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1、托福写作高分满分范文 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：好学生才能接受高等教育?Should higher education be available to all students or only to good students?Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education sh
2、ould be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.写作思路展开结构分析两个观点都有些极端。所以，大家应该先分析，再选择自己的立场。义务教育制度(institution of compulsory education )说明社会已经认识到基础教育(fundamental education) 对所有的人都是必需的。但是大学教育是不是所有人都需要的?这个社会很多职业(比如，饮食业)不需要大学教育。让所有的人都上大学，是不是成为过分的财政负担(
3、financial burden of the government)?用什么样的方法确定一个学生good enough so as to deserve higher education? 考试?考试制度也有缺陷。可能选择的立场比如：我们国家目前是需要更多的人接受大学教育。与此同时，一方面要保障大学教育的质量，另一方面，要改革考试制度，保障考生的公平机会。本话题高分范文赏析Some people believe that only good students should have access to a university education. Others posit that hig
4、her education should be open to everyone, regardless of their academic abilities. I agree with the former opinion. Universities should only allow good students into their programs because these students value the importance of a good education and are interested in furthering their education. Furthe
5、rmore, if all students were allowed into universities, the schools would quickly become saturated, and the quality of education received would diminish. A university education is very important to a good student. This type of student has set his/her sights on a university education from early on, an
6、d has put in the necessary work to earn a place in a good university. Poor students who did not try to achieve good grades in high school obviously do not care about their education, and therefore, do not deserve to go to university. However, if these poor students go back to school and improve thei
7、r grades, they should also be allowed to go to university. Good students are very interested in furthering their education. They have put copious amounts of work into their education, and are interested in learning more. Poor students are usually not as interested in furthering their education. If t
8、hey were interested in this, they would have tried harder to begin with. With that said, let us suppose for a moment that universities did allow all students, regardless of their grades, into university. The school would quickly become overfull, and good students, who really care about their educati
9、on, would suffer because of it. They might not be able to get into the classes they want, and if they do get in, there might be so many students in the class that it is impossible to learn. In conclusion, I think that it is important to save a university education for those who really want itgood st
10、udents. If a poor student wishes to go to university, then he/she will have to return to high school and improve his/her grades.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：儿童是否应该早上学?托福写作难点话题一览Should young children spend most of their time on school studies or playing?Some people think that children should begin their formal
11、education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?两种观点都有些极端。先比较两种观点，然后选择一个折衷的立场。早上学的好处和坏处：好处是很多提前上学的孩子显得聪明，对付学习显得游刃有余(be more than
12、 equal to a task; accomplish a task with ease)。完成formal education的时候比别人年轻，有更多的选择余地。坏处是，经常挨欺负(be bullied; be treated rough)。早熟(precocious)，可能会有副作用(negative effects)。晚上学的好处和坏处：实际上并不吃亏;学习好坏不见得一定跟上学早晚有必然的联系(positive connection)。坏处是，家长如果引导不好，不利于智力发育(development of childs intelligence)。立场：不见得一定要尽早上学;孩子确实应
13、该多花一些时间去玩。但是应该正确引导，因为玩也分为好多种，玩棋牌游戏显然比玩泥巴(play with mud)要有益得多。本话题高分范文赏析Some people believe that it is important for children to begin their education at a very early age, and spend most of their time on academic studies. Others believe that children should spend their time playing instead of studying
14、. To understand the logic behind these two views, we must compare their advantages and disadvantages. If a child spends all of his/her time studying, he/she will advance quickly in school. He/she will learn things early in life that other children, who spent their time playing, will not learn until
15、they are at least a few years older. This child will learn the value of education early on, and will be able to impress his/her parents with his/her knowledge, therefore gaining self-confidence and motivation. If a child spends most of his time playing, he/she will not learn about mathematics and sc
16、ience, but he/she will learn another important skill: socialization. When children spend their time playing together, they learn how to interact with others. They learn how to share things, and how to settle a disagreement amicably. Children can also increase their motor skills if they spend their t
17、ime playing games that involve hand-eye coordination. Both of these perspectives have valid points. However, I think it is best to try and combine playing with learning. If children can learn about the basics of academics in a fun and playful environment, they are likely to become more interested in
18、 it. A very young child has no interest in studying, and I believe that adults must allow children to have fun. Otherwise, the children will grow up to be uncaring, antisocial adults. This does not mean, however, that education is not important. I feel that there is a right time to introduce studyin
19、g and academia to children, and this time is not when they are very young. It is better to wait until the children are at least five or six year old before trying to get them to study.托福考试之托福写作训练分析及范文(1)Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and shoul
20、d spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?参考分析：两种观点都有些极端。先比较两种观点，然后选择一个折衷的立场。早上学的好处和坏处：好处是很多提前上学的孩子显得聪明，对付学习显得游刃有余(be more than equal to a task; accomplish a tas
