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1、How to teach writing,2023/3/22,Do your students enjoy writing?,Do you enjoy giving writing assignments?,What is difficult?,学生写作错误过多不重视或畏惧写作难批改你辛苦付出多 学生改进不大书写的问题教学的整体设计和规划不够没有好的训练方法教学资源缺乏学生不听话,乡愁中国台湾 余光中小时侯 乡愁是一枚小小的邮票 我在这头 母亲在那头 长大后 乡愁是一张窄窄的船票 我在这头 新娘在那头 后来啊 乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓 我在外头 母亲在里头 而现在 乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡 我在这头
2、大陆在那头,文愁中国中学 莘莘学子初一时 作文之愁是一枚小小的邮票 我在这头 分数在那头 初二时 作文之愁是一张窄窄的船票 我在这头 例文在那头 初三时啊 作文之愁是一方矮矮的坟墓 我在外头 梦想在里头 而中考时 作文之愁是一湾深深的鸿沟 我在这头 改卷老师在那头,愁,you,or,not,Whether,write,well,write,bravely,Writing,is,on,paper,The,pen,is,mightier,than,the,sword,thinking,WRITING,allows learnerstime to think,Its safer than speak
3、ing,shows progress,valid assessment,integrates other skills,is a real lifeskill,suits different learner styles,英语写作是英语综合能力的具体运用,是对学生进行全面考核的综合性测试,能够真实地反映出学生当前的英语水平和能力,1,2,3,普通初级中学英语课程标准(实验)强调在进一步发展学生综合运用能力的基础上,着重提高学生用英语获取信息,处理信息,分析问题和解决问题的能力,特别是学生用英语思维和表达的能力。,七年级“写”的分级目标（三级目标）1、能正确使用常用的标点符号；2、能使用简单的图
4、表和海报等形式传 达信息；3、能参照范例写出或回复简单的问候 卡和邀请卡；4、能用短语或句子描述系列图片，编 写简单的故事。,规范准确,八年级“写”的分级目标（四级目标）1、能正确使用标点符号；2、能用词组或简单句为自己创作的图片写出说明；3、能写出简短的文段，如简单的指令、规则；4、能在教师的帮助下或以小组讨论的方式起草和修改作文。,规范准确流畅,九年级“写”的分级目标（五级目标）1、能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；2、能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师 指导下进行修改；3、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑 关系；4、能简单描述人物或事件；5、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落 或操作说明。,
5、规范准确流畅得体,What is a good composition?,6分,14分,考生作文 2,12,12分,考生作文3,15分,3分,WRITING,spelling,handwriting,grammar,punctuation,creativity,vocabulary,What is the most important?,中考作文评分标准：,第一档：（15-13分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标 点，大小写正确。,导致学生扣分的
6、问题：,They have dicided to try again.She leaved her hometown when she was young.This book spent me ten yuan.Is there anything you have difficult with？,词汇掌握不牢,There is a small boy likes playing football.,Everything are going very well.,I think do some sports is very important for us.,语法错误,He by bike to
7、 school.,汉语思维方式写作,He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart.,In my life have many things happened.,Today is raining.,审题不准,My summer vacation Summer vacation is coming the next month.I hope I can have a good time.My mother is busy every day,she gets up early and does house work and then goes to
8、 work.In the evening when she comes back,she has to cook for me.She is really tired.I love my mother,so I will help her to do some house this summer.,标点符号使用不当,She likes dancing、skating、surfing、boating and swimming.,He said he could play volleyball,basketball,I have a dream,said Martin。,I hope you ca
9、n send it to me as soon as possible.I love you very much and hope you can help me.,语言表达不得体,Playing sports can change students health and study.,词汇贫乏,My school is in the west of the city.You can easily remember these words if you use them every day.The party is a great success.,My school lies in the
10、west of the school./Youll have no trouble/difficulty remembering these words if you use them every day.The party is a great success.,书写不规范,How to improve our teaching?,1.Handwriting activities2.Sentence writing activities3.Paragraph writing activities,中考阅卷感受：1.阅卷时间短；2.阅卷的速度快；3.阅卷老师的心理：给分中庸,最吃亏学生群：,中
11、等左右学生,如何打动和取悦阅卷老师？,以卷面感人 以内容动人,卷面，体现了一种态度,有一种态度叫“我出类拔萃”,有一种态度叫“我一丝不苟”,有一种态度叫“我努力做到最好”,有一种态度叫“你看着办”,还有一种态度叫“恶心不死你”,1）书写的规格（1）应按照字母的笔顺和字母在三格中应占的位置书写。（2）每个字母都应稍向右倾斜，约为5，斜度要一致。,（3）大写字母都应一样高，占上面两格，但不顶第一线。,（4）小写字母a，c，e，m，n，o，r，s，u，v，w，x，z写在中间的一格里，上下抵线，但都不出格。,（5）小写字母b，d，h，k，l的上端顶第一线，占上面两格。,（6）小写字母i和j的点、f和t
12、的上端都在第一格中间，f和t的第二笔紧贴在第二线下,（7）小写字母f g j p q y的下端抵第四线,（8）小写字母a，d，h，i，k，l，m，n，t和u，它们的提笔是一个上挑的小圆钩，不能写成锐角,（9）书写单词时，字母与字母之间的间隔要均匀、适当，不要凑得过紧，也不要离得太远,（10）书写句子时，单词之间必须有适当的距离，一般以空出一个小写字母a的宽度为宜,（11）标点符号要写在一定的位置上,注意：英语中无顿号、,有效训练方法列举志愿者评委每排字数.,2.Sentence writing activities,I very excited.,He must at home.,I am l
