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1、WELCOME,1.Do you have any trouble in writing English?2.What are they?,English Writing 英语书面表达训练,课堂练习,写一篇短文,书面表达请根据下面的提示,以“Internet and Our life”写一篇文章,80个词左右。开头已给出。 1、21世纪是时代信息,随着科技的发展,信息越来越重要。 2、电脑改变着我们的生活。电脑带来了崭新的联系方式,缩小了世界。电脑提供了大量的信息,满足了人们的需要。 提示: communication n. 联系,交流 communicate v. 联系 Internet a
2、nd Our life It is said that the 21st century is the Information Age.,作业选评,要改进吗?,为什么?,精彩范文赏析,It is said that the 21st century is the Information Age. With the development of science and technology, information has become more and more important to everyone. Nowadays, more and more people have their o
3、wn computers and the Internet plays a very important part in their daily life. First, the Internet brings us a new way of communication. In every corner of the world we can find internet. We can communicate with our relatives and friends living abroad on the internet. Second, the internet brings us
4、a lot of information. We can know what is happening in the world and what were interested in. With the internet, we can see the world has become smaller and smaller.,书面表达,六 步 法,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who
5、 did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整要扣分,第二步 抓要点,时态直达 语态到位,介/副词紧随,抓要点,配动词,第三步 扩展成句,把要点变成完整的句子。,注意使用介/副词,第四步 连句成文,增加细节 呼应首尾,句与句相连,词与词搭配,第五步 查错改错,主谓一致吗?,时态正确吗?,语态正确吗?,有“半截话”吗?,第六步 誊写,卷面整洁不一定加分,卷面潦草一定要扣分!,Have A Try!,小结,审题,抓点造句,成文改错,誉写,作业,复习本课要点背诵精彩范文,Thank you,