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1、,-receiving and giving,Learing objectives:1.Get the main idea and the plot of given passage.2.Predict the possible plot development according to given setences.3.Share how to express feelings vividly and end your writing differently.,WHEN and WHEREWHY WHO did WHAT to WHOM?,Read for basic information
2、,plot 情节,setting 背景,Main idea:,Between spring and summer,my mom gave flowers to nursing home on the road through the countryside,because leaving flowers for others made her feel good.Unluckily,our car broke down.,Tip1:We can get the main idea with the help of.,5W questions,Read for plots,feelings,AN
3、D language,writersfeelings,Timeline-,writers behaviors,writers behaviors,writers behaviors,writers behaviors,ways to express feelings?,writersfeelings,writersfeelings,writersfeelings,No garage,no passers-by,Read for plots,feelings and language,writers ways to express feelings feelings,were driving,a
4、lways unhappy,impatient,annoyed,“Do you know someone there?”,curious,confused,“Did you leave your name?”,heard the car burst,worriedhopless,somewhere between spring and summer,Suddenly，in the middle of nowhere,Before she started the car,Not long after we continued driving,Suddenly，,adj.,actions,effe
5、ctive dialogues,surroundings,writers behaviors,cried,skimmed,looked back,“What?”,“What did you do with theflowers?”,Tip2:While writing,we can express our inner feelings by,adj.,actions,effective dialogues and surroundings.,rebellious(叛逆的）,times,Feeling analysis,Beginning,always unhappy,development,i
6、mpatient,annoyed,curious,confused,worried hopeless,Climax,The writer has_with his mom.,misunderstanding,Ending,?,Para.1：We were worried about what could be done.,1.How would the writer show their worries?2.What would they do?3.How could para.1 be ended reasonably?,How can we describe ones worries?,P
7、ara.2：As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road,Group talking for the plot developments,Tip 3:Arrange the key words properly in two paragraphs.mom,driving,trip,flowers,car,road,receptionist,silent,name,repair,Group talking for the plot developments,especially for the ending,Para.2：
8、As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.,1.Seeing a flower shop,what would the writer do?2.How would the writer feel?3.How could Para.2 be ended reasonably?,Tip 4:The passage can be ended variously using _ _ _ _.,natural ending,feeling ending,surrounding ending,meaningful ending,
9、etc,the development of the writers feeling?,Para.1：We were worried about what could be done.,1.How would the writer show their worries?2.What would they do?3.How could Para.1 be ended reasonably?,Tip 3:Arrange the key words properly in two paragraphs.mom,driving,trip,flowers,car,road,receptionist,si
10、lent,name,repair,Self-writing,adj./actions/dialogues/similesurroundings,Our car was fixed,Para.2：As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.,1.Seeing a flower shop,what would the writer do?2.How would the writer feel?3.How could Para.2 be ended reasonably?,Tip 4:The passage can be e
11、nded variously using _ _ _ _.,natural ending,feeling ending,surrounding ending,meaningful ending,etc,Selfwriting,Use some descriptive expressions,Exchange and assessment,评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度(cohesion)(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况;(Content(grammar and vocabulary)(4)上下文的连贯性。(Coherence),Para.
12、1：We were worried about what could be done.After what seemed to be ages,under the hot burning son,I scratched my head,stamped my foot and walked back and forth hopelessly.All of a sudden,one man with his hands waving at mom came into our view.“He is the receptionist from the nursing home.”Mom explai
13、ned to me.“Why are you here?”Mom asked excitedly.“I just intended to thank you for your flowers formally.”How lucky we were!What amazed me most was that he was a retired garage man.As a consequence,he had our car repaired in a short while.,One possible version,polish,polish your writing,Paragraph 2：
14、As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.I paced quickly into the flower shop,where a bunch of flowers glowing(绚丽夺目)red in full bloom caught my eyes.Having witnessed the effect of my mothers kindness,I decided to send mom the sweet flowers.Soon,the heavenly scent filled the car ag
15、ain.Mom tried to hide her excitement,but the watery tears filled her eyes.Through this trip,I discovered that,despite my occasional anger towards her,I actually felt proud of her.Just at that moment,a pleasant wind was blowing,making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering us.,One
16、possible version,polish your writing,Appreciate various expressions,Various ways to express worries,adj.:actions:effective dialogues:surroundings:simile:比喻,Worried and depressed,I was wandering along the road aimlessly.,After what seemed to be ages,I scratched my head,stamped my foot and walked back
17、 and forth hopelessly.,“What if no one is willing to help us?Would we die from thirsty?”I murmured in a low voice.,The air was thick and the hot sun was burning us,I stood there clumsily with nothing to do.Deadly silence swallowed the road thoroughly,leaving nothing but hopelessness.,I was walking b
18、ack and forth like an ant on a hot pan.,Different expressions on endings,feeling ending:Just at that moment,a ripple of(一阵)excitement began to cross my face.surrounding ending:A pleasant breeze was blowing,making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering for us.meaningful ending:What mom did reminded me of a famous saying:Roses given,fragrance in hand.,Tip4:The passage can be ended variously using _ _ _ _.,natural ending,feeling ending,surrounding ending,meaningful ending,etc,Assignment,Continue the rest part of the story.Polish your writing with your partners.,