13、ike English.,I was went to Chengdu last week,写正确的句子,I should go home see my parents this weekend.,The final exam is coming,everyone has to work hard.,There are many students in our class live at school.,五种基本句型天天练扩句缩句,She does a part-time job,She does a part-time job in a department store three after
14、noons a week.,1.This word processing program is complex.2.This word processing program is more complex.3.This word processing program is more complex than the one I used two years ago.,例句那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。,第一步：找出句子主干,男孩,出去,第二步：确定主干的相关词汇,那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。,boy,go out,第三步：翻译句子主干,那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。,
15、The boy went out.,考虑：时态 语态,第四步：添加修饰成分,The 16-year-old boy went out.,The 16-year-old boy went out without turning off the lights.,那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。,_,_,_,Making sentences by given words;Writing sentences for the pictures;Reordering the sentences;Completing sentences;Correcting mistakes of the sente
16、nces;.,亮点,选词,robbed,suits,Which is better?,周末我们会有很多作业要做.,A We have endless homework to do at the weekend.B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.,他没听我课上讲的东西。A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.B He didnt listen to what I said in the class.,鼓励学生使用“高端”的词汇。,=endless/oceans of,Pl
17、aying too much computer is bad for our study.,=gets in the way of=have a bad influence on,I am very interested in pop music.,I have lots of homework to do every day.,=show/take great interest in,1.Our parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.2.The te
18、enagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers.3.When he spoke,he got more excited.The more he spoke,the more excited he got.4.We should learn English grammar.Its important to learn English grammar.,句式多变化,We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.Earl
19、y in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.,The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.Hearing the bad news,the young man couldnt help crying.,肯定 VS 否定在Mary的帮助下，我取得了成功。With Marys help,I succeeded.I could never succeed without Marys help.,We need to help peop
20、le.The people are in trouble.We need to help the people who are in trouble.,运用从句。,运用从句,The earth goes around the sun.,It is a fact that the earth goes around the sun,强调句；We can achieve our dreams by working hard.Only by working hard,can we achieve our dreams.,加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,Joining the English clu
21、b is a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,3.Paragraph writing activities:,Smoking,Write a composition on the topic of“Smoking”,To think freely and put down
22、 all possible ideas that come to their minds.,Brainstorming,bad for health cause lung cancer expensivebad for non-smokerspollute the air cause fire,dangerous waste moneysmoking in public place indoor smoking smoking in public places,Mapping,to select the useful ideas to see how these ideas can be pu
23、t together,Mapping-1,1.bad for health cause lung cancer bad for non-smokers 3.pollute the air indoor smoking smoking in public places,2.expensive waste money4.dangerous cause fire,Mapping-2,Freewriting,following mapping given 10 to 15 minutes do not need to care too much about spelling or grammar,Ou
24、tlining,Write a more detailed outline.An outline usually illustrates the main organizing structure and the most important points of essay.The main idea of each paragraph with topic sentences and notes for supporting details.An introduction and a conclusion,Editing,Read through their writings and che
25、ck the clarity of ideas or the logical development of their arguments.Students check carefully the grammar,spelling and punctuation of their writings.,Revising,Adding or deleting;Correcting errors in spelling,punctuation,grammar or choice of words.,示例 1,weekends,Brainstorming,DISCUSS:What words or p
26、hrases can you think of when you see the word“Internet”?,DISCUSS:What words or phrases can you think of when you see the word“Internet”?,download,search for,latest news,fast,convenient,watch,games,E-mail,send,information,Make sentences using the words or phrases,1.With the Internet，we can get the la
