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1、读后续写XX写作阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写题目Wrappingpaperxxxeverywhereasxxxxopenedhergift.boxhadapictureofaprettygirl.Shewaswearingwhiteiceskatesandturningaroundafrozenpond.lookedupatherxxxxandunclewithherbigbrowneyes.zzFigureskates?Wow!Howniceofyou!But/xxxlittlegirlhesitated,.butIdontknowhowto
2、skate.Shelookedembarrassed.Dontworry/saidxxxxLisa.Thatsthefunpartlearninghowtodoit!”Thatsright/saidUncleGeorge.Wewilltakeyoutotheicerink（冰场）andallgoskatingtogether.t,dontknow.”saidCali.Shewasnttoosureshewasgoingtobeabletodoit.Sometimesshehadahardtimelearningnewthings.Shelookedagainatthehappygirlonth
3、ebox.Itdidlooklikefun.Caliimaginedherselfmovingandturningontheicelikearealfigureskater.zzOkay/sheagreed,zlet,sdoit!”nextdayCaliwenttotheskatingrinkwithherauntanduncle.Hereyestwinkledandherfacelitupwithexcitementasshelookedattheotherskatersaroundher.Shesatdownonthebenchandslippedherfeetintotheskates.
4、Holdingthestringsinherfingers,shecouldnotfigureouthowtotiethemup.,dontknowhowtodoit/shesaid.Shefeltsadthatthiswasanotherthingshecouldntdo.“Letmeshowyou.Herauntbentdownononeknee,explaininghowtoputthestringsaroundthesmallhooks（钩子）Thenshetiedthemintoatightbow.Now,youdotheotherskateyourself.Illhelpyouif
5、youneedit.Calibentovertheskateanddidwhatheraunthadshowedher.Hertonguestuckoutofthesideofhermouthasshepaidattention.Afterafewtries,sheworkedouthowtocrossthestringsaroundthehooks.Heraunthelpedmakesurethestringswerexxxxandtight.zzYoudidit!”smiledheraunt,pattingCaliontheback.Paragraph1:zzTimetohittheice
6、/herunclesaid.Paragraph2:Oof!Shefelldown,hard.范文一“Timetohittheice/herunclesaid.LegstremblingandpalmsSWeating（独立主格）,Caliputoneofherfeetcautiouslyonthesmoothsurfaceoftherink.Dontworry!Wewillholdyourhandsandyoustandbetweenus.Caligraduallygrabbedtheirhandsandmadeherfirststepontothesmoothice.Shegrinned（咧
7、嘴笑着）andtriedtakingafewsteps.zzGoodzCali.Nowtrytoglide（滑）forabitlonger/suggestedheraunt.Thenheruncleskatedinfrontofherwhileherauntguidedherfrombehind.wSkatetoyourunclenow/shesaid,pushingheronthebackalittletogetmorespeed.Caliglidedunsteadilytowardsheruncle,takingsmallstepsandfightingforbalance（分词做伴随）.
8、Atthatmoment,askaterwaszoomingpasther.Shestartedtogetnervousagainandlostherbalance.（就在那时，一个溜冰者从她身边疾驰而过,她又开始紧张，失去了平衡。）Oof!Shefelldown,hard.（4）Ithurtsomuch.Sheclosedhereyesandtriednottocrybuttearsrolleddownhercheeksuncontrollably.Aunt/swordsechoinginhermind（独立主格结构），Calistruggledtoherfeetandxxxxadeepbr
9、eathzdeterminedtogiveitanothertryBebrave.Keepgoing.Smallsteps.Yes!,Minutestickingaway（时间滴滴答答地流逝），shecouldskatealmostallthewayaroundtherinkbyherself!Herauntcaughtuptoherandxxxherhand.zzLookatyou!Youareworkingsohardanddoingsowell.Wereproudofyou/Withasenseoffulfillmentwellingupfromherbottom（with结构）zCal
10、ihadtastedthecharmoflearningnewthingsforthefirsttime.“Timetohittheice/herunclesaid.Ashehelpedherwalktotheedgeoftherinkzhesaid,zzWewillholdyourhandsandyoustandbetweenus.Calitheirhandsinhersandmadeherfirststepontothesmoothice.Shegrinnedandtriedtakingafewsteps.,zGood,Cali.Nowtrytoglideononefootforjusta
