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1、范文赏析 Today, more and more students go to school with mobile phones. Students attitudes towards this vary from person to person. Those who support this say it helps students to keep in touch with their parents and friends. Moreover, using mobile phones can be fun. However, other students hold the opp
2、osite opinion. They think that using mobile phones can cause problems.Firstly, students with mobile phones at school do not concentrate on studying during class, but play games or send text messages instead. Besides, it costs a lot to use a mobile phone. As for me, there is no denying that using mob
3、ile phones has its advantages, but Id still prefer students to use them at home because study should come first.,1,书面表达系列讲练 之 赢取高分策略,2,NMET书面表达评分原则,1、先根据文章的内容,语言和整体感觉初步确定档次。,第五档. 2125分第四档. 1620分第三档. 1115分,第二档. 610分 第一档. 15分 0分,3,语言地道，规范,覆盖所有内容要点,2、主要内容： 内容要点； 词汇和语法的数量和准确性； 上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和
4、词汇,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,4,3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。,5,4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。,5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,6,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,7,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We
5、 all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.,The plan turned out to be a failure.,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,一、怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him .,A good ide
6、a occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free for the students there.,8,二 丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。,1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old gr
7、anny. I do hope you can come if possible.,9,3、 倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.5、 with短语 e.g. I saw a young
8、 lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.,10,6、 定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各种名词性从句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We sh
9、ould do a favour to whoever needs help at present.,11,8、 各种状语从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport
10、. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily.,12,三 高考大纲中常用的连接词1.表示递进; 另外，还有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.,13,3. 表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; there
11、fore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否则: or else,14,5. 表示时间关系 当 的时候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 后来， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近来: lately; recently 自从 :since 从那时起: from then on,常见的对称关系的过渡词语1. For one thing, for a
12、nother thing, 2. On one hand, on the other hand, ,15,6. 表示特定的顺序关系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end；last but not least7. 换一种方法表述 换句话说: in other words; that is to say;,16,8. 进行举例说明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9. 用于陈述事实 实际上: in fact; actually; a
13、s a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth,17,10. 对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word；in conclusion; ;. To sum up ; in brief 其它常用到的表达1.in terms of 就而言2.as far as be concerned 3. in my opinion/ view 4. As far as I know 5. As for sb,18,假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题
14、为“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。 请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1汽车虽然便利但带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题； 2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、 有利健康等。 参考词汇：低碳生活 lowcarbon life节能 energy saving 注意： 1. 词数： 120词左右； 2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出， 且该部分不计入总词数。,Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles” _ _ _,1
15、9,Dear classmates, Im very glad to have this chance to talk to you. The topic of my speech is Lets ride a bicycle. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caus
16、ed some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve these problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont giv
17、e off waste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is good for our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you for listening!,20,2001年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。 I will t
18、ell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspaper
19、s and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.,17分,21,高考满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homew
20、ork to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up
21、late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.,22,书面表达常用语句,书信 Thanks for your last letter. I am writing just to inform you In reply to your last letter, I am writing to explain the two questions as follows: ,开 头,Looking forward to your reply/heari
22、ng from you! Thanks for your consideration. Do remember me to your parents!,结 尾,23,2. 叙事 It is quite obvious/clear that ( 很显然) There is no doubt that (毫无疑问) Take as an example. (以为例） On one hand, on the other hand (一方面，另一方面) Only in this way shall we (只有这样我们才能) As far asis concerned, I prefer(就而言，我更
23、) Measures/Action should be taken to(必须采取措施去) For the reasons given above, I feel that(鉴于以上原因，我觉得 What these people fail to consider is that(这些人没有想到的是.) Undoubtedly there is a long way to go before(毫无疑问要 还有很长的路要走）,24,Therefore, I strongly recommend that (因此， 我强烈建议All the facts show that（所有的事实显示) I l
24、ike not only because but also because(我喜欢 不仅因为而且因为) I am writing to you to inquire about(我写信给你想询问) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at(我给你 写信表示我对的不满） I apologize to you for(我为向你道歉） I am grateful to you for(我为向你表示感谢） Mr. Green, my best friend, is teaching Mr. Green, a favorite teacher from the USA, is teaching,25,
