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1、I. 试卷结构各部分名称题型题数计分考试时间（分钟）写作A作文主观题115分35 minsB写便条主观题110分10 minsII. 测试要求： a)作文。要求根据所给的题目和列出的写作提纲写一篇200词左右的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。作文的类别通常为议论文。考试时间为35分钟。 b)便条。要求根据提示写大约60-80词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求做到格式正确，语言 得体。考试时间为10分钟。英语专业四级写作的评分标准1.作文的评分标准(1)文章内容切题、丰富，文章通顺，表达清楚。(2)行文流畅。 (3)组织严密，逻辑性强。(4)句型多样化，句法
2、结构正确。(5)用词得体、恰当、丰富。 (6)语法正确。(7)拼写及标点正确，书写整洁。专四写作评分标准（一）评分原则 英语专业四级考试委员会要求阅卷人员评分时综合考虑以下四个问题： 作文是否体现主题思想：文章切题，全文统一，无不相关细节内容。 组织结构是否合理：全文条理清楚、组织连贯和谐、善于使用衔接语以增强文章的逻辑性。 语法文字是否有重大错误：正确使用英语语法是英语学习的一个重要目的，而体现在写作中，则是语句合乎英语语法习惯，一篇充斥着语法错误的习作让人难以下读，也不可能获得高分。 卷面布局是否整洁：字体端正清晰、易于辨识；规范大小写；词间空格；段前缩进；正确使用标点符号；避免拼写错误、
3、减少涂改。 （二）评分标准命题作文：满分为15分。专业英语四级作文考试评分标准分五个等级，阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，可加减分；具体评分标准为： 14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。 11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 8分：基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。 5分：基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重的语言错误。 2分：条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 交白卷者，或作文与题目毫不相关，或只写几个单词。 评分中对字数也有要求：累计字数在15
4、0170之间，扣1分；累计字数在130150之间，扣2分；累计字数在110130之间，扣3分；累计字数在90110之间，扣4分；累计字数在90分以下，至多给5分。注：如照抄提示中原句，均不得计入所写字数。只写一段者：04分；只写两段者：09分（指规定三段的作文）；按规定，考生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分。便条2. 便条的评分标准便条写作1.写作时必须交代清楚时间，地点，人物，事件及相关内容，例：note-writingBefore you leave university you want
5、 to sell your bike. Write a note of about 80-100 words describing the condition of your bike, how much you like for it.这一则便条是要转让一辆自行车，写作时必须交代清楚自行车的车型，新旧程度，可议价格和出让原因，此外必须交代清楚何时，何地与谁联系等。Whats the purpose of the note?Is it well achieved?2.格式上要正确。对请柬和便条等都应有日期，称呼，正文，结束语和签名。 便条写作满分为10分。格式错误减1-2分，字数达不到或超过减
6、1-2分，。2007 Section B: Note of refusal参考范文 April 22, 2007Dear Jimmy,Thank you so much for inviting me to join the swimming club. Id like to but Im afraid I cannot. To learn tennis has long been my dream and the best tennis teacher will be leaving next year. So this is the last chance for me and I wou
7、ld like very much to seize it.Best wishes. Yours, TomTEM4 (2007)便条评分标准I. 格式: (占3分) 包括日期,称呼和结尾三部分,各占1分.1. 日期(Date):正确: April 24th, 2007 / April 24, 2007 / April 24 / 24 April 2007 4/24/2007 / 24/4/2007 (Apr.也可以,任何一个日期都可以)2. 称呼(Heading):正确: (Dear) Mike: (,)/ (Dear) Hilda: (,)(缺逗号或冒号,扣.)位置在日期下面一行左侧.3.
