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1、WRITING,评分标准满分15分，分为2，5，8，11，14五档。2分：条理不清，思维混乱，语言支离破碎，大部分句子有错误，且多为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。,8：基本切题，有些地方表达不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。（不多于3个）,分数对应15-100 14-94 13-87 12-80 11-74 10-67 9-60 8-54 7-47 6-40 5-34 4-27 3-20 2-14考试时间：
2、9：10 9：402+20+2,命题范围大学校园：读书学习，课余生活，心态处事社会现象：环境保护，文化生活，社会风尚,命题类型问题解决现象描述正反观点图表名言书信,评判原则内容不重要，语言才重要框架明晰，逻辑合理语言准确，搭配合理对策主题句层次性短语原则多样性,正文：总分总introduction-body-conclusionintroduction：亮点突出，立场鲜明body：逻辑严谨，内容充实conclusion：再次华丽，简短精悍,狮头猪肚凤尾,文章时态一般现在时一般过去时一般将来时现在进行时现在完成时,图画作文写法分段：一，描述2 二，引入2 三，论述3/4 四，结论3各段框架：一：
3、描述图片二：重要性个人观点二：分论点1，2，3（小结）三：总结上文措施(1，2)展望,第一段首句写法：As (is) shown/depicted/described/demonstrated/exhibited/ in the ,According to theAs can be seen from theIt can be seen from/ We can see from,第一段后半句写法：Sb is doing sth (adv) (with) (in/at ), and XX, (adv) is doing sth.,其余部分归入问题解决/观点对立类文章写法（自引入观点部分起）,问
4、题观点文章写法分段：一，引言3 二，论述5 三，结论3各段框架：一：背景普遍观点/现象自己观点/重要性二：主题句分论点句1，2，3，4/总结句三：总结上文措施(1，2)展望,第一段范例 第一句第一部分：（When my eyes caught this topic, I was absorbed in meditation. )With the rapid development of the society / economy / media / our era,第一句第二部分：you may frequently hear of the terms / notions / see the
5、phenomenon of 事件 in your daily life.The current days / months / years / nowadays/ recently / these days / modern society / recent world has witnessed / seen a phenomenon / development / explosion / issue / tendency / problem that 事件Nothing has aroused more attention / characterized / influenced / de
6、termined / shaped our daily lives(discussion) more drastically / sharply / than事件does.,第二句：Its superficially plausible / acceptable / unimportant, but when subjected to careful analysis / consideration, it turns out that it will harm in long run / its advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.Most i
7、ndividuals would maintain it as a significant / important / trifle phenomenonThere is a prevalent / wide spread belief / acknowledge / no denying thatIt is no hard for every individual to observe that,第三句：From where I stand / as for me / as I perceive / as far as my knowledge is concerned / from my
8、personal perspective, it is a significant matter/a matter of vital significance it is a matter which deserves more / extra attention is of vital significance in at least 2/3 aspects / more ways than one.,第二段层次感最好用短语或副词来表达首先：at the first place, first of all, first things first, first and foremost, to
9、 begin with, to start with, for one thing, on one hand其次：in addition, additionally, plus, moreover, whats more, further more, more importantly, more significantly, for another, on the other hand, still最后：at last, lastly, finally, generally, in the end, at the end, last but not least,第一句：Several / ma
10、ny / a number of factors / reasons / causes can be easily found to account for this phenomenon.,第二、三、四句：主要从以下六个万能方面展开论述，如果需要，可以杂糅。个人团体社会经济/物质/科技精神/心理情感/健康教育/知识信息/生态,个人团体社会1. as for individuals, those who. for eg. is the most typical example / case whose success can be attributed to his (special tale
11、nt / skill / ability in)2. in terms of family / company / enterprise, schools / troops / cooperation / culture, .3. from a social aspect, the survival and growth of a group like. is mainly dependent upon.,经济/物质/科技精神/心理情感/健康教育/知识信息/生态 （第一种）1. many a person / a large majority of people, especially the
12、 ., be economically / materially / physically / technologically / academically benefited.2. in terms of / concerning / regarding / with respect to mentality / psychology / emotions, one will intrinsically feel that if.he will.3. when it comes to the point of education / knowledge / information, ther
13、es no doubt that.,第二种1stly, sth will economically benefit sb. because . 2ndly, in terms of psychology, one may intrinsically feel that if . he will. finally, when it comes to the point of education.,key words: mentally satisfied, belongingness, safety / security, self-esteem, respect and recognition
14、 from the public, self actualization, happiness, emptiness, loneliness, solitude, depression, self conceit, self-centered, ignorance, extreme emotional swing, pressure, tension,（段末总结句：）The influence of all the reasons above is beyond controversy / any doubtAll the reasons above have contributed to t
15、he Due to / in consequence of all the reasons above, the 现象 is no wonder prevalent / arouses heated discussionSb is right in saying thatsb made sense in saying that,As the saying goes,In a word, just as the great thinker / my friend / mother once put it / stated,结论第一句第一部分As can be concluded from the
16、 discussion above,What can be concluded from the previous discussion is thatAccording to the previous discussion / taking all the factors into consideration / through what was mentioned above / illustrated by the discussion above, we may safely / naturally / reasonably come to the conclusion that,第一
17、句第二部分several reasons can account for the phenomenon in question there are a variety of underlying reasons / causes / considerations accounting for / leading to the issue,第二句As far as Im concerned, combined efforts / painstaking yet rewarding efforts should be made by. to solve the problem.It goes wi
18、thout saying that 某个原因 is the key factor in that,第三句Only in this way can we have our society more peaceful and harmonious.If it should be realized, our life could be flooded with harmony.Only by doing this can we achieve a glorious future / lead a happier life / can our world become a better one.Bea
19、ring the previous points in mind, we can spend our college years fruitfully and successfully.,第二类文章写法分段：一，引言3 二，正面观点4 三，正面观点4 四，结论3各段框架：一：背景正面观点反面观点二：主题句分论点句1，2，3，三：主题句分论点句1，2，3，四：总结上文我支持的一方展望,第一段范例nothing has received more praise and abuse than主题in the modern world / our daily life.第一句： current day