27、test news.,2.The Internet is fast and convenient.,3.We can find and download information that we need.,5.We can play games on it.,4.We can send some emails to our friends.,1.With the Internet，we can get the latest news.,2.The Internet is fast and convenient.,3.We can find and download information th
28、at we need.,5.We can play games on it.,4.We can send some emails to our friends.,Write these sentences into a paragraph,With the Internet，we can get the latest news.The Internet is fast and convenient.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games o
29、n it.,Write these sentences into a paragraph,How to change it into a well-organized paragraph,The structure of a composition,Topic sentence,Supporting details,Reason 1,Reason 2,Reason 3,Conclusion,Write a topic sentence:,With the Internet，we can get the latest news.The Internet is fast and convenien
30、t.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.,The Internet plays an important part in our life./The Internet is very useful in our life.,Write conclusion:,With the Internet，we can get the latest news.The Internet is fast and convenient.We
31、can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.,The Internet plays an important part in our life./The Internet is very useful in our life.,We cant live without the Internet.,How to make it better?,With the Internet，we can get the latest news.The
32、Internet is fast and convenient.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.,The Internet plays an important part in our life./The Internet is very useful in our life.,We cant live without the Internet.,How to make it better?,Nowadays the I
33、nternet plays an important part in our life.,With the Internet，we can get the latest news.It is fast and convenient.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.,We cant live without the Internet.,Connect the sentences with link words to int
34、roduce supporting points:,First(Firstly),Second(Secondly),Third(Thirdly),First of all,Also(In addition),Finally,However,Conclusion words,In my opinion,In a word,In short,Generally speaking,Add link words or phrases to make the supporting details better-organized:,Nowadays the Internet plays an impor
35、tant part in our life.With the Internet，we can get the latest news.It is fast and convenient.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.We cant live without the Internet.,My Opinions about the Internet,Nowadays the Internet plays an import
36、ant part in our life.It is not only fast but convenient as well.We can do many things with the Internet.First of all,we can get the latest news.Secondly,We can find and download information that we need.Whats more,we can send emails to friends.We can even play games on it.In a word,we cant live with
37、out the Internet.(70words),Body,Conclusion/Opinion,Topic sentence Supporting details Right Link wordsand sentence patterns,A good compositionof“giving opinion”,title,Summary,写作注意的几个问题：,1.尽量使用简单句，要牢记“避繁就简”原则，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。2.把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。3.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，适当使用连词，如：and,so,or,but,Wh
38、ats more;Whats worse,not onlybut also,neithernor 等。4.字体一定要工整漂亮。,Homework,现在很多同学喜欢上网，但是老师对学生上网观点不一，请谈谈你对学生上网的观点。,示例 2,词组短语法,词组&短语,He likes playing basketball.,打篮球,play basketball,喜欢做什么事情,like doing sth.,他,请你建议带一些礼物,advise sb.to do sth.,bring some presents,I advise all of you to bring some presents.,为
39、了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well?”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。（以上背景无需描述）短文要求如下：1.学生应该守时，守信，不撒谎，不说脏话；2.礼貌待人，热心助人；3.遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗，不乱扔垃圾；4.请你就此话题再补充一至两个个人看法。要求：1.不要逐词翻译。2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。3.词数60-80左右。短文首句已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：dirty obey promise Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.
