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1、应试必备:英语四级六级作文点睛(一),改词扩句不改变原句的意思，仅通过词汇、语法手段使句子看起来更高级、地道。下面请看例子：例1Others think that the utilization of waste products will be eliminated sooner or later with the emergence of hi-te.However,I did not consider that factor carefully.Because I hold the view that waste materials can be made good use of to
2、help reduce the living cost.原句：I did not consider that factor carefully.改句：I fail to take that factor into careful consideration.【解析】在这个简单句中，主要做了两个改变，一是把did not改成fail to,同样的意思，可是词汇应用的灵活度却大大提高。二是把considercarefully改成了take sth into careful consideration，在考场作文中，词组的运用是个亮点，而且英语中静态居多（名词用的多），汉语中动态居多（动词用的多），
3、在此把动词consider变成名词consideration，顿时使英文更加地道。,例2原句：You are enthusiastic and enterprising.And you are one of the most talented and diligent in our department.You have already won 2 awards for good academic results.改句：You,enthusiastic and enterprising,are one of the most talented and diligent in our depar
4、tment,already winning 2 awards for outstanding academic results.【解析】我们可以看到例句中有3个简单句，咋看上去给人一种啰嗦、累赘的感觉。但细看之下，不难发现3个句子的主语全部是you，因此我们就该联想到同位语、插入语的应用。从改句中，我们可以发现谓语从原来的3个变成了1个，顿时使句子显得高级，精简很多。其次，还有一个改动之处为good，这个词是常用词，口语中用的更频繁些，我们可以想一些同义词例如excellent，outstanding等等。,例3原句：In order to live a good life,it is bec
5、oming more and more important for people to learn knowledge well.Because in this modern world,knowledge is everything.改句：In order to live a happy(wonderful)life,it is becoming increasingly important for people to acquire knowledge well,for the reason that knowledge is everything in this modern world
6、.【解析】首先我们看到原句中出现了more and more，在四六级作文中，它可算是常客，对阅卷老师而言，不具任何吸引力，而且有落入俗套的危险哦，所以在我们把它用一个简单的副词来替代，副词修饰形容词，相信会令人感觉眼前一亮。其次，我们还要注意一个搭配问题，原句中的learn knowledge是明显的中式英语，很多同学会误用，正确的搭配应该是acquire knowledge。,英语四级六级作文训练营改词扩句,名词和连词的妙用。原句：It is very important for the public to acquire knowledge on Sinology（汉学）.Because
7、 it stands for Chinese civilization with more than 5000 years and promoting Sinology can help to build a harmonious society.改句：It is of vital significance for the public to acquire knowledge on Sinology.For one thing,it is the essence of Chinese civilization with more than 5000 years.For another,the
8、 promotion of Sinology can contribute to a harmonious society.【解析】咋看原句，基本上没什么可以改的地方，但是仔细观察，我们不难发现原句中的“very important”是英语四六级作文中常用的词，所以我们需要想办法使其看起来不那么普通，我想的办法就是把它转换成“of+名词”的短语，这个名词可以是“importance”，也可以是其同义词“significance”。然后，我们又发现because后面跟的是两个原因，为了让结构更清晰，我们可以用for one thing，for another来分开它们，这样更有层次。最后，以前某
9、一期提过，就是英语喜欢用名词，汉语喜欢用动词，所以我们可以把“promoting”改成“promotion”，“stands for”转换成“essence”，再把“help to”提升一下，改成“contribute to”，是不是感觉句子质量一下子就提高了不少呢？下面大家来试试吧！,It is very beneficial to everyone to learn knowledge.KEY:It is of great benefit to everyone to acquire knowledge.,It is a not-uncommon social phenomenon tha
10、t the university rankings are especially prevalent in our country.For example,universities are measured by scale,academic achievements or the number of papers published in famous magazines.As to this issue,opinions vary from person to person.Some people hold that university ranking dramatically prom
11、otes the development of university in various fields.But others maintain that university ranking also leads to some undesirable consequences such as academic fraud even to deceive people.As far as I am concerned,every coin has two sides.On one hand,University ranking does encourage the development a
12、nd growth of colleges.Such growth the grand libraries,splendid stadiums and fruitful academic achievements,has caught the attention of the world.Were impressed by these signs of our educations tour to the 21st century.On the other hand,we have to pay attention to an unexpected phenomenon that some p
13、eople have ignored the objectivity of university ranking.Take South University of Science and Technology of China for an example,this university occupies the second position in some university rankings.In those rankings,it is superior to Peking University and Tsinghua university.In a word,we should
