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1、作文高分卷的特点,根据高考最新考纲、书面表达的评分标准以及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。,词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。likeBe fond of,be addicted to/helpdo sb a favor 句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。,对比观点作文(
2、1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1.有一些人认为。2.另一些人认为。3.我的看法。The topic of-(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of-(支持A的理由一)What is more,-理由二).Moreover,-(理由三).While others think that B is a be
3、tter choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),-(理由二).Thirdly(finally),-(理由三).From my point of view,I think-(我的观点).The reason is that-(原因).As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me,the former is surely a wise choice.,解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决
4、问题的多种途径1.问题现状 2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days,we have to face I problem-A,which is becoming more and more serious.First,-(说明A的现状).Second,-(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,-(解决方法一).For another-(解决方法二).Finally,-(解决方法三).P
5、ersonally,I believe that-(我的解决方法).Consequently,Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because-(带来的好处).a,说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1.说明事物现状 2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3.你对现状(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in
6、our daily life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First-(A的优点之一).Besides-(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that-(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,-(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis,I believe that the posit
7、ive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore,I would like to-(我的看法).From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A,we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,-(对前景的预测).),议论文的框架(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)There is a widespread concer
8、n over the issue that _作文题目_.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一_.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,_原因一_.Furthermore,in the second place,_原因二_.
9、So it goes without saying that _观点一_.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that _观点二_.In their point of view,on the one hand，_原因一_.On the other hand,_原因二_.Therefore,thereis nodoubtthat _观点二_.As far as I am concerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat _观点一或二_.Itis not only b
10、ecause _,but also because _.The more _,the more _.,(2)利弊型的议论文 Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)_作文题目_.In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in _题目议题_.Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly,_优点一_.And secon
11、dly _优点二_.Just As a popular saying goes,every coin has two sides,_讨论议题_ is no exception,and in another word,it still has negative aspects.To begin with,_缺点一_.In addition,_缺点二_.To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of _讨论议题_ into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the
12、same time.In that case,we will definitely make a better use of the _讨论议题_.,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高 级的词汇;,Tips,The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character.It adds financial burden to their parents.The worlds limited natural resources will be used up.,In the fi
13、rst place,the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character.Secondly,it adds financial burden to their parents.Last but not least,the worlds limited natural resources,such as water and electricity,will be used up soon.,First of all Firstly,To begin with,In addition,Beside
14、s,Moreover,Whats more,Finally,Whats worse,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高 级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章 结构紧凑;,Tips,As far as I am concerned,I think only when all of us are fully aware of its seriousness can the situation be improved.On the one hand,it is necessary for schools to educate every student not to w
15、aste anything in any form and on the other hand every one of us should start with ourselves to fight against waste.It is not until all of us are involved in the activity that we can bring the situation under control.,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较 高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章 结构紧凑;适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,尽量避免重复和单调。,
16、Tips,高考优秀作文赏析,暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。,待在家中,外出旅游,优点,缺点,花费少，舒适方便,增长见识，开阔眼界,不能亲身了解外界,花费多，旅途不便,注意：1、短文必须写在答题卡的规定区域，词数80120（不包含已写好部分）。2、短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表达。3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4、参考词汇：眼界horizon(或view)The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do
17、 during the holiday.,The summer holiday is coming.Our class have a discussion about what to during the holiday.Some students are in favor of staying at home.They think its both convenient and comfortable.Whats more,they can save money for other purposes.But they will lose the chance of getting to kn
