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1、备考2014高考写作备考2010高考写作：记叙文重点诠释：1记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。2在记叙文体的高考书面表达中，命题形式主要是提纲式或图表式。3通常要求考生以第一人称或第三人称来写作，第一人称主要是写自己的经历，第三人称主要是写他人的经历或事迹。4由于记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去，因而，其时态主要用一般过去时。5记叙文通常是按照事情发展的先后顺序来表达内容的。写作典例：请仔细看一下下面的图画，注意图画中的细节：假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。注意：1、
2、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好剖析：本题图文结合，审题时要重视细节。1明确写作要求：本题要求写一篇目击者的报告，用第一人称写；2认真审图，确认全部信息要点：图中的环境条件；人物位置（此点对完成本题十分重要）；人物活动；人物表情；空间结构；图中的全部附加文字（英语和汉语）。3确定内容要点：时间：2000年2月8日早晨7点15分；地点：公园路公园门前；我正沿公园路向东走；一辆汽车从第3街向右拐，驶入公园路时撞倒了一位过街的老人；汽车未停，沿公园路向西开走；汽车是黄色的，车牌号是AC864，司机是一位女性。One Possible version:It was 7
3、 : 15 on the morning of February 8, 2000.I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was cross
4、ing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.针对训练：1请仔细看一下下面的图画，注意图画中的细节：Pollution does
5、 harm to us all!A chemical factory lies near my home. The manager was criticized by the government because the factory gave out lots of harmful smoke every day, but he paid no attention. Then the factory was forced to stop production and the manager said angrily, “Is there any evidence to show that
6、we did harm to peoples health? In fact, we havent.” Just then, a doctor came, with the result of the medical exam, saying the manager was suffering a lung cancer. It is very clear that the pollution has harmed not only the people around the factory but also the manager himself. The manager regretted
7、 having caused so much pollution. Now he has realized the importance of keeping the air clean.2根据图画写一篇短文，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Dont do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knock
8、ed her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good exam
9、ple to their minds. They should not only care for their childrens health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.Everyone should do something good to build up our society, rig
10、ht?3高考是全社会关注的大事，学校和家庭表现尤为突出。家庭成员对考生从学习到生活给予无微不至的”关怀”，结果却给考生带来负面影响。根据图画所描述的内容写一篇文章,并发表自己的观点(夹叙夹议)。词数120左右。As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near，_As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is “s
11、tudying hard”. There are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do. How poor he is! At the same time, all his family are also busy working for him.Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitt
12、ed to an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they dont realize what they have become a heavy burden or a great pressure. It is the hard work or the great pressure that changes their children that much.So I hope parents provid
13、e a proper environment for their children. Only in this way, will they try their best and succeed at last!本文是夹叙夹议类的文章，主要反映家庭对考生的特别”关注”给他们带来负面影响。在写作过程中，对主题要审准、审清，对发展过程和结果进行叙述。4下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历，请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。注意：1. 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯、完整；2. 叙述必须用第一人称；3. 词数100左右。 生词：违章者offender n. 十字
14、路口crossroads n.The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. “Weve found you at long last,” they said. But we didnt know them. Pointing to a policeman
15、 not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hope you dont have to wait as long as we did. Good luck.”5下面四幅图描述了你班同学上周的一次研究性活动。请你根据图画内容用英语写一篇短文,在某英语刊物上介绍这次活动情况Last week, we did research into how laid-off wor
16、kers get their new jobs. We had a discussion in three groups and then began our research separately.Group One surfed on the Internet and learned that most of the laid-off workers had already got their new jobs. In the vocational training centre, the students in Group Two were told that there were fi
17、ve training courses for laid-off workers. After training, they began working as repairers, cooks, typists, household workers and salespersons. The other students interviewed some laid-off workers who had got new jobs. A woman said, “With the help of the city government, Ive found my job.”What a grea
18、t deal weve learned through the research!6下面六幅图画描述了你和同学们2月8日去学校附近的湖上滑冰的情况。请根据图画内容用英语写一篇日记。注意：1.日记必须包括所有图画的内容，可适当增加细节，使短文连贯。2.词数100左右。【参考范文】February 8th,SundayFineIt was cold today. My classmates and I went skating on the lake. As soon as we got there, we began to skate happily. While enjoying myself
19、, I suddenly noticed something unusual. The moment I warned Xiao Ming to take care, the ice broke and he slipped into the water.I was too frightened to know what to do. I anxiously ran to school to call my teacher for help. Hearing my cry, Mr. Zhang rushed over, telling us to phone 120 to call for d
20、octors, and jumped into the lake to save Xiao Ming, who was struggling in the cold water. At last, he was saved and no sooner had doctors arrived than he was sent to hospital. It was not long before Xiao Mings parents came. They expressed their thanks to Mr. Zhang.What a respectable teacher he is!7提
21、示：花园里有许多缸（vats）。 一群孩子在玩耍。突然一个孩子不小心掉进缸里，除了8岁的司马光外，其他的孩子都跑开了。司马光急中生智，用石头击破了缸，把那个孩子救了出来。Long ago, a group of boys were playing happily in the garden where there were many water vats. Suddenly a boy fell into a vat.All the boys ran away except a small one, whose name was Sima Guang , eight years old. He
22、 thought he should help the boy, so he hurried towards the large vat, and broke it with a big stone. Finally, the boy was saved.备考2010高考写作：议论文重点诠释：1议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实，讲道理的方式来辩明是非曲折，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点，论据和论证三部分构成。2在近几年的高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式是以表格式和提纲式来呈现写作材料的。3它要求语言必须简练，准确，要尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语，可适当使用名言警句；以议论
