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1、写作指导技法点拨,写一封劝说信,1.覆盖所有的要点 2.应用较多的语法结构和词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全 文结构紧凑,词汇,句型,语法多样化,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,劝说性的书信写作文体分析 劝说性的书信写作目的是向某个组织或个人提出劝说性的建议的一种应用文体。结构和要点第一段：点明写信的目的第二段：说清楚建议的事项及理由第三段：再次提出希望,审题谋篇 假设你叫李华，请给Nicolaus Copernicus写一封100个词左右的信劝说他出版自己的理论著作，这样可以让每个人都了解他的理论，从而推动科学的发展。,劝说信,劝说出版理论著作,一般现在时及将来时态,第二人
2、称,首段：点明写信的目的，希望Nicolaus Copernicus出版他的理论著作,中段：说清楚建议出版其理论著作的理由,尾段：再一次提出希望Nicolaus Copernicus 出版他的理论著作,结构首段中段尾段,I am writing to persuade you to I am and eager to/dying to persuade you to(I strongly hope you can for several reasons.),(Here are my reasons.)First of all,I think it would be better if Beca
3、use you will.if.Besides/Moreover/Whats more/Furthermore,Id like to give my advice on./I would like to suggest that.If I were you,I would.Of course,the challenge you will face is great if you.Finally/Last but not least,.No matter how.,.will.,Please take my advice into consideration and make a final d
4、ecision.So I sincerely hope you can.Looking forward to your early reply.,Challenge your memory 1.I am a student studying astronomy and_ your new theory about the solar system.2.The present theory_.3._ is not _if the earth is_.4.It is also strange that the brightness of some stars_.5.So the sun is _t
5、he solar system.6.Your observation have _over many years.7.You _if you publish your new theory.8.Science will_ if people dont _ their ideas.9._,I think,time will _that your ideas are right.,I am dying to read,doesnt make sense/makes no sense,The way the planets move,what you have observed,the centre
6、 of the universe,seems to change,the centre of,been very carefully carried out,will face a great challenge,never advance,have the courage to put forward,No matter how people oppose it,prove,句式升级4.It is also strange that the brightness of some stars seems to change.7.You will face a great challenge i
7、f you publish your new theory.8.Science will never advance if people dont have the courage to put forward their ideas.,Strangely,It is also strange that,The challenge you will face is great if,unless people have the courage to,过渡词1）递进：furthermore,moreover,besides,in addition2）转折：however,but,neverthe
8、less,after all3）总结：finally,at last,in brief,to conclude,so4）强调：really,indeed,certainly,surely,above all5）对比：on the contrary;contrary to,on the one hand,on the other hand,妙笔成篇Dear Nicolaus Copernicus,I am a student studying astronomy and I am dying to read your new theory about the solar system.I hop
9、e you will publish it for several reasons.The present theory doesnt make sense._,the way the planets move is not what you have observed if the earth is the centre of the universe;_,strangely,the brightness of some stars seems to change._the sun is the centre of the solar system._,your observations h
10、ave been very carefully carried out over many years._,the challenge you will face is great if you publish your new theory._,science will never advance unless people have the courage to put forward their ideas.No matter how people oppose it,_,time will prove that your ideas are right._I sincerely hop
11、e you can publish your new theory.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua,Dear Nicolaus Copernicus,I am a student studying astronomy and I am dying to read your new theory about the solar system.I hope you will publish it for several reasons.The present theory doesnt ake sense.On
12、the one hand,the way the planets move is not what you have observed if the earth is the centre of the universe;on the other hand,strangely,the brightness of some stars seems to change.So the sun is the centre of the solar system.As we all know,your observation have been very carefully carried out ov
13、er many years.Of course,the challenge you will face is great if you publish your new theory.However,science will never advance unless people have the courage to put forward their ideas.No matter how people oppose it,I think,time will prove that your ideas are right.So I sincerely hope you can publis
14、h your new theory.Yours sincerely,Li Hua,On the one hand,on the other hand,So,As we all know,Of course,However,I think,So,Assignment,假设你是李华，你的英国朋友John最近沉迷于电脑游戏不能自拔，严重影响了学习和身心健康，请你给他写一封信，劝他改掉这个坏习，并对他的学习生活给出自己的建议。,Dear John,I really feel worried about you when I heard that you were addicted to compute
15、r games.Im writing to persuade you to quit computer games.You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school.But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and dont listen to teachers as carefully as before in class.Als
16、o,you cant hand in your homework on time.Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed,but if you spend too much time on it,you will have less time to study.And it may do harm to your health.For example,it can hurt your eyes and neck.I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies.Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored?As your friend,Ill be glad to share your happiness and sadness.Looking forward to your quick reply.Yours,Li Hua,