18、ow the outside world.However,others prefer to go out for traveling it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons.But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.In my opinion,it would be much better to stay at home,for I can do what I like,such as reading books
19、,watching TV,and helping my parents with housework.,One possible version:,2023/5/3,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,1、汉语式思维 See the film will took me much time.He happened an accident yesterday.,2、谓语缺失 He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.She in the classroom yesterday.,3、There be 句型出错 There a
20、re five students play basketball on the playground.There are some workers are working in the field.,(An accident happened to him yesterday.),2023/5/3,6、非谓语动词出错 Being seriously ill,his class-mates sent him to hospital.Seeing from the space,the earth looks like a ball.,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,4、谓语动词用法出错 He d
21、ressed in a new coat.Great changes have been taken place.When I arrived Hong Kong,my mother was there waiting for me.He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom.,5、词性混用 She enjoys study English.If anyone against the plan,please let me know.,2023/5/3,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,7、分数与百分数作主语 In our cla
22、ss,20%students are girls,but three fifths students are boys.,8、定语从句错误 The two boys are reading are my brothers.The book I bought it is lost.Ill never forget the days when we spent in the village together.,9、连词出错 Although he tried,but he still couldnt keep up with the others.My suggestion is we try f
23、or a second time.,10、形容词、副词混用 The patient appeared nervously when he talked to the doctor.The artist worked hardly to finish his drawings on time.,2023/5/3,Dear Sue,Im Li Hua,is one of your students in China.Its almost a month since you left us.We all very miss you and are very grateful for you did
24、for us.We are busy as usually.We had an English speech contest the other day.I won the first prize.This again reminds me of all your kind help.Do you still remember the trees we planted them together on the hill behind the school?Yesterday,we went there and water them.The tree you planted yourself i
25、s growing good,and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood.Will you come back see Sue Wood?How is everything with you lately?We hope to know more about you with your Ameican students.Hope to keep in close touch.All the best,Li Hua,作文修改,2023/5/3,实例写作,(2010 全国)假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教
26、，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：1教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）3工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课 担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。Dear Peter,I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China._ Best,Li hua,2023/5/3,写作技巧点拨,1、提纲式作文为半开放型写作。,2、要点均为45个（多为4+1个要点
27、），要点提示比较简洁，考生 111有发散思维的空间；,3、英语作文多为三段式：1para.Topic sentence(main idea,writers attitude)2nd para.Body(different points)3rd para.Ending(writers own idea),4、尽量避免第一印象词汇出现,5、好的连词与表达法的使用。,2023/5/3,范文,Dear Peter,I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.Our school is looking for a nat
28、ive-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.If youd like to come,you can choose three of the following four courses:Speaking,Writing,Britain Today and America Today,and teach 12 periods a week.The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learnin
29、g experiences.Besides teaching,you will also work as an advisor for our students English club or our schools English newspaper.Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other decisions.Best,Li hua,养成良好的写作习惯一、书写规范，卷面整洁；二、审清题目，提炼要点；三、组词造句，组句成篇；四、仔细检查，认真修改。,书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求,第五档（21-25分
30、）完全完成了试题规定的任务。准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式 所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档（16-20分）完成了试题规定的任务。比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂语言结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的。,How to get the highest marks in writing?,a good
31、passage(skills),语言第一位 语言高级(词和句),内容第二位 要点齐全,结构第三位 文章分段,一高级词汇-人靠衣装,文靠词装,高级词汇四原则,避免重复原则,地道原则,形容词副词修饰原则,词组优先原则,语言第一位-语言高级,高级句式-抓住高考英语老师阅卷的心理秘诀,四不如,1._ 不如 _ 好,With your help I have made progress in English.,Without your help,I couldnt have made progress in English,双否,肯定,2._ 不如 _ 妙,Students should have th
32、e habit of smoking by no means.,By no means should students have the habit of smoking.,陈述,倒装,主动,被动,3._ 不如 _ 巧,We can borrow five books for ten days.Five books can be borrowed for ten days.,4.从 句 不如 分词 傲(难点）,口诀；一去；二看；三改一去，去连词；二看，看从句中主语和动词的关系三改，改分词When he heard the bad news,he cant help crying.,Hearing the bad news,the young man cant help cryng.,内容第二位-要点齐全,structures 1 heading 点题两三句概括性2 body 中心记述部分层次分明3 ending 小结呼应主题,结构第三位-文章分段结构,steps,审,抓,扩,连,查,认真审题把握主题,抓准要点 勾勒大纲,紧扣要点扩写成文,添加过渡确保连贯,查错补漏修饰文章,二 steps,
