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1、English Writing,小学英语作文精品作文课件,小学英语作文精品作文课件,评价的标准,1、文章是否有内容？,（是否离题？是否切合话题？）,2、文章是否有标题？,3、文章是否具有语法错误？,（是否书写正确？）,A）标点符号；B)大、小写；C)单词拼写；D)书写；E)句型、时态,4、好词好句（是否采用名言名句，好的句型句式，是否真实地表达自己的感情？）,5、字数是否达到要求？,Look And write,看图作文,How to write a picture story?,Go over the requirement（person,tense,style）,Go over the p
2、ictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),Write a passage（using connectives and adding details and specific information.),基本篇章结构 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件）事件的起因 事件的发展/过程 事件的结果 扣题,Using connectives,并列 转折 3.因果 4.其他,and,bothand,but,however,though,while,so,therefore,because,when,suddenly,immediately,as soon as,unfortun
3、ately,sothat,finally,as a result,What was worse,Sample 1,根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。短文要写得连贯、完整。,1.Go over the requirement,1.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:,A story（a traffic accident),past tense,Tom,he,Tom/ride a bike Along the street/roadA few days ago/the other day/one day,2.Go over the pictu
4、res（who,what,where,when,why,how),2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),A car/run fast to/run into himTom/fall off his bikeSuddenly,2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),The driver/frightened/run away,2.Go over the pictur
5、es（who,what,where,when,why,how),2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),A woman/remember the number of the car The police The driver/catch,2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),Key words,sentences,ride a bike/run fast to,When Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast t
6、o him.,hit him/fall off his bike,The car hit him.And he fell off his bike.,be frightened/run away,The driver was so frightened that he ran away.,see the accident/remember the number/call the police/be caught,A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car.She called the police.Finally，
7、the driver was caught.,3.Writing a passage,Passage 1,Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver was frightened.He ran away.A woman saw the accident.She remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman.The driver was caught.,pass
8、age 2,The other day,Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on
9、 the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.,Passage 3,The other day,Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him
10、.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She
11、called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.,假设下面的图画描述的是Black一家周末在公园游玩的情景。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的作文。,假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。,homework,thank you,1、只要有坚强的意志力，就自然而然地会有能耐、机灵和知识。2、你们应该培养对自己，对自己的力量的信心，百这种信心是靠克服障
12、碍，培养意志和锻炼意志而获得的。3、坚强的信念能赢得强者的心，并使他们变得更坚强。4、天行健，君子以自强不息。5、有百折不挠的信念的所支持的人的意志，比那些似乎是无敌的物质力量有更强大的威力。6、永远没有人力可以击退一个坚决强毅的希望。7、意大利有一句谚语：对一个歌手的要求，首先是嗓子、嗓子和嗓子我现在按照这一公式拙劣地摹仿为：对一个要成为不负于高尔基所声称的那种“人”的要求，首先是意志、意志和意志。8、执着追求并从中得到最大快乐的人，才是成功者。9、三军可夺帅也，匹夫不可夺志也。10、发现者，尤其是一个初出茅庐的年轻发现者，需要勇气才能无视他人的冷漠和怀疑，才能坚持自己发现的意志，并把研究继
13、续下去。11、我的本质不是我的意志的结果，相反，我的意志是我的本质的结果，因为我先有存在，后有意志，存在可以没有意志，但是没有存在就没有意志。12、公共的利益，人类的福利，可以使可憎的工作变为可贵，只有开明人士才能知道克服困难所需要的热忱。13、立志用功如种树然，方其根芽，犹未有干；及其有干，尚未有枝；枝而后叶，叶而后花。14、意志的出现不是对愿望的否定，而是把愿望合并和提升到一个更高的意识水平上。15、无论是美女的歌声，还是鬓狗的狂吠，无论是鳄鱼的眼泪，还是恶狼的嚎叫，都不会使我动摇。16、即使遇到了不幸的灾难，已经开始了的事情决不放弃。17、最可怕的敌人，就是没有坚强的信念。18、既然我已
14、经踏上这条道路，那么，任何东西都不应妨碍我沿着这条路走下去。19、意志若是屈从，不论程度如何，它都帮助了暴力。20、有了坚定的意志，就等于给双脚添了一对翅膀。21、意志坚强，就会战胜恶运。22、只有刚强的人，才有神圣的意志，凡是战斗的人，才能取得胜利。23、卓越的人的一大优点是：在不利和艰难的遭遇里百折不挠。24、疼痛的强度，同自然赋于人类的意志和刚度成正比。25、能够岿然不动，坚持正见，度过难关的人是不多的。26、钢是在烈火和急剧冷却里锻炼出来的，所以才能坚硬和什么也不怕。我们的一代也是这样的在斗争中和可怕的考验中锻炼出来的，学习了不在生活面前屈服。27、只要持续地努力，不懈地奋斗，就没有征服不了的东西。28、立志不坚，终不济事。29、功崇惟志，业广惟勤。30、一个崇高的目标，只要不渝地追求，就会居为壮举；在它纯洁的目光里，一切美德必将胜利。28、立志不坚，终不济事。29、功崇惟志，业广惟勤。30、一个崇高的目标，只要不渝地追求，就会居为壮举；在它纯洁的目光里，一切美德必将胜利。,
