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1、Writing Fundamentals,English in Daily Life,Agenda,The first assignment The second assignment,The deadline,高级日常英语 作业01(第1-4单元)高级日常英语 作业02(朗读题),My Routine Trip,Instructions:Following the example in Unit 4,Activity 6,Task 2,write a brief account(120-150 words)describing your routine trip to a work plac
2、e or to a study place.,p.189,Now I study at the university,which is in the town centre.My home is on the outskirts of the town,about one and a half miles from the university.There is a regular busservice between the two but I prefer to walk when the weathers fine.It is a pleasant walk,downhill all t
3、he way!It takes me about forty minutes and I spend the time enjoying the peace and quiet of the early morning and thinking about the day ahead.I pass a lovely old church on the way and have to cross the river.Sometimes,if I have time,I stop to chat to one or two people on the way.If it is raining,I
4、have to take the bus.The bus journey itself is quick but its a long walk from my house to the bus stop and then from the bus stop to the university.So it is actually quicker to do the whole journey on foot!It is cheaper too.The bus costs 54 pence,which is quite expensive for such a short distance,So
5、me helpful words,Subway/underground地铁Taxi/bus/bike/bicycle/motorbikehitchhiking 搭便车Long-distance bus 长途客车Regular bus 班车Shuttle bus 往返巴士,Marking criteria,本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，三部分分值相加即为作文的总分。,语言,50分用词巧妙，词汇丰富，表达手法灵活多变，写作技巧精湛，明显超出普通水平。语法结构严谨。40分 用词正确，能灵活运用多种表达手法，偶有选词错误。语法结
6、构一般。30分（及格）用词能力稍差，表达手法单一，选词有较明显错误。语法结构需较多改进。20分 用词较差，表达手法单一。文中时用汉语词汇或拼音。选词有明显错误。语法结构急需改进。,Example 1,I usually leave my home to my working place at about 7:40 am.It is not a short distance between my home and working place.I need take overground and underground tube to my office.Batong Line is the ov
7、erground one and air conditioned.It runs every 3 minutes at peak time and have an average journey time of 30 minutes with passengers packed like sardines.After getting off the Batong Line I changed to the Line 1 tube which is the underground tube.Some of the train in Line 1 are not air conditioned,i
8、t is so terrible in these hot days.I found a lady beside me fainted because of the heat after twenty minites journy.I companied her got off the carriage and asked the tube staff take care of her.For no time admit,I continued my journey.When I got to my office,I thought is it so expensive of the time
9、 to survive in this big city.,Example 1,I usually leave my home to my working place at about 7:40 am.It is not a short distance between my home and working place.I need take overground and underground tube to my office.Batong Line is the overground one and air conditioned.It runs every 3 minutes at
10、peak time and have an average journey time of 30 minutes with passengers packed like sardines.After getting off the Batong Line I changed to the Line 1 tube which is the underground tube.Some of the train in Line 1 are not air conditioned,it is so terrible in these hot days.I found a lady beside me
11、fainted because of the heat after twenty minites journy.I companied her got off the carriage and asked the tube staff take care of her.For no time admit,I continued my journey.When I got to my office,I thought is it so expensive of the time to survive in this big city.,Example 2,I walked joyfully al
12、ong the path that was lit up by the golden rays of the morning sun.Beautiful flowers of many colors were blooming.How fragrant they smelled!Little birds were singing in the trees,as if greeting me“good morning!good morning!”.my heart was bursting with happiness.我愉快的走在小路上，金色的朝阳洒满大地，盛开的花朵五彩缤纷，香气袭人，小鸟在
13、树上歌唱，好像在向我道早安，我幸福的心花怒放,Main Differences between English and Chinese,1.narration and description in Chinese seem to be a bit more ornate or“flowery”than in English,2.Chinese and English-speaking people seem to look differently on the use of set phrases and expressions.Good English writing encourages