8、结尾(Ending):正确: Yours sincerely,/Yours,/Sincerely yours,/Sincerely, (无逗号,扣0.5)Sincerely, Mike, Hilda(若在一行,扣0.5)Yours Sincerely(两个单词的首字母都大写扣0.5)若名字没写或人名XXX(或Mike/Hilda)扣1分.4. 格式需前后一致,如全左或全右,若不符合,扣1分.凡不符合上述正确格式或表达均要扣分. 错一部分扣1分,最多扣3分II. 内容(占2分)本便条必须包含如下内容:1. 拒绝(1分)2. 理由(1分)III. 语言(占5分)1. 首句需要自己正确的语言表达,若
9、完全抄提示扣1分2. 5分中有1分是语言的得体性. 语言风格与情景不一致,扣1分(如: If you consent, etc.). 只有语言较好才得分.IV. 评分总体要求:1. 语言没有严重错误,格式对,内容完整,语言得体,字数符合要求(40),可给9-10分.2. 便条总字数(包括三部分格式在内)要求在50-60字;不到40或超过80字扣1分.3. 请写出三部分的小分,如:2+2+4(格式+内容+语言)4. 不要出现0.5分.5. 要求大家阅卷时做到认真仔细,不漏改卷,漏填分数或漏签名. 请在每份卷子的错误部分划线,以便复校.6. 便条总分为10分, 6分为及格线. 就历年考试而言，大作
10、文话题主要有三大类：社会热点话题、校园话题和日常生活话题。（standard）2011专四便条写作April 20, 2008Dear my friend,The summer vacation is coming next month. I hope you will visit our home town and stay with us. Its very beautiful here with everything in bloom now. If possible, you can come here by the train No. 1010, which will arrive
11、here at 18:00.I am looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible.Sincerely,2011年专四作文Should private car owners be taxed for pollution?私家车主是否应交污染税？2010年专四真题作文题目 2010/09/25 20:37 专四作文 Section A Composition It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm in a local univer
12、sity hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 yuan a month. This has led to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Should College Students Hire Cleaners? You are t
13、o write in three parts: In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness
14、. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. Section B Note-writing Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Your good friend, John, is thinking of organizing an end-of-the-term party. Write him a note telling him that you like his idea and offer to
15、help him. You have to be specific about how you can help him. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 09 Section A: Will Tourism Bring Harm to Environment?Section B: informing your friend of a part time job08 Section A: The benefits of VolunteeringSection B: Not
16、e of recommending anEnglish newspaper to a friend 07 Section A: Is it wise to Make Frieads Online?Section B: Note of refusal06 Section A: My Idea of Saving MoneySection B: requesting details on a travel05 Section A: My Idea of a University FestivalSection B: Note of inviting a friend a concert given
17、 by a famous pop band/orchestra04 Section A: Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?Section B: comfort/encourage a friend who failed an exam： 1. Activity noticeNotice is written to make known something that is to happen. It is usually an announcement of a meeting, a party, a lecture, a game or a contest. I
18、t may include:-the people concerned-the activity-time, place-other special requirements or details (dressing, preparations etc)-(lecture) background of the speakerNotice Students from English Department:To enrich the weekend campus life, an English film will be shown every Friday and Saturday evenin
19、g at Multimedia Room 3. The film starts at 7:00 pm. Besides while seeing the film, please keep quiet and do not chat with each other. No food is allowed in the room, which is very important. Otherwise, the people involved will be punished. English Department Office2. Note accompanying a present:Note
20、 of this kind is usually written by a person who sends to a friend a gift on a special occasion, without meeting him/her in person.Such note may include:-reasons for sending the gift and this gift-asking the receivers opinion of it (hope enjoy it)-best wishes for the occasionExample Dear Lin, Today
21、is your20th birthday, and I think as your best friend I should definitely give something special. Remember last year when we visited the botanical garden? You said you favorite flowers are daffodils which stand for purity to you. So here they are! I hope these daffodils can accompany you every minut
22、e when I am not around, and remind you of me, your true and best friend. Do you like them? Hope so!Again Happy birthday and many happy returns of the day! Best, QinLet me/Allow me to present you with/offer to youPlease do me a favor/an honor by acceptingI hope youll accept it as an expression of my
23、regard for you/ as a remembrance of our friendship/ as a token of my sincere esteem for you.3. Note in reply to such note:-surprise at receiving the present-appreciation/high opinions of the present-thanks for the present-asking after the senderMany thanks for your gift and kindnessI greatly appreci
24、ate which you kindly sent me.Your wonderful present and kind wishes indeed give me much pleasureI was delighted indeed to receive your gift with the assurance of your kind consideration toward me.On receiving your nice gift, I hardly know how to thank you enough for your generosity.I shall cherish i
25、t deeply, and forever think of the kind giver.4. Note of apology Note of such type is written by someone who did something wrong and would like to say sorry to the victim. Such note may include-the apology and the mistake/ consequence-reasons or explanations for the mistake-regret about the mistake-
26、hope to make up for itDear Helen,I really cant express my sense of guilt to you enough with words. But I still have to give you my deepest apology for not lending you the notes that you need so much. Without those notes, you may land a slim chance to pass the final exam. I know how depressed and dis
