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1、,“亮”出你的作文,表格类作文的构建,Which is better?,1 周末我们会有很多作业要做.,A We have endless homework to do at the weekend.B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.,2 在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象.,A Of all my teachers,I still remember Mr Moore.B Of all my teachers,Mr Moore gave me the deepest impression.,warming-up,3 英语
2、培训班结束后回到家，他的妈妈感到精疲力尽。A.His mother came back home after the English training class,feeling very tired.B.His wife came back home after the English training class,feeling very exhausted.,4.突然我想到了一个主意。A.A good idea occurred to me.B.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.,高分作文技巧,方法一:善用高级词汇,1 We can achieve a
3、 good grade by changing the way we study.(only倒装)2 How should we protect eyesight?It still remains a question among us.(主语从句),Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a good grade.,How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.,3.My school life is very colorful.(感叹句),How colo
4、rful my school life is!,4.Because I felt tired,I went to bed early.(分词短语),Feeling tired,I went to bed early.,5.A girl was injured in the accident.She is now in hospital.(定语从句),The girl who was injured in the accident is now in hospital.,6.She helped me a lot with my maths when we were together.(强调句)
5、,It is she who helped me a lot with my maths when we were together.,高分作文技巧,方法二:使用多种句子结构,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,Topic:How to Lengthen Your Composition,1.利用模板,总起:.Different people hold different opinions.Opini
6、ons are divided.People have taken different attitudes towards.People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.,表达观点一:Some of us think/hold the view/are in favor of the idea thatThe reason is that.Besides,(Some are against the view that.)表达观点二:(However/On t
7、he other hand),others have just the opposite opinion.They think thatWhats more,However,each coin has two sides.本人观点：As far as I am concerned,(In my opinion,;Its my opinion that)For one reason,For another reason In a word,Only throughcan we have a bright future.,起（引出主题）,转承（陈述观点）,结（总结观点）,方法添加与所给信息有关的前
8、因后果及条件，目的等内容,2、附加成分作解释说明,例一：这样更方便照顾父母。,拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。,原因,as they are getting older and older.,Owing to/because,例二：因作业过多，孩子们晚上睡觉很晚。,拓展：这导致孩子们在白天的课堂上昏昏欲睡。,后果,which made them sleepy in class in the daytime.,It will be much more convenient to look after your parents,There were too much homework that kids
9、 stayed up late at night,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,2、附加成分作解释说明,条件,目的,例三：安全出口（exit）标志不明，存在安全隐患(potential hazard）。,拓展：万一遇到危险，观众难以逃脱。,In case of danger,it is difficult for the audience to escape.,例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查,We did a survey about how our middle school students communicate with each other durin
10、g the holiday,拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式,In order to learn about how our middle school students communicate with each other during the holiday,we did a survey with the help of my classmates.,The exit is not clear,so there will be potential hazard.,2、附加成分作解释说明,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,2、附加成分作解释说明,(1)表达不同原因的概
11、括语There are several reasons for this.The reasons are as follows.The reason foris thatThe reason why is that(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语：It goes without saying thatIts needless to say thatNeedless to say,Its obvious that,2、附加成分作解释说明,3.加谚语(Proverb),锻炼对学生有好处,It is good for us students to take exercise,As the sayin
12、g goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.,3.添加谚语,加谚语(Proverb),集中注意力于学习,We should concentrate our mind on our studies.,As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate our mind on our studies.,Enjoy some proverbs:,1.Strike the iron wh
13、ile it is hot.2.Think twice before you do.3.Practice makes perfect.4.Where there is a will,there is a way.5.Do as the Romans do.7.Failure is the mother of success.8.It is no use crying over spilt milk.9.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.10.All roads lead to Rome.,趁热打铁。,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入乡随俗。,
14、早起的鸟儿有虫吃。,失败是成功之母。,覆水难收。,一天一个苹果，医生远离我。,条条大路通罗马。,6.The early bird catches the worm.,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable ba
15、gs instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees and save water and energy.,4.举例说明,在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活（举例说明）,I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash,ect.,保护环境,As students,we should start from ourselves.Here Id lik
16、e to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment.With everyone doing his bit,we can change the present situation.,Dont hesitate.It will be great fun!Dont wait.Join us now!Since it has so many benefits,what are you waiting for?Start to join us now!,5.结尾提出倡议或号召,参加俱乐部或活动,构建表格类书面表达的方
17、法：,2.附加成分作解释说明,3.加谚语(Proverb),4.举例说明,5.结尾提出倡议或号召,1.利用模板,现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重，很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章。参考词汇：肥胖：obesity 垃圾食品：junk food要求：1.字数100左右.。2.对所有要点要适当发挥，不要简单翻译。3.开头已给出，不计入总数Recently,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned._,写作训练,要点分析,如何起、转、承、结,On my part,利用模板,Nowadays,more and
18、more teenagers are getting fatter,our parents are in great concern.Why are so many kids getting fatter and fatter?,Some are,others are,they are getting less exercise than before.,1.缺少运动,Because of the popularity of TV and computers,and because students have so much homework to do,Because peoples qua
19、lity of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,2.饮食结构不合理,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks,which might make the kids overweight.,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.,建议1.多参加体育锻炼,In orde
20、r to lose weight and stay healthy,They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables,and less fast food and junk food.,2.多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品,As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”,Last but not least,they should make a proper time schedule,3.制定合理的计划，时间表,so that they
21、 can balance our exercise and studies.,合成文章,Recently,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned.Why are teens getting fatter and fatter?In my opinion,there are two main reasons for this problem.Firstly,because of the popularity of TV and computers,and students are burdeded wi
22、th so much homework to do.They are getting less exercise than before.Secondly,because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks,which might make the kids overweight.,For another,On the other hand,a
23、roused,For one thing,On the one hand,In order to lose weight and stay healthy,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits,vegetable
24、s,less fast food and junk food.Last but not least,they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.,Homework,时下，很多学生带手机上学。为此，某英文报组织了一场讨论,讨论的主题是：中学生是否有必要带手机上学。请你根据下表提供的信息，将讨论的结果整理成文进行投稿。注意;1.词数100左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所有内容要点，并阐明自己的观点，不要逐 句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯，通顺；,Thanks for listening!,