14、originality and discourages“clichs”e.g.千方百计，七嘴八舌，三令五申 as cold as a cucumber,3.English-speaking writers tend to be less militant in tone and language than most Chinese.The idea is to“let the facts speak for themselves”.,4They havedifferent meanings of words Read 读书 cook 做饭 drive 开车 X Lets go and eat
15、our meals XHe sang songs at the concert X I dont smoke cigarettes or drink wine.,5 They have differentword formations Suffix:er:work-worker write-writer 员:教员,学员,演员 ly：beautifully,greatly,wonderfully 地:完美地,高兴地,匆忙地,6 They differ ingrammar:Number of nouns e.g.One book,two books 一本书,两本书 们:人们,同志们,朋友们 X 猴
16、子们,书们 X 三个人们,7 They differ in Tense and aspect:Work,worked,will work(现在)工作,(过去)工作,(将来)工作 progressive:正在 They are having lunch。perfect:已经,7 They have differentword orders毛主席 Chairman Mao劳动模范 Model worker东北 Northeast衣食住 Food,clothing,and housing,6)Use of verb我有点累了 I am a bit tired他的眼睛是蓝的 He has blue e
17、yes.,8 Different ways of thinking and association of thought and different cultural background.You have my sympathy.我很同情你(x你有我的同情)他老婆跑了.His wife abandoned him.(X His wife ran away.),Exercise:够意思!不过我的意思你还是收下,不要不好意思.How kind you are!But I insist that you should receive it.Dont feel embarrassed.,Wrap-u
18、p,本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，,注意汉英差异,内容,40分 文章内容切题，内容充实，思维新颖见解独到，思想水平卓越。篇幅适当，行文流畅，有较强的可读性和趣味性。28 文章基本切题，但思想表达能力有限，立意不清。篇幅较短。句子结构一般，有时意思模糊，理解较困难。可读性及趣味性较弱 24 文章大致切题。篇幅不够，句子结构较差,Example 1,I usually leave my home to my working place at about 7:40 am.It is not a short distance b
19、etween my home and working place.I need take overground and underground tube to my office.Batong Line is the overground one and air conditioned.It runs every 3 minutes at peak time and have an average journey time of 30 minutes with passengers packed like sardines.After getting off the Batong Line I
20、 changed to the Line 1 tube which is the underground tube.Some of the train in Line 1 are not air conditioned,it is so terrible in these hot days.I found a lady beside me fainted because of the heat after twenty minites journy.I companied her got off the carriage and asked the tube staff take care o
21、f her.For no time admit,I continued my journey.When I got to my office,I thought is it so expensive of the time to survive in this big city.,结构,9/10分 文章语篇结构清晰，能够自如使用连接词连接上下文，语篇逻辑关系清晰 6分 文章语篇结构基本清晰，能够使用一些连接词连接上下文，语篇逻辑关系基本清晰；,Contents,CapitalisationComma vs.periodConnecting sentencesand,so,but,alsoLay
22、out of English passagesIndentationFull-block,CAPITALISATION-1,A Report on the Trips“How was your trip?”I asked.He said,“My trip to Yunnan was interesting.”“My trip to Mount Tai,”she said,“was rather tiring.”I asked,“Really?Thats funny.”,CAPITALISATION-2,First words of sentences(sentence fragments)Ke
23、y words in titlesNouns,verbs,adjectives,adverbs,long prepositionsPrepositionsProper namesPeoplePlaces(stars,continents,countries,cities,streets)Languages HolidaysReligionsTitles(Mr.,Ms.,President,Sir,etc.),CONNECTING SENTENCES,and,but,so,oralso,as a result,thereforeWhen,before,after,CONNECTING SENTE
24、NCES,I realise now that the boys loved me.I was little.I often felt lonely and left out.They were always having fun together.I was too small to play with them.I suppose I was quite independent.,CONNECTING SENTENCES,I realise now that the boys loved me,but when I was little I often felt lonely and le
25、ft out.They were always having fun together,but I was too small to play with them.As a result,I suppose I was quite independent,Punctuation&Basic Sentence Structures,It too far from Beiwai,I think you can change your work to Tianjin.,Its too far from Beiwai.I think you can Its too far from Beiwai,bu
26、t I think you can As it is too far from Beiwai,I think you can Its too far from Beiwai,so I think you can Its too far from Beiwai;I think you can Its too far from Beiwai,and I think you can,Punctuation&Basic Sentence Structures,My brother like seeing films.The man and her daughter is here.It is earl
27、y in the morning.I got up before my parents and,Agreement,COMMA vs.PERIOD,Maria是北京外国语大学的新生，她今年19岁，来自英国。Maria is a new student at BFSU.She is 19 and is from Britain.,LAYOUT OF PASSAGES,Indented style,Full block style,I work at a software company that is located near Fu Xing men,Xicheng district.My ho