21、k with ease)。完成formal education的时候比别人年轻，有更多的选择余地。坏处是，经常挨欺负(be bullied; be treated rough)。早熟(precocious)，可能会有副作用(negative effects)。晚上学的好处和坏处：实际上并不吃亏;学习好坏不见得一定跟上学早晚有必然的联系(positive connection)。坏处是，家长如果引导不好，不利于智力发育(development of childs intelligence)。立场：不见得一定要尽早上学;孩子确实应该多花一些时间去玩。但是应该正确引导，因为玩也分为好多种，玩棋牌游戏
22、显然比玩泥巴(play with mud)要有益得多。儿童应当花主要的时间玩(1)人一生只有在儿童的几年是最快乐的，应当让儿童享受这种快乐，给他们未来留下好的印象。(2)儿童玩对性格培养要好(3)儿童在玩的时候，同样也能够自然的学到很多知识。比如说和宠物一起玩，可以知道爱护动物和自然。参考范文：How should children spend their time?In our rapidly changing world people begin to understand more and more that nothing is so valuable but knowledge. E
23、ducation has become an important part of peoples life. Due to this some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. But others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. To my mind
24、 these two views should be balanced so as not to go to the extremes.The first point of view that children should start early on their studies make me assume that it can be harmful and damaging for a childs physical development and personality. As a teacher I have seen the result of beginning educati
25、on too early. Children are deprived of the enjoyment of their childhood years and their intrinsic desire to play. Some children cannot concentrate on their study and keep playing at school. Besides, the children who are not allowed to play and are forced to study can begin to detest the education pr
26、ocess and the teachers. So, to force children to study at an early age can spoil the whole picture.When facing the question of early education it is also important to note that children who begin to study at an early age are often overloaded by studying material and homework, which they are not read
27、y to cope with. Besides some parents neglect their children and do not pay enough attention to the childrens problems at school thinking that they are still young.The second opinion that children should play instead of study also has disadvantages. In this case children are not well prepared for the
28、ir school life at all. They have no idea what he is going to do at school. In addition, research shows that early education can benefit childrens brain development and prepare them better for the futures school education. The most important time for early education could be missed if parents do not
29、send their children to school at an appropriate age.In conclusion I would like to point out that that early education and play should be well balanced so that their enjoyment of childhood that is once in a lifetime would not be deprived. It is quite important for governments to design and implement
30、an appropriate primary education system so that young children can have chances to both learn and play at school.托福备考之独立写作观点分析及范文Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young ch
31、ildren should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?参考分析：两种观点都有些极端。先比较两种观点，然后选择一个折衷的立场。早上学的好处和坏处：好处是很多提前上学的孩子显得聪明，对付学习显得游刃有余(be more than equal to a task; accomplish a task with ease)。完成formal education的时候比别人年轻，有更多的选择余地。坏处是，经常挨欺负(be bullied; be
32、treated rough)。早熟(precocious)，可能会有副作用(negative effects)。晚上学的好处和坏处：实际上并不吃亏;学习好坏不见得一定跟上学早晚有必然的联系(positive connection)。坏处是，家长如果引导不好，不利于智力发育(development of childs intelligence)。立场：不见得一定要尽早上学;孩子确实应该多花一些时间去玩。但是应该正确引导，因为玩也分为好多种，玩棋牌游戏显然比玩泥巴(play with mud)要有益得多。儿童应当花主要的时间玩(1)人一生只有在儿童的几年是最快乐的，应当让儿童享受这种快乐，给他们未
33、来留下好的印象。(2)儿童玩对性格培养要好(3)儿童在玩的时候，同样也能够自然的学到很多知识。比如说和宠物一起玩，可以知道爱护动物和自然。参考范文：How should children spend their time?In our rapidly changing world people begin to understand more and more that nothing is so valuable but knowledge. Education has become an important part of peoples life. Due to this some pe
34、ople think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. But others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. To my mind these two views should be balanced so as not to go to the extremes.The fi
35、rst point of view that children should start early on their studies make me assume that it can be harmful and damaging for a childs physical development and personality. As a teacher I have seen the result of beginning education too early. Children are deprived of the enjoyment of their childhood ye
36、ars and their intrinsic desire to play. Some children cannot concentrate on their study and keep playing at school. Besides, the children who are not allowed to play and are forced to study can begin to detest the education process and the teachers. So, to force children to study at an early age can
37、 spoil the whole picture.When facing the question of early education it is also important to note that children who begin to study at an early age are often overloaded by studying material and homework, which they are not ready to cope with. Besides some parents neglect their children and do not pay
38、 enough attention to the childrens problems at school thinking that they are still young.The second opinion that children should play instead of study also has disadvantages. In this case children are not well prepared for their school life at all. They have no idea what he is going to do at school.
39、 In addition, research shows that early education can benefit childrens brain development and prepare them better for the futures school education. The most important time for early education could be missed if parents do not send their children to school at an appropriate age.In conclusion I would
40、like to point out that that early education and play should be well balanced so that their enjoyment of childhood that is once in a lifetime would not be deprived. It is quite important for governments to design and implement an appropriate primary education system so that young children can have chances to both learn and play at school.