40、_,be on time,keep promises,lie to sb.,be polite to others,give sb.a hand,traffic rules,make noise,Step1:找词组,be on time,lie to sb.,be polite to others,give sb.a hand,traffic rules,make noise,Students should,and,Dont,lie to others,or,say dirty words.,We should,Please,and give them a hand when they nee
41、d it.,Lets obey,Dont,Step 2:写句子,or throw rubbish in public.,keep promises.,Students should be on time and keep promises.,Dont lie to others or say dirty words.,Please be polite to others and give them a hand when they need it.,Lets obey traffic rules.,Dont make noise or throw rubbish in public.,Firs
42、t，.,Second，,Third，.,I will give you three suggestions.,How to.,How to behave well?,Step 3:加结构,Students should be on time and keep promises.,Dont lie to others or say dirty words.,Please be polite to others and give them a hand when they need it.,Lets obey traffic rules.,Dont make noise or throw rubb
43、ish in public.,How to behave well?,I will give you three suggestions.,First，,Second，,Third，,Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others,并列：and,also,not onlybut also,neithernor,Either.or,转折：but,however,on the other hand,因果：because of，therefore，as a result,重要性：first of all,the most impo
44、rtant is,总结：all in all,above all,after all,表自己观点：in my opinion,递进：besides,Whats more,Step 4:加关系词,Students should be on time and keep promises.,Dont lie to others or say dirty words.,Please be polite to others and give them a hand when they need it.,Lets obey traffic rules.,Dont make noise or throw r
45、ubbish in public.,How to behave well?,I will give you three suggestions.,First，,Second，,Third，,Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others,But,Whats more,because of,keeping away from traffic accident.,not only,but also,Students should not only be on time but also keep promises.,Dont l
46、ie to others or say dirty words.,Please be polite to others and give them a hand when they need it.,Lets obey traffic rules.,Dont make noise or throw rubbish in public.,How to behave well?,I will give you three suggestions.,First，,Second，,Third，,Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with ot
47、hers,But,Whats more,because of,keeping away from traffic accident.,We will not make friends with someone if he makes noise or throws rubbish in public.,Step 5:加从句、谚语,Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.But how to behave well?I will give you three suggestions.First,students sho
48、uld not only be on time but also keep promises.Whats more,Dont lie to others or say dirty words.Second，please be polite to others and give them a hand when they need it.Third，Lets obey traffic rules in order to keep away from traffic accident.Besides,if someone makes noise or throws rubbish in publi
49、c,we will not make friends with him.,All in all,I think smile is another key to behave well,because where there is a smile,there is a friend.,总结写作文步骤：,1.找词组,2.用词组写句子（没有语法错误）,3.结构,4.关系词,5，利用名言或从句，使文章出彩。,示例3 视频,批改,The summer holiday comes.More and more kids become unhappy because they have too many ac
50、tivities to do.The children dont have any lessons today four afternoons a week.Lets all go there to play.The students dont have much time to play with their friends.We all know it is important for kids to learn how to relax.It is not good for both kids and their parents.Many American girls take part