28、me is in Hai-dian District,its about 12 kilometre from my workplace.There are many ways to went from my home to my office.It takes almost one hour by bus to get to my workplace from my home.Although it is long journey,The transport is convenient.There are three direct bus service.No 716,No 732 and N
29、o 723 with air-condition,the fee of No 716 is very cheap,only 1 Yuan,but No 732 or No 723 are 2 to 3 Yuans.I can also choose to take the subway to save time,but it more expensive and I need to take bus to get to the subway station.I take subway only when I got up late.It spends me about 45 minute an
30、d 6 Yuan.The most expensive way to go to work is taxi.Its really expensive,but not save me much time actually.It always cost over 20 Yuan because of the traffic,so I seldom get to work by taxi.If the weather is fine and I am full of energy,I prefer to go to work by bike.On my way to the workplace,I
31、pass many university,the National Library,the Purple Bamboo Park and Diaoyu Tai.It is also a good form of physical exercises for me,too.,Can you improve it?,I work at a software company that is located near Fuxingmen,Xicheng District.,There are many ways to go from my home to my office.It takes almo
32、st one,732 and No 723 with air-conditioning.The fee of No 716 is very cheap,only 1,subway to save time,but it will be more expensive and I need to take a bus to,about 45 minutes and 6 Yuan.The most expensive way to go to work is by taxi.,Its really expensive,but not saving me much time actually.It a
33、lways costs over 20 Yuan because of the traffic,so I seldom get to work by taxi.If the weather is,fine and I am full of energy,I prefer to go to work by bike.On my way to the workplace,I pass many universities,the National Library,the Purple Bamboo Park and Diaoyutai.It is also a good form of physic
34、al exercise for me,too.,My home is in Haidian District,about 12 kilometres from my workplace.,Yuan,but No 732 or No 723 are 2 to 3 Yuan.I can also choose to take the,get to the subway station.I take the subway only when I get up late.It takes me,hour by bus to get to my workplace from my home.Althou
35、gh it is a long journey,the transport is convenient.There are three direct bus services No 716,No,Agenda,The first assignment The second assignment,Read the following text,imitating the assignment recording.Please record your own reading and upload it to the platform.I was lucky enough to find a ver
36、y nice place to live in soon after I arrived.The rents only 45 pounds a week,plus my share of the bills.Its a room in a flat in a high-rise block.There are three other tenants and though we each have our own rooms,we share the sitting room,kitchen and bathroom.The rooms are quite well furnished and
37、theres everything I need in the kitchen-except a coffee machine.Theres a television in the sitting room but no telephone.That should save me quite a bit of money.Ill have to get used to writing letters instead!I havent yet spent much time with the other tenants but I dont foresee any problems.The bl
38、ock is in rather a rough neighbourhood but our next-door neighbour seems a nice guy.Hes rather quiet but very helpful.Hes already told me where to find the best pubs and so on.There are a few shops nearby so I can do most of my shopping locally,but Ill have to go into town for most other things.Its
39、only about twenty minutes walk from the town centre which is just as well since the buses dont seem to run very often!出处：高级日常英语 Unit 5-Activity 7-Task 2,100分语音准确清晰，表现稳定；能准确自如地运用所有语音技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等。90分除少数音外，语音基本准确清晰，表现基本稳定；能比较自如地运用多数语音技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等。80分语音基本准确，表现大体稳定，有时不够清晰；能够运用一些朗读技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等。70分多数语音准确，表现不够稳定，吐字不够清晰；朗读生硬，缺乏语音技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等。60分语音多不准确，中式发音很重，吐字很不清晰；朗读生硬，缺乏语音技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等，造成一定听读困难。,1 Mp3 或录用笔2 电脑上录音：开始,程序,附件,娱乐,录音机 3 下载录音软件：蓝光录音 Cool Edit Pro,
