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11、用两个具体的小事例,写出了妈妈爱玩手机的程度。,我认为低着头玩手机不仅危害我们的健康,而且会对我们交通出行造成很大的安全隐患,沉迷于玩手机还会影响与别人的交往,影响家庭关系的和谐。我们不应该总是玩手机,应该用更多的时间去关心身边的人。,进一步说明自己对这一现象的想法,表明自己的态度,呼吁大家用更多的时间去关心身边的人。,于是,我下定决心,一定要帮妈妈改掉这个坏毛病。我先是找了一个空闲时间,跟妈妈说了一下我的想法。然后我开始监督妈妈。吃饭时,妈妈一玩手机,我就制止她。晚上要睡觉时,妈妈刚拿起手机,我就让她放下手机,陪我聊天,给我讲故事。,这样,不仅让我们的相处更加亲密,还让妈妈渐渐地改掉了爱玩手机这个坏毛病。,对这一现象,写出了自己的改进的办法,亲自帮助妈妈改掉了爱玩手机的坏毛病,有理有据。,妈妈现在很少玩手机了,睡眠也充足了。妈妈自己也觉得越来越有精神了,家里也充满更多的欢笑了,我们一家人都很高兴。,结尾升华了主题,表明爱玩手机的问题解决了之后,家庭会更加幸福快乐。,点评:小作者用具体的事例,讲述了妈妈爱玩手机这一现象,写出了它带来的危害和影响。在表达出自己的想法的同时,还给出对这一现象的具体改进的办法,并亲身实践,有理有据,令人信服。实属一篇难得的佳作。,

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