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1、书面表达高分策略,以情动人，表情达意显不凡,一、运用情感性词语,某些副词或副词词语（如always,never,so,only,obviously,fortunately,though,fairly,rather,much too,more than等）、介词短语（如 without doubt,without hesitation,of course,above all,on the contrary,in low spirits,thanks to等）及情感类动词（如shock,confuse,puzzle,frighten,inspire,astonish等）都具有较强的情感色彩，恰当的
2、运用这些词语能增强句子的表现力。例如：,If there is anything I can do for you,I would be more than glad to help.句中用more than表达“非常”的含义，体现了作者十分乐于帮助他人的真挚之情。That young man recommended himself to us without hesitation.介词短语 without hesitation表达了年轻人想要介绍自己的迫切之情。,However,when we reached the top,we were shocked to see litter her
3、e and there,such as bottles and banana peels.此处用shock强调了“我们”目睹课满地的垃圾之多后的震惊。,1.“to ones+情感类名词”结构。常用于该结构中的情感类名词有 astonishment,amazement,annoyance,delight,joy,relief,regret,satisfaction,surprise等，有时可在该结构前加much加强程度。在书面表达中适当选用该结构，能得到以情动人、增强文章感染力的效果。例如：,二、选用情感性结构,When Paul got home,he said to his grandpa,
4、“Birds also need friends!”To his delight,his grandpa agreed.To his delight在句中的运用，使得保罗的喜悦之情跃然纸上。Usually John would be late for meeting.But this time,much to my surprise,he arrived on time.在 to my surprise前面加上much,更体现了作者倍感意外的心情。,2.“A is to B what C is to D”结构。该比喻结构用于强调某事物的重要性，在书面表达中运用该结构进行恰如其分的比喻，可表现出
5、作者的情感世界。例如：Air is to us what water is to fish.There is no doubt that we should take measures to keep air and water clean.该句表达了作者对生活环境的关注，号召人们行动起来保持空气和水源的清洁。,3.情感性插入语，如“what better,what was worse,worse still,to make matters worse,Im sure,Im afraid等。例如：I returned home very late,and what was worse,I co
6、uld not find my house key.what was worse不仅起衔接作用，而且流露出作者当时非常糟糕的心情。当然，表达情感的结构远远不止以上这些，同学们在学习过程中应注意积累，并在书面表达中有意识的运用，必然使文章增色不少。,三、采用情感性语句,疑问句，感叹句，强调句等情感性语句在书面表达中是常用来表达作者情感，直抒胸臆的手段。例如：How is everything with you lately?该疑问句表达了作者对对方的关切之情，读来让人顿感温馨。You can hardly imagine how excited I was at that time,becaus
7、e we hadnt met each other since graduation.该句将how引导的感叹句用于宾语从句，反映了作者见到老同学时的兴奋，喜悦之情。,Sometimes it is just such little things that make a big difference.该强调句体现了作者只能更是从小事做起的内心感悟。,四、其他体现情感的表达方式,除了上述常用的表情达意的方法外，借助以下两种方法也能体现作者在字里行间流露出的情感态度。1.运用特定时态 例如：He is not a person you can depend on,for he is always t
8、elling lies.always,constantly,continually等用于现在进行时，可表达亲切，惊讶，责备，不满厌恶等感情色彩。该句表达了作者的不满情绪。,2.运用虚拟语气。例如：Therefore,its high time we did something about it.该句运用虚拟语气表达了作者的迫切心情。,下面我们通过一篇书面表达的写作范例，看看如何在书面表达中以情动人，表情达意显不凡。,【写作任务】假设你叫李华，你的外籍教师Sally结束了在你校为期一年的工作并于上周五回国。你原定当天到机场为他送行，可由于要代表学校参加一场英语演讲比赛而未能如愿。请根据以下内容给
9、她发一封电子邮件。1 对没能到机场送行表示遗憾；2 回忆与Sally在圣诞节一起表演英语短剧和教她学汉语的趣事；3 为自己在英语学习上的进步向Sally表示感谢。注意：1 字数100左右 2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数,Dear Sally,How is everything with you now?Im sure you are back safe with your family again._ Yours,Li Hua,【参考范文】Dear Sally,How is everything with you now?Im sure you are back safe with your
10、family again.How I wish I had gone to the airport to see you off last Friday,but I had to represent our school at an English speech contest.Do you still remember last Christmas when we acted out an English play together,which attracted a large audience?To tell you the truth,when you began to learn C
11、hinese from us,you pronunciation sounded amusing so that we couldnt help laughing at times.,Chinese,in your opinion,is difficult to learn.Thanks to your help,I won the first prize in the English speech contest.I really owe my progress in English to you.Keep in touch!Yours,Li Hua,【亮点展示】本篇文章完成了写作任务，句式表达丰富，过渡自然得当。从邮件的语言来看，较多的运用了情感性的语言、结构和语句，符合文体要求，读起来情真意切。从情感性用语的角度看，第一句采用了wish后加宾语从句用虚拟语气的方法，表达了作者深深地遗憾之情。第二句使用了一般疑问句，给人以亲切感；用to tell you the truth表达了作者的真实想法；amusing以及couldnt help laughing也起到了表情达意的作用。第三段thanks to,oweto的运用充分表露了作者的感激之情。,
