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1、初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导,brainstorm,Teenagerscolorful life,We study.,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often playsports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,Teenagershealthy life,We study all day.,We like listening to music.,We
2、 play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often playSports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,colorful,healthy,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
3、,审,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.,列,A
4、 lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax and work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,加,加首尾，使结构完整
5、。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.The
6、 people who relax and work well.,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折:but,however（然而）,although,though,after all,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore（因此，所以）5.表示条件:if,unless，as long as6.表示对比:instead,notbut,on the one handon
7、the other hand;7.表示解释:for example,such as,that is to say（换句话说）,in other words;8.表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end;9.表示强调:also,besides,whats more（此外）,actually,in fact,10.表示结论:all in all（总的来说）,altogether,in a word,generally speaki
8、ng,关联词,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.According to it,most people travel.And some people stay at home.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax and work well.,连,We intervi
9、ewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parent
10、s also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax and work well.,美,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,Skill One Make your sentences correct,Good good study,day day up.We should do sports a week once.Save the environment is our duty.There is
11、going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,Skill Two Express in different ways,Our parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers.We
12、shouldnt eat junk food.We should stay away from the junk food.When he spoke,he got more excited.The more he spoke,the more excited he got.We should learn English grammar.Its important to learn English grammar.,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,中考作文评分标准,第一档（9-10分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（7-8分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错
13、误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（5-6分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（3-4分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（0-2分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,书面表达,以“I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考）My dream is to be/to do/to goI enjoy/like/preferTo make my dream come true,I If my dream co
14、mes true,I have a dreamHave you ever watched a bike racing?The riders are cool!Yeah,its my dream to be a professional bike rider.I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode.Since that,Ive been riding for 5 years.Some people think its dangerous,I dont think so.During a bike riding,you wi
15、ll be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly.Exciting?That is!To make my dream come true,Ill practice more after middle school.Also,Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders.I hope my dream will come true,if so,I can enjoy the life I like best.,Passage One,I have a dreamAnybody h
16、as a dream.But different people have different dreams.Most people always dream to be popular or rich.But my dream is very special,I just want to be a bird.Why do I have such a dream?Just because I admire theyre free,they can do everything they want.When theyre flying in the sky,they look beautiful,e
17、ven theyre the most beautiful animals.I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky.However,I know it wont be achieved any more.Its just a dream,in my heart.,Passage Two,Passage Three,I have a dreamMy dream is to be a basketball player.I like it because I think it very interesting.It can m
18、ake me become very happy and healthy.To make me dream come true.I need try to do it.And I need to spend some time on it.I need to practice every day.If my dream comes true,I will try to do it.,Thank you!,All of us have holidays in our daily life,but how do people spend their holiday?We did a survey
19、and here are the results.from Tian Wenhui,Its nothing better than having a rest after working!So how do people rest themselves on vacation?According to our survey,there are several ways.from Luo Zhimin,All in all,different people have different ways to relax themselves.But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday,then we may work better.from Yu Hui,So this year,why not consider going outside?Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work or study.from Zhang Li ai,Homework,当前，全市各学校正开展“好书伴我成长”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给信息，以Growing up with good books”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。,
