)Meanwhile,a sense of trust builds up in their hearts,which,in turn,will earn you more true friends.9)And that will benefit you in the lon
39、g run.10)Therefore,it is essential for everyone to maintain an honest attitude towards the whole society.11)In a word,honesty wins trust,respect and honor.12)It pays to be honest.,Humor1、幽默的重要性2、幽默对身心健康及人际关系的积极作用3、因此,范文,1)It is well-known that a sense of humor is Gods gift to mankind.2)For example,a
40、 humorous person is often popular with his friends and colleagues.3)And it is born within everyones heart.4)Whats more,it has to been developed.5)Even humor has to been cultivated with great efforts.,6)However,some people havent realized the benefit of humor to us in many respects.7)First of all,hum
41、or can help us maintain physical as well as mental well being.8)Meanwhile,it can help us live in harmony with others.9)And when we have misunderstanding and tension with others in our work or study,humor may ease the problems more quickly than angry words or quarrels.,10)Therefore,a sense of humor i
42、s really one of the keys to happiness.11)In a word,humor gives us great enjoyment to life and makes it worth living.12)It pays to be humorous.,4、图表分析型模版,图表作文的命题目的并不是简单考查考生描述图表表面内容的水平，而更着重于测试考生分析问题，即对图表深层含义领会挖掘的能力以及阐述能力。审题时增加了读图的步骤。文章中要考虑关键数据的引用.即体现趋势或者变化的重要数据，而绝对不能毫无目的地大量照搬堆砌.,BACK,两种形式:一种是统计表(table
43、)，另外一种是统计图(graph),如:曲线图(line graph)、柱形图(bar graph)和饼图(pie graph)等。图表作文的体裁以说明文和描写文为主。写作模式:第一段：描写数据的主要变化趋势，对数据进行分析比较，总结归纳图表表面所呈现的主要特征。第二段：分析揭示表象后面的原因。第三段：下结论。,Student Use of Computer,1、上图所示为1995年，2000年，2007年某大学生使用计算机 的情况，请描述其变化；2、请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途，价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；3、你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。,1995,20
44、00,2007,2,4,6,8,10,12,14,16,18,20,布局谋篇,1、结合题目及提纲，可判定这是一篇图表作文，是一个柱状图表；体裁是说明文，文章主题是大学生使用计算机的情况。2、依据提纲内容，转换成相应的三段式结构模式：第一段 概述图表内容，尤其是突出的数据变化。第二段 分析这些变化产生的原因。第三段 指出大学生使用计算机的困难或问题,范文,1)As is clearly shown in the chart,students are now spending much more time on the computer,from one hour to four hours pe
45、r week between 1995 and 2000.2)Especially,it increases sharply to twenty hours in the year of 2007.3)There are three reasons for this phenomenon.,4)To begin with,due to the sharp decline in price of personal computer,most college students now can afford one.5)In addition,they find the computer a won
46、derful thing to have fun with.6)For example,they can chat through QQ or playing games online.7)Last but not the least,from Internet,they can learn things much more quickly than simply from reading books so that they can secure a good job in the future.8)In short,low price,increasing awareness of hav
47、ing fun or getting information from Internet make students use computers a lot.,9)As for me,there are some complaints from both teachers and students.10)On the one hand,students complain about the less availability of computers and slow speed of the Network.11)On the other hand,some teachers worry t
48、hat the much more time spent playing computer games or surfing online will lead students to ignore their studies and even do cheating instead of doing research by their own.12)In brief,in spite of problems concerning the use of computer,we cant deny that computer is of more merits than defects.,Task
49、 4 Rising Divorce Rates in China 1、描述图表所反映的问题 2、你认为最近几年中国离婚率高的原因是什么,1967,1977,1987,1997,2007,1,10,3,8,6,Rising Divorce Rates in China,1)As is clearly shown in the chart,_ between _and _.2)Especially,_.3)There are three reasons for _.4)To begin with,_.5)In addition,_.6)For example,_.7)Last but not th
50、e least,_.8)In short,_ 9)As for me,_.10)On the one hand,_.11)On the other hand,_.12)In brief,_.填充内容1）图表总体描述+年代+年代2）指出突出的数据变化3）具体表示急剧上升下降或特殊现象的词 4）叙述第一个原因5）叙述第二个原因 6）具体例证 7）叙述最后一个原因8）总结上文 9）自己的观点10）理由一 11）理由二 12）总结上文,范文,1)As is clearly shown in the chart,China has experienced a dramatic increase in t
