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1、,书面表达变换句式,Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich.,a composition,topic sentence（主题句）,supporting sentences（扩展句）,ending（结尾句）,过渡词：first,second,finally,and,besides,also,but,however,whats more,Which composition feels more attractive,why?,Attention,1.格式 2.人称3.时态 4.要点5.语法 6.字数 7.书写,词汇,句型（高级）和语
2、法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点 2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4.语言得体,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,语言地道，规范,My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English.With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have made progress in my English.Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English.B
3、ut I still find it hard to learn English,such as some difficult idioms.Difficult as it is,I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.,请看范例,从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子”。其实，“规范的英语句子”就是我们经常讲的三种句子：,A)Simple sentence:Hearing the news,he was happy.,B)Compound sentence A:He gave
4、me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.,C)Compound sentence B:What he is doing has nothing to do with me.,=When he heard the news,he was happy.,Here are 3 ways to make sentences:,I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：,1)借助名词短语做同位语,如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。,Li Li,a boy of 19,was born in Guangdong in 1986.,2)借助介词短语做
5、定语,如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。,Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.,如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。,With the help of Tom,we soon found their village.,4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语,如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。,They are standing under the big tree,waiting for the president.,3)借助介词短语做状语,II.巧用连接词，写出规
6、范的并列句：,如：他给我钱，我不要。,I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.,如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。,He gave me money but I refused.,III.用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：,1)名词性从句,如：老师生气。原因：王明迟到。（主语从句）（表语从句）,That Wang Ming came late to school made the teacher very angry.,What made the teacher very angry was that Wang Ming
7、came late to school.,There was a heated discussion on whether students should use Ipad in class.,如:有个激烈的讨论。关于：学生是否应该在课堂上实用Ipad.,The news that our team won in the match made all of us excited.,如:消息使我们都兴奋。消息内容：我们队在比赛中获胜。,如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。,China,which lies in the east of Asia,is a great country
8、 with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.,3)状语从句,如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。,I was deeply moved by this,because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.,2)定语从句,4)其他句式，增强语句表现力,1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.（感叹）_we were to see crops and vegetables grow
9、ing well!2.Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920.（强调）It was_.3.He never speaks about his own family.（倒装）Never_.4.A notice is saying”Please Save Water”on the wall.（倒装）On the wall_.5.Though he is a child,he knows a lot.（倒装）_.,How glad,not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began,does he speak about hi
10、s own family,is a notice saying”Please Save Water”,Child though/as he is,he knows a lot,1 When he had finished supper,he went out to have a walk then.（使用V-ing形式）.2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）3.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句),Having finished supper,he wen
11、t out to have a walk then.,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,5.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,4.He did not know what had happened unt
12、il he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型),It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,6.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词)7.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says.（使用
13、状语从句）,Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing,they went back to school.,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句),Study hard and y
14、oull make rapid progress.,9.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（用并列句）,1.Shooting was originated as a means of survival.It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.(非谓语)2.The sport was first appeared in 1896,and it was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.(定语从句)3.The
15、sport returned to the Olympic only four years.(句型)4.However,women were not allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting until 1968.(倒装或强调)5.As the sport became more and more popular,it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.(with复合结构),Shooting,originated a
16、s a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.The sport,which first appeared in 1896,was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic.However,not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympi
17、c shooting.With the sport becoming more and more popular,it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,Kate is a new student.She comes from a northern province.She speaks a dialect.We find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate,a new student
18、from a northern province,speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,用一句话表达,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句,Not everyone is good at learning English.,Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same
19、time.,This will affect their Chinese study.,Not everyone is good at learning English.,Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time.,This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time
20、 will affect their Chinese study,because not everyone is good at learning English.,Not everyone is good at learning English.,Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time.,This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,If children from primary school start to learn
21、 English and Chinese at the same time,this will affect their Chinese study,方法2：,because not everyone is good at learning English.,情景说明 通知：新光中学高三年级学生将于9月9日去体检。体检地点：第一人民医院 体检时间：9月9日，星期六 注意：1、7:45在医院门口集合，可以骑车或步行前往；2、体检前空腹；3、在医院要保持安静，听从医生和护士的安排。,实战练习,Notice The students in Senior Three of Xinguang Middl
22、e School will go to have a physical examination in the First Peoples Hospital on Saturday,9th Sept.Well meet at the hospital gate at 7:45.You may either walk there or go there by bike.We are not allowed to eat or drink anything before the examination.Please keep quiet and listen to the doctors and n
23、urses when you are there.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇：错别字:wrongly-written characters网络语言：web language,要求：1.用两句话表达表格内容 2.两句话要有连贯性,第一句（两个信息点）：1.学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。,There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions.,The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in
24、students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.,合并句子：,They often use web languages when chatting on line.,1.They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters,第二句:1.每天有很多作业做 2.没有记住生字。,They have much homework to do every day.,2.Wi
25、th so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.,3.Because they have so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.,合并句子：,They fail to memorize the new characters.,连接两句话：The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they
26、 often use web languages when chatting on line.Moreover,they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.,1.一个乞丐在路边讨钱(ask for money)。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。2.乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(trip over)。3.李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。4.李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note)。突然一阵风
27、把钞票吹到了空中。5.乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。,实战演练：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。,A beggar,A beggar 1 One day,Mr.Li hurried on his way to work.A beggar on the roadside was asking for money.Mr.Li paid no attention on him.2The beggar got angry and stuck out his walking stick.It
28、almost tripped Mr.Li over.3When he realized the beggar was a disabled person,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.4He took out a 100-yuan note,but it was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.5 Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note.It made Mr.Li so s
29、urprised that he stood there with his mouth open.,Rome is not built in one day.,Practice makes perfect!,May you succeed!,Thank you,A beggar One day,when Mr.Li hurried on his way to work,a beggar on the roadside was asking for money,but Mr.Li paid no attention to him.As a result,the beggar got angry
30、and stuck out his walking stick,which almost tripped Mr.Li over.Realizing the beggar was a disabled person,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.He took out a 100-yuan note,which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note,which made Mr.Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.,