20、s have witnessed / seen a phenomenon that 事件，toward which some divergent views are often voiced by some conservatives and radicals.,Recently / in recent days, nothing has characterized / influenced / determined / shaped our daily lives(discussion) more drastically / sharply / than the phenomenon / i
21、ssue / tendency that 事件.,第二句： With respect to such an issue, divergent views are ubiquitously / invariably voiced, Some claim that, 但some others claim thatThere is no consensus of opinion among all the individuals as to whether主题is a blessing or a curse / the role of this issue.Some individuals main
22、tain the idea that, 但 as everything has two sides, peoples views on this issue vary from person to person.,That 正面观点is firmly held by some individuals, 但others dont find their agreement to it. 但：on the contrary, by / in contrast, on the other hand, conversely, nonetheless, nevertheless,第二段范例第一句：thos
23、e who lend their support to the positive view have some reasons in varied forms.The positive view exists for several reasons.A number of reasons can be easily found for supporting the positive view of the issue.,第二、三、四句：衔接：首先That 分论点1is of extreme significance in the whole view.That 分论点1 is so indis
24、pensible that some individuals consider it as a major factor.Whats more worth mentioning is that衔接What every one cant fail to understand is that,As is known to all / it is often said thatThere is a prominent fact that,第三段范例第一句：Despite the advantages, it also brings its own problems / disadvantages /
25、 shortcomings.Those who are against / tend to terminate it also come up with some novel ideas to counter the arguments above.第二句：衔接其余同第二段,第四段范例第一句：In conclusion / all in all / to summarize / in a summary / to conclude, the pros and cons of 主题are beyond controversy.Between the two conflicting stand p
26、oints, it is wiser for me to support 自己支持的观点Facing the two conflicting ideas, what we must ensure is that the drawbacks must be rejected and the essence must be absorbed.There is no doubt that the主题has its drawbacks as well as merits.,Taking all the factors into consideration, we can come to the con
27、clusion that with its disadvantages rejected and its essence absorbed, 主题s advantages absolutely outweigh its drawbacks. By doing that, we can lead a happier life if one should . he will be as mentally satisfied as he is economically successful.,Concerning the issue of whether exerts positive or neg
28、ative influence upon a persons overall development, a natural conclusion is made that if one should be motivated by his strong desire for achievement, he will be likely to make great success in his life.,图表作文写法第一段： 概括现象 描述图表第二段： 分析原因 讨论问题 第三段： 结论启示,饼图：pie chart; 柱形图：bar chart; 趋势图：line chart, curve
29、diagram; 表格：table; 流程图：flow chart / sequence diagram; 程序图：processing / procedures diagram,第一段首句写法：As (is Shown / depicted / described / demonstrated / illustrated / exhibited in the thatAccording to theAs can be seen fromshows / reflects / suggests the changes ofIt can be seen from/ We can see fromI
30、t is clear from,It is apparent from The shows the change of over the period from to in the Chart / diagram / table / illustration, (great) changes have taken place from to / changed over time,第二句写法：有几个变量，每个变量有几个数据，搞清楚上升，下降，持平，而后逐次描述。涨：rise, arise, increase by / to, grow, climb, soar, incline, go up，
31、theres an upward trend in the number of.跌：plunge, a sharp drop, decline, go down, sink保持平衡： fixed / remained the same in/remain stable/ level off(out)/remain level,保持在：remain at / stand波动：fluctuate, rebound, undulate, wave / There be ups and downs随时间变化：change over timedouble 翻番quadruple：翻两番近似：about,
32、 around, roughly, in the neighborhood of, approximately, some, or so, or there about程度：dramatically sharp substantially considerably far much a little slightly somewhat marginally,在某年达到顶峰the situation reached a peak in . 达到谷底：situation bottomed out in.两者对比：A decreased year by year while B increased
33、steadily / the difference between A and B lies in.在某几年间：in the X years spanning from to ,A比例最高，其次是BC：A has the highest proportion of., followed by B and C.与成正比/反比be in direct /inverse ratio to/with,占百分之几：account for/ form/comprise/make up/constitute percent 转换话题：in terms of, as fora considerable inc
34、rease / decrease occurred from . to .from.to .the rate of decrease slowed downfrom that year on, there was a gradual declined reduction in the., reaching a figure of.,.year witnessed a sharp rise in.the rise lasted for 10 years and then began to level off in 2000.it falls from 50% in 1990 to 20% in
35、2000, and then the trend reversed, finishing at 28 in 2003the year. witnessed the ofthe rise/drop lasted for . and began to level off in.After a steady decline for a whole decade, . shows signs of leveling off,第二段写法：two reasons, we believe, can account for this phenomenon. （On the one hand，On the ot
36、her hand）We can deduce form this picture that.The picture indicates / conveys the meaning thatThe purpose of the picture is to show us that.More and more people have come to realize.,第三段写法：From the analysis above we can easily draw a conclusion ：Thanks to., an increasing number ofIf such measures we
37、re not taken, the problem of. would have been more serious.As more and more people., much attention should be placed on.No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of . but the common recognition of the necessity of . might be the first step towards change in the right direction.,表示原因，结果owing to result fromIt is precisely becausethat as a result, be responsible forwhich in turn,