11、secondlongeroneachfootasyouwalk/suggestedheraunt.Thenheruncleskatedinfrontofherwhileherauntguidedherfrombehind.zzSkatetoyourunclenowshesaid,pushingheronthebackalittletogetmorespeed.Caliglidedunsteadilytowardsheruncle,takingsmallstepsandfightingforbalance.Whenshereachedheruclezheencouragedhertotryito
12、nherown.Caliwasnttoosureaboutthat.Itseemedlikeeveryoneelsewaszoomingpasther.Shestartedtogetnervous.Shelostherbalance.Oof!Shefelldown,hard.Ithurt.Sheclosedhereyesandtriednottocry.Inamoment,herunclewashelpingherbackonfeet.Hesmiledintohereyes.zzEveryonefallsdownthefirstfewtimes.Youjusthavetogetbackupag
13、ain.Calitookadeepbreath.“Okay,Icandothis.Sheskatedawayfromheruncletowardthecrowd.Asshewobbled,shetalkedtoherself.zzBebrave.Keepgoing.Smallsteps.Yes!”Shehadskatedalmostallthewayaroundtherinkbyherself!HerauntcaughtuptoherandtookherhadLookatyou!Youareworkingsohardanddoingsowell.Wezreproudofyou/saidxLis
14、a.续写题目阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Gocheckouttheicewhilewegobackandgetthegoal.IcanremembermyteenagefriendssayingthatastheydroppedmeoffbytheedgeofxxxxxPondinFortSalonga.GrowinguponLongIslandinthe1960sand1970s,myfriendsandIcouldntwaitforschoolbreakbetweenChristmasandthenewyear.Itwastimetogetou
15、ttheiceskatesandplayhockey.BackthenzinDecember,manypondsandlakeswouldfreeze.OneofmyfavoriteswasBlanchardLakeiNorthport7orwhatwecalledthecove.Itwouldgettoocrowded,though,sowe,dgotoCenterportsMillPond,whichlookedlikedeepwater;butitwasnt.xxxtothatmorningwhenIwasdroppedoffatPond.MyfriendsandIrealizedtha
16、tweforgottobringthegoaltoshootthexxxx（冰球）into,sowhiletheywentback,Iwasgoingtotesttheice.Istartedalongtheedgeandfeltitwassolid.Wehadjusthadacoldsnap（寒流）forafewdays,soIdidntthinktherewouldbeanyproblem.AsIriskedfartherout,theicegotcleareranditwasexcitingtoseeunderwaterplantsundertheice.Suddenly,Ihearda
17、massivecrackingsoundthatseemedtobeallaroundme.Iinstinctivelybenttomykneestonotbreakthroughtheicelikeastraighttorpedo（鱼雷）.ItwastoolateBeforeIknewit,Iwasinthewaterwithjustmyheadstickingoutandmyarmswavingwhilestillholdingmyhockeystick.Noonewasaroundexceptonepersonatthefarendofthepondwhocouldnthearmycri
18、esforhelp.Iwasshortofbreathwhiletryingtosolvemycrisis.Paragraph1:Usingallmystrength,Ihammeredthecuttingedgeofmystickintotheiceaheadofme.Paragraph2:danger,however;wasntover.Paragraph1：Usingallmystrength,Ihammeredthecuttingedgeofmystickintotheiceaheadofme.Itworked,forawhile.AsIstruggledtoclimbbackup,t
19、hesoundofacrackpiercedthroughmyearsandheart.Holdingthesticktightly,Ifroze,icycurrentsnumbingmybodyandwashingmyhopeaway.Everysecondpastwasatorturewiththesensationofmyextremitiesrobbedbythecold.Finally,atthemomentwhenIbegantoloseconsciousnessandgripofthestick,Iheardthemostwonderfulsound,myfriendscalli
20、ngmyname.Paragraph2：Thedanger;howeverwasntover.AfterIrespondedwithmytremblingvoice,theycarefullywalkedtowardsme.xxxthepressurethatcamewithapproachingstepsbecomethelaststraw.Withaloudcrack,thestickfellandmyheartsank.Unwillingtosurrender;IsqueezedhoweverinfinitesimalstrengthIhadinmeandswamtowardsmyfriendswhiletheylayontheground,feetinhands,withmyfriendatfrontreachingdangerouslyanddesperatelyoutforme.Onthatcoldestdayofmylife,Iwasluckyenoughtohavecaughtthewarmestthingmyfriendshand.