27、appointed you are at present.But I would really appreciate it if you allow me to give you an explanation of all this as I would be as sad as you were without you. Yesterday, Lucy came to my home and asked to consult my notes and promised to return promptly. As you know, since she is my neighbor, I a
28、ssumed she would return the next day, so I lent it to her. But when I wanted it back today, to my greatest shock, she said she lent it to another friend who will return 3 days later. Thats why I didnt give it to you as I had promised. So you see I was also a victim just like you. I really regret abo
29、ut trusting Lucy so hastily and hurting you, my best friend. I didnt mean to eat my words and let you down on purpose. But now, I have already got it back in my hands, so I hope its not too late for you to get the notes. Waiting for your call.JudyUseful Expressions:1.Expess regrets:Inform: Sorry abo
30、ut - ing not-ing I feel awful about/for I am terribly/very sorry about/forI am regretful forMore formal: I (do) apologize . for. I must apologize for/that I sincerely apologize Please accept my sincere apology for I very much regret nay inconvenience may cause you.2. Offer reasons and explanations:S
31、adly,.Unfortunately, I .3.Make promises to remedy: I promise that. I ll. I hope to I assure you that.5. Note of thanksNote of such type is written by someone who receives help/gift from others. Such note may include -what favor /help you received, - the significance/result of the favor-your apprecia
32、tionUseful ExpressionsNeutral: Thank you (very much) for doing sth.I must thank you for.More formal: I am (extremely) grateful for your help.I am most grateful for your doing sth.I am full of gratitude to sb. for sth.I am most obliged to you forId like to take this opportunity to express my sincere
33、gratitude to you forInformal:Thanks for.It was very good of you to.Oceans of thanks to you.6. Note asking ones health/consolationNote of such type is written to show the writers care and concern about receivers illness. Such note may include-how you heard about his or her ill health-sorry to hear th
34、e news-wanting to pay a visit in person but unable to make it-Sending regards and asking after the present condition of the person-good wishes for recoveryDear Dan,Jack rang me up yesterday and gave me the bad news of your illness. I never imagined that a strong person like you should have gone down
35、 with heart disease. Im so sorry that you have been hospitalized. I hope it is not a big deal. Are you feeling OK?I would like to see you, but Im working on the mid-day shift-from 10am to 2 pm, during your visiting hours! So I will see you next week when I am free. Be careful about yourself and take
36、 some walk. Thats helpful. Wish you a quick recovery, and longing to see you.Tedconsolationill in hospital, bad luck(fail in exam), casualty(house collapsed)难过：I am sorry to learn/hear about I am saddened to fing thatIt worries me to find that同情:I wish to express our deepest sympathy and solicitude
37、to youWith my heartfelt sympathyWe extend/convey our deepest consolationI feel quite relieved that7. Note of condolenceNote of such type is written to show the writers deep grief and sympathy upon the death of some relative of receiver.Such note may include-the source of the sad news-feeling of deep
38、 sorrow-complimentary remembrance of the deceased -condolenceDear Sophie,I was greatly shocked at the sad news in yesterdays newspaper; I could hardly believe my eyes. My grief is beyond words.Your grandfather was the most talented writer I have ever met. His intelligence and works will always remai
39、n in our hearts. I will miss him so much. Grieve with you heart and soul. Please convey my heartfelt condolence to your parents. Warmest and sincerest regards! Lucy It is distressing to learn thatWe were stunned by the news thatI was dumbfounded byI am utterly shocked and heartbroken to hear the ter
40、rible news thatPlease accept and pass my condolences toI mourn with you forjoin me in sending you our condolenses for this sudden loss of8. Note of congrats(promotion / dwelling/birth) 祝贺a.祝贺内容b表示祝贺c积极评价d忠心祝福（再次祝贺祝福未来）祝贺之事和自己的反应： Im so happy to learn that youve just passed your thesis defense. / Im
41、so pleased to hear that youve got the admission by the Cambridge University to further your graduate study. 祝贺行为: Please accept my warmest congratulations. 对成功的评价和对对方的钦佩；You really deserve it because/ This meant years of your hard work, and its an achievement you can well be proud of. / I have been
42、appreciating your excellent performance in study and ability in your work. 美好祝愿； You will have a brilliant future. / I believe our school life will be more colorful under your leadership. / I believe that the knowledge youve acquired will enable you to be successful in whatever aspect of life. Congr
43、atulations again and all good wishes for your future study.It was a great pleasure/delight to hear ofIt is a pleasant surprise to learn of We are more than thrilled to be informed thatMy heartfelt congrats to you onI would like to offer /extend my warm congrats to you on I would like to add my congr
44、ats to the many you will be receiving.9. Note of invitationSuch letter may include-the occasion (why)-time/ place-the pleasure of seeing the person there-ask for a replyDear Simon,Long time no see! Are you doing well as before?Everyone has to pay awe to the pace of time! It has been 10 years since we graduated from college. So on this special occasion, we decide to hold a reunion party for the students of Clas
