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1、托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析整合 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：进步即是好事?Is progress always good?Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析大家在审题的时候需要注意一个词always。这个词是一个绝对的修饰词，用来陈述观点是很极端的，因此直接agree很容易写偏，所
2、以这道题目建议大家选择disagree。具体思路可以这么写，进步在大多数的时候是好的，比如电的发明、交通方式的进步、通讯方式的改良等等，但是进步有时候也会带来一些副作用，给人们造成意料之外的困扰等等。本话题高分范文赏析Progress can be measured in many ways, but one very tangible way to measure progress is by looking at economic development. In these terms, progress can be seen as a very positive force, help
3、ing many people rise up from poverty. But history shows that progress, even as measured by economic progress, always has its cost. Take Germany in the 1930s for example. Humiliated by unequal treaties after World War I, the German people were suffering from a terrible economy and massive inflation.
4、Then Hitler took power and mobilized the German economy, in several years the Germans economy had recovered and was actually becoming among the most powerful in Europe. But Hitlers economic miracle came at a terrible price. His plan was to use Germanys economic power to finance its military power. G
5、ermanys aggression sparked World War II, a catastrophe that killed tens of millions of people all over the whole world, including countless millions of civilians. When progress serves evil, the result hurts. Likewise the progress of America, arguably the most advanced of all nations, has come at a h
6、eavy price. America used to be the land of native Americans. Americas current progress would probably not have been achieved if most of the land in America still belonged to the Native Americans. From their perspective, Americas current progress is their profound loss. Finally, Chinas economic growt
7、h over the past 25 years has been truly remarkable. Standards of living have gone up dramatically, but the progress has negative aspects as well as the obvious positive ones. As income gaps between the rich and the poor widen, social problems like crime and poverty become more pronounced. The damage
8、 done to the environment by factories and progressive human activity might not be undone for hundreds of years, affecting the lives of Chinese people for generations to come. If these problems are not addressed, our grandchildren might truly come to regret current alleged progress.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：
9、室内活动还是室外活动?托福写作难点话题一览Leisure activities: outdoors or indoors?Some people prefer to spend their free time outdoors. Other people prefer to spend their leisure time indoors. Would you prefer to be outside or would you prefer to be inside for your leisure activities? Use specific reasons and examples t
10、o explain your choice.写作思路展开结构分析如何安排休闲时间的活动是一个很好写的话题，但这道题目特意把户外活动和室内活动拿出来作对比，大家就需要注意选择一种的同时突出一下另一种存在的问题了。也就是需要写出两者之间的区别。选择户外活动可以说呼吸新鲜空气多做运动等等，选择室内活动则可以说比较轻松放松等等本话题高分范文赏析When one lives in a seasonal environment it is difficult to deny that both outdoor and indoor activities have their place. As the s
11、easons change, so does ones mood. Certain activities become more or less appealing, depending on the weather and the length of the day.Spring is a time of the year when the world starts to awaken from its winter slumber. The trees and flowers bloom, birds return from their migrations and there is a
12、general sense of gaiety in the air. During this season, I enjoy going on long walks through parks and watching the world come alive. Many consider summer to be the apex of the year. The city comes into full swing as the weather becomes warmer and warmer. During the summer, I prefer to spend the dayt
13、ime anywhere that is air-conditioned. This can include the library, a shopping center or a movie theater. I often enjoy spending the warm evenings sitting on the wide balcony of my house and having drinks with my friends.Fall, with the turning of the leaves and the intense heat of the summer dissipa
14、ting, is another excellent time to go on long walks during the day. I love to be outside during fall and see the life of the city returning to its hibernation. Another reason to go outside during autumn is to savor the last days of warmth until the next year. Winter brings the shortening of days and
15、 cooler weather. Outdoor activities tend to become less attractive and curling up on the couch with a good book becomes my favorite activity. It is not enjoyable to spend time outside if it is too cold. The only exception to this is the rare time I go skiing. So, my decision to spend time indoors or
16、 outdoors is vastly dependent on the season. Different seasons call for different activities and therefore it is impossible to choose whether I would spend all of my leisure time indoors or outdoors.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：成年人的成长经历托福写作难点话题一览What events make a person an adult?People recognize a difference
17、between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies)make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.写作思路展开结构分析首先大家需要点出儿童和成人的区别，也就是Difference between children and adults，比如成熟(mature);独立(independent);独立思考(critical thinking);解决问题(problem solving);自我责任(se
18、lf-responsible)等等。接着能够成长的EVENT也需要写好，比较容易想到的有毕业典礼、18岁生日等。本话题高分范文赏析People have many different ways expressing, celebrating and legislating our passage from childhood into adulthood. I believe that there is no single moment that defines when a child becomes an adult. Becoming an adult is based on a var
19、iety of events, namely, when ones body changes, when ones mind expands, and when one accumulates experiences.Small children are usually referred to as cherub like. They are all beautiful with rosy cheeks, bright eyes, and tender skin. As a child grows into an adolescent, they grow taller, but their
20、frames remain quite small. Once a youth grows from an adolescent to an adult, frames develop substantially. Their shoulders broaden and they are able to form defined muscles. This physical change is the most obvious sign of a child becoming an adult.The second modification that occurs is the expansi
21、on of ones mind. When one is an adult, they are able to comprehend much more advanced thought processes. They start to be able to think for themselves, and make decisions that are best for them. Children are not capable of making complex decisions regarding their lives or their future. They do not h
22、ave a mind capable of carefully weighing all of the options and deducing the right choice.This expansion of the mind is a result of the numerous experience a person has on his/her way to becoming an adult. As one moves through the world, they gather important information about how the world works. T
23、his information becomes ones personal database of knowledge: such a database is absolutely necessary if one is to grow past childhood. The experiences of which I speak are the happenings in our day-to-day lives. We are constantly placed in situations where we must choose one path or another. Of cour
24、se, one will make mistakes along the way. These mistakes are an important learning tool, which help us become wise adults.In conclusion, children become adults when they have sufficiently matured. Their bodies, their minds, and the number of experiences they have had must grow. Once this process is
25、complete, they can rightfully claim to be adults.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：终身雇佣制的利弊托福写作难点话题一览Should businesses hire employees for their entire lives?Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析不同意比较好写一些
26、。因为题目中的entire这个词是一个过于绝对的修饰词，所以一般来说应该是要反对的。企业雇用人员的原则应该是以利益为上，能够为企业带来更多利润的员工才侄儿雇佣，但企业对于员工也是有义务要负责的，特别是那些做出过重大贡献的员工。大家可以结合这两方面来拓展观点。本话题高分范文赏析The decision to hire an employee for life is a serious commitment on the part of both parties. For the employee, such an arrangement means lifetime job security.
