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10、状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,片段二：冯刚的学习成绩一直不太好，每次考试结束，是他最害怕的时候，因为少不了又要被爸爸训斥。爸爸每次骂完他，总是说：“我爱你，才会这样严格要求你。”,丽丽：我认为冯刚爸爸的教育方式也不好，每次考完试后都训斥冯刚，这样会导致冯刚害怕考试，从而对学习失去信心。我的爸爸就不这样。每次考完试，我的爸爸总是会鼓励我继续努力，然后帮助我分析失败原因，耐心讲解，让我重新树立信心，克服学习中的困难。,片段三： 李路杰对什么东西都很好奇，喜欢动手试一试。有一次，李路杰把家里的电话机拆了，却再也装不好了。爸爸知道了，没有批评他，而是亲切地说：“既然你能拆开，就一定能把它装起来。
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13、元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,豆豆：我认为第三个故事中李路杰的爸爸的做法很好。他的做法既帮助李路杰树立了克服困难的信心，又保护了孩子的好奇心。所以在孩子失败的时候，家长要给孩子启发、鼓励，要帮孩子树立克服困难的勇气和信心，这样才会有助于孩子的健康成长。,读了这些，你想到了谁？爸爸还是妈妈？你想跟他们说点什么？是否有那么一件事或几件事让你至今难忘？请别出声，默默地回忆吧。想想：爸爸或妈妈的一举手一投足是不是都充满了对你的爱呢？,习作内容,1.敞开心扉，写一写最想对爸爸妈妈说的话。表达出真情实感。 2.写完后读给爸爸妈妈听。,你曾经有过不理解父母的时候，但通过一些事情，体会到了父母
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19、： 1.开门见山式开头。 2.交代式开头。 3.倒叙式开头。 4.提问式开头。 5.描写法开头。 6.引用法开头。 7.总起法开头。建议开篇点题，点明对父母的感激、想念之情。,【写好文章的开头】,“小雅，怎么还在看电视啊，还不快去写作业？一会儿再看看作文书去！”听！“河东狮吼”又开始了。我的眉头紧锁,开门见山法,倒叙开头法,说到父母的爱，我不禁想起去年我过生日的事情来。,抒发情感开头法,父爱，如大海般深沉而宽广。,爸爸妈妈的爱仿佛是无边无际的大海，能包容我的喜、怒、哀、乐。,引用材料法,唐朝诗人孟郊说的好：“慈母手中线，游子身上衣。临行密密缝，意恐迟迟归。谁言寸草心，报得三春晖。”每当读到这首
20、诗，我就想起,在习作中，不但要会写开头段、结尾段，还要会写中间段。事情的主要部分就是中间段。中间段应分为几个自然段写。常用的方法有三种： 1.按事情发展变化的顺序分段写。 2.按不同事情的归类分段写。 3.按对话的先后顺序分段写。,【写好中间段】,通过具体事例表现人物特点，叙事要详略得当，重点突出。同时写几件事情，要分清主次，即便是在一件事情当中，也要合理安排详略，重点写好与中心关系密切的情节，其他内容可以一笔带过。,例：记得有一回，我突然发起高烧，妈妈看见了，就一个箭步跑过来搂住我，用自己的额头紧贴住我的面颊问我怎么了，我声音颤抖地说：“我热”。妈妈连忙脱下自己的上衣把我裹得严严实实，背起我
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24、着我，我现在真想真诚地对爸爸妈妈说一声：我爱你们！,享受着爸爸妈妈给予我的爱，我真的感到好幸福！,结果交代法,首尾呼应法,感叹法,我们的爸爸妈妈为我们付出了这么多，让我们做一个勤奋懂事又勤劳的好孩子，不辜负爸爸妈妈的一片苦心，从力所能及的事做起。爱妈妈，就给她一个意外的惊喜；爱爸爸，就让他为你感到骄傲。,启发激励法,一、描写人的品质：平易近人 宽宏大度 冰清玉洁 持之以恒锲而不舍 废寝忘食 大义凛然 临危不俱光明磊落 不屈不挠 鞠躬尽瘁 死而后已,【词语积累】,二、描写人的智慧：料事如神 足智多谋 融会贯通 学贯中西博古通今 才华横溢 出类拔萃 博大精深集思广益 举一反三,三、描写人物仪态、风
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28、了医院。,“急急忙忙”说明妈妈很在意“我”，而妈妈背起“我”去医院显然是没有生“我”的气。,在路上，我注意到了妈妈焦急的眼神和急促的脚步，还有慌张的神态。原来妈妈的心里是有我的。妈妈把我送到医院后，让奶奶照顾我，就又准备走。我很生气，抱怨道：“又去上班！不知道在你眼里是工作重要，还是儿子重要！”我,故意大声说出来。但妈妈犹豫了一下，还是走了。 到了中午，奶奶给我送来一个我一直想要的飞机模型。我心里更怀疑了：“奶奶可是不知道我喜欢这个的！是谁送的呢？”我禁不住好奇问奶奶，奶奶说：“唉！乖孙,妈妈离开，再一次激化了矛盾。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元
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