23、为主，辅之以叙述，说明和描写等手法。4写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论，即论据和论证要围绕论点展开。根据题目要求，有时需要从正反两面来论述，可增强论证的力度。最后，可得出结论，照应开头，形成一个有机的整体。5写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。写作典例：暑假即将来临，你班同学就假期计划进行讨论，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。优点缺点呆在家中花费少，舒适方便不能亲自了解外界外出旅游增长知识，开阔眼界。花费多，旅途不便注意：1。词数120左右（不含已写好部分）2短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述；3可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；4参考词汇：眼界horizon(view)
24、案例分析这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作，它以表格的形式提出了论点（呆在家中的优点和缺点以及外出旅游的优点和缺点）和论据，还以文字提示形式提出了话题（假期计划）及需要考生自由发挥的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种，并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优，缺点，根据题目的特点，以三段式的形式来写作比较好。根据内容，尽管讨论已经发生，但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论，没有特定的时间界定，因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述，这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。范文：The summer holiday i
25、s coming. Our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday.Some are in favor of staying at home. They think its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others pref
26、er to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my
27、parents with the housework.针对练习12002年普通高等学校招生全国英语统一考试书面表达试题最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为 40%的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：门票：entrance feeOne possible version:Dear Editor,Im
28、 writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest
29、and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other
30、 workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.Yours truly,Li Hua.浙江卷2当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：1、 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂2、 读原著：细节更多、语言优美3、 我的看法及理由注意：1、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数）。2、参考词汇： original wor
31、k 或 book in the original （原著）Film or book, which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.One possible VersionSome of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time
32、to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Per
33、sonally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.3如今世界粮食短
34、缺，价格飞涨，给部分地区造成社会动荡。假设在你校开展的研究性学习中，你们小组以“World Food Crisis”为题进行研究，现在请你代表你们小组向全体同学简要介绍你们的研究成果。主要内容如下：造成的原因 1. 气候变化，造成粮食减产2. 工业发展，城市化加速，耕地减少3. 世界能源价格上涨，使用粮食生产生物燃料应对的措施 1. 注重环保，改善生态2. 严格保护耕地3. 富国支持穷国，促进世界和谐你如何做出自己的贡献 1 2注意：1. 内容包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译2. 字数150左右，文章开头已提供，不计入总词数3. 参考词汇：城市化 urbanization 生物燃料 biofuel
35、sHello, everyone,Now Ill tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. _【命题方向与写作提示】这是一篇提纲式的议论文写作素材，探讨国计民生的社会热点话题：粮食价格上涨。写作时要注意避免逐句翻译，并适当增加细节以使行文
36、连贯。范文 (One possible version)Hello, everyone,Now Ill tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. But who is responsible for the current world f
37、ood crisis? First, annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. Then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization. Besides, faced with the rising energy prices, people have turned to the production of biofuels, which has worsened the
38、severe situation.Then what should we do to deal with the problem? On one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. On the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. Of course, to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take t
39、heir responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage.As for me, I will call on the people around me to live thriftily. And for the moment, I think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.2007高考英语作文范文4 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要
40、不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60的同学认为 1不应该收门票 2.公园是公众休闲的地方 3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象40的同学认为 1应收门票，但票价不要太高 2支付园林工人工资 3购新花木注意：1信的开头已为你写好。2词数：100左右。3参考词汇：门票-entrance feeDear EditorIm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parksDear e
41、ditor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be chargedfor parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet peoples expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not bus
42、y either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The mone
43、y from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?Yours truly,5诚实有益(It Pays to Be Honest)1 当
44、前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。2 诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。这是一篇论说文，从题目看，应从正面论证诚实的益处。第一段，举例说明在社会上存在的诸多不诚实现象，给社会和个人都造成了极大的伤害。第二段，从正面说明诚实既利人又利己，通过举例说明做人应该诚实。参考范文：As society and economy develop, dishonesty is no longer a stranger to us. Manufacturers and businessmen may promise more than their products can guarantee so as to make
45、more profit. Doctors and nurses may lie to their patients for their patients benefit. Students may cheat on exams for better scores. As a matter of fact, dishonesty has become so widespread that wherever you are you find cases of dishonesty.However, it is honesty that brings benefit both to yourself
46、 and to others. By being honest, manufacturers and businessmen build up mutual trust between themselves and customers, which in the long run generates more profit. By telling patients the truth about their conditions so that they can make their own decisions, doctors and nurses enhance their own cre
47、dibility and honor their profession. By giving honest answers to questions, not only can students themselves learn about their own strengths and weaknesses, but they help their teachers evaluate the quality of their instruction as well. Therefore, it pays to be honest and everybody must learn to be honest.6My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations(我对考试作弊的看法)