27、From the perspective of an employer, however, the deal is not so sweet. Guaranteed lifetime employment, or tenure, at a company, can promote bad work habits, prevent innovation, and lead to potentially disastrous personnel problems. When a workers employment is contingent upon their job performance,
28、 they will tend to work diligently. On the other hand, if workers know that no matter how hard they work, they will receive the same amount of money and have no chance of being fired, there are no incentives for them to work. For people to be model workers they need compelling reasons to work hard a
29、nd produce work of the highest quality. A tenure-system promotes laziness, inefficiency and low-quality work because it fails to offer incentives for good work, and fails to offer compelling deterrents against bad work. Secondly, companies that offer lifetime positions to employees cannot adapt to a
30、 rapidly changing world. For instance, if an employee who was hired by a company twenty years ago might be too old to effectively learn new computer-related skills. In todays modern office environment, companies that cannot make effective use of new technology are at a severe disadvantage to those t
31、hat can. In this case, a company that does not have the freedom to restructure, hiring and firing employees, in accordance with shifting demands is likely to fail. A company that provides its employees with tenure effectively locks out new blood and runs the risk of being paralyzed by a staff unable
32、 to change with the times. Finally, offering tenure to employees is a major risk because of unforeseeable personnel problems. Every office, no matter how well managed, is bound to have personality conflicts. In many cases, personality conflicts can lead to one of the feuding parties leaving the comp
33、any. But if the conflict involves two tenured employees, the business might be seriously affected, even destroyed. Despite the uncertainty it brings to workers lives, the company must look out for its own best interests first and not allow this disastrous situation to occur by not instituting a tenu
34、re policy托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：速食方式改变生活托福写作难点话题一览Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析首先，从总体上必须承认“食物变得越来越容易准备”是一种生活上的进步，所以自然会带来im
35、provement。使人们的生活方式发生了一些变化。从好的方面来说，大家可以从节省时间、带来方便、一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来等角度来展开。当然大家也可以从不好的变化来说，比如准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减少等等。另外，考生还可以引出快餐来进行证明，比如人们普遍变胖了，尤其是儿童肥胖问题等等。本话题高分范文赏析People today can prepare their meal much easier than has ever been before. To prepare a single dinner,provident h
36、ousewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they had to buy home dirty vegetables which had to wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth. Each and every step of preparation was a time-consuming task. But now, things are entirely different. Supermarkets provide vegetables and meat cl
37、ean and neat, some of them even have relevant ingredients and need only a few minutes to be made into delicious meals. And this change has indeed greatly improved the way people live. In a sense, food preparation is no longer a tedious task, at least much easier to tolerate. Such a change has libera
38、ted many women and given them chance to do more meaningful things, for example, a higher pay job or a more respectful one. On the other hand, more men are becoming willing to do the thing that they once hated so much, and in some cases such transformation of men brought dramatic positive impact on t
39、he family. Today, its not hard to imagine a wife comes home after a days hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has already prepared her several her favorite dishes! Children can more easily become independentat least they can make themselves breakfasts or dinners when parents a
40、re occasionally not present.But such a change has also brought some unexpected consequences. Girls nowadays are becoming more and more reluctant to deem household work as their responsibility. The reason is quite straightforward: it was once really ridiculous to insist men do trivial household work
41、rather than go work and earn money to support family, but conditions have altered now, girls might think: I can work as well, or maybe I can earn a higher salary than you do, dear boy friend, if you want to marry me, answer me one question first, will you prepare me breakfast and dinner every day? A
42、nd some boys, on the other hand, are becoming hesitant to get married, or simply remain solitary, among miscellaneous reasons they do so is one thing: I can take care of myself, at least I dont really need someone prepare me dinner!Anyway, such a change is positive and it did improve the quality of peoples life. At least it has brought girls, boys, husbands, wives, children and everyone else who has to prepare food an opportunity, no matter what kind of opportunity it is