14、inspire the advantages of university and abandon its disadvantages.,作文范文及解析My View on University RankingIn recent years,all kinds of University Ranking Lists can be found on some educational websites,or newspapers.The ranking standards also vary.These lists have great influence on students.They are
15、even becoming the only scale to evaluate the colleges and universities.People hold different views toward this phenomenon.Some believe that these lists help the students a lot,especially for those who will choose their university.While some other protest vigorously.In their points,the list is really
16、 ridiculous and harmful.In my view,the university ranking may have its own reference values,but its disadvantages overweigh its values.For those university-students-to-be,they are supposed to choose the school according to his or her own situation,but not the so-called Ranking List.Whats more,how ab
17、out the university students?How do they feel about themselves when they see the ranking?The list may become some intangible shackles for them if their own school ranks poorly.In a nutshell,there is no easy method to rank these universities,but the Ranking,only helps students ignore the essentials,na
18、mely,their ninety-nine percent perspiration.,此次六级作文的自由度很大，看似给出了提纲，实际上具体的观点全靠个人发挥。第一段需要点明大学排名这个现象，第二段需要铺陈不同人的观点，第三段要陈述自己的观点。大学排名这个题目，实际上涉及到了对了大学的理解，对于大学排名标准的理解，以及对于大学排名的目的的理解。而这件事更加离不开中国具体的国情，新中国50年代人至今受教育的情况，90后择校的情况，目前大学的情况，考生发挥的空间可以纵横数十年的教育史，并且可以深入探讨教育的本质。当然，对于大多数考生来说，凑满150个字万岁！那么，模板又可以派上用场了。,模板一1
19、.Different people have different views on2.Some people perfer,.3.Others tend to,.4.As to me,I agree with/to(1)开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。(2)表明一部分人的看法。(3)另一部分的看法。(4)作者的看法,第一节：六级作文试题分析一.六级作文试题分类六级作文从试题角度可以分为现象解释型、对比选择型、问题解决型、观点论证型与应用文五种类型。(一)现象解释型此类作文在六级考试作文中最为常见。命题主要要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释并加以评论，其基本结构是：首先说明现状;其次阐述
20、这种现状产生或存在的原因;最后做出分析，提出建议或总结观点。例如：1.现象解释六级真题(2003年6月),(二)对比选择型此类作文同样是六级考试中常见的类型，它的标志十分明显。作文题目要求较明确，富有针对性，即直接要求考试比较两种观点或做法，进而表明自己对问题或事务的态度或观点，也就是做出选择。例如：(2000年6月，1999年6月)(三)问题解决型此类作文要求考生从提示性文字或图表、图画入手，解释提示性文字、图表、图画反映出的问题，提出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性;然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施;最后一段要求考生表明自己的态度、做法等。如2000年1月真题。,(四)观
21、点论证型此类作文往往要求考生根据题目给出论点，按照提纲的结构要求对其下论证，然后表明自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实、讲道理的方式剖析事物，论述事理，发表意见，确立或否认某一主张。如：1999年1月六级真题。(五)应用文应用文中的信函，也是六级作文设计的试题之一。在这类题型中，考生会读到一个特定的场景，试题要求考生按照这个场景给相关人士写一封短信，并在信中明确表达自己写信的原因、动机、目的和愿望等。文章所设及的内容多种多样，但大部分都与日常生活比较贴近。书信的类型可能变化万千，如邀请信、申请信、感谢信、道歉信等，但是万变不离其宗，只要掌握了英语书信的格式，并应用恰当的句式和语句，就一定能够写出好的
22、文章来。,二.解决方案1.建议考生分解作文观点，扩充内容。2.建议考生在写作时只选择自己能够驾奴的句式和词语。3.建议考生在文章中长短句搭配使用，用短句表达观点，长句推理分析。4.建议考生选用作文模板，限定文章逻辑结构。5.建议考生采用固定的句式，限定文章的字数。,第二节：写作技巧及作文结构安排一.写作技巧。1.根据文章大意判断作文题型。2.各种题型的写作方法。现象解释型：基本方法为：描述现象分析原因对现象做出预测或如何促进(限制)这种现象的进一步发展。对比选择型：基本方法为：阐述一种观点或态度并表明这种观点或态度正确的理由;阐述第二种(相对或相反的)观点或态度并说明这种观点或态度正确的理由;
23、表明个人支持或反对以上观点或态度，并说明原因。问题解决型：基本方法为：提出问题分析问题解决问题。观点论证型：基本方法为：分析主题得出结论举例论证得出结论(证明观点的正确性)。应用文基本方法为：分析所给情景选择写作方法,3.三段式作文的结构安排题型 第一段 第二段 第三段现象解释型 描述现象 说明现象产生的原因 表明个人态度或阐述个人做法对比选择型 表明一方或双方由的观点及理 表明另一方的观点及理由，指出双方观点不足之处及理由 表明个人态度或阐述个人做法问题解决型 提出问题 分析问题，给出解决方案 表明个人态度或阐述个人做法观点论证型 提出论点 例证论点 得出结论或表明个人看法或做法应用文 描述
24、事实 阐述原因 表明观点或提出建议,第三节：十二句作文法写作模板一.现象解释型写作模板现象解释型模板一Topic sentencehas become a common part of peoples life.Andhas always aroused the greatest concern.what impresses us most is.The reasonsare varied.信息提示1.空格内用概括性的词语填出最近出现的总体现象。2.空格内填题目要去讨论的具体现象3.现象的具体表现4.过度句，填现象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。,5.Among the vari
25、ous reasons,plays an important role.6.That is to say,7.What is more,8.For example,5原因之一。6.具体说明原因一。7原因二。8 举例说明原因二,9When talking about，10On the one hand11On the other hand,12In brief,9.空格一填作者要讨论的现象，空格二填作者的看法。10.支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面。11.理由二或第二个方面。12.总结。,现象解释型模板三1.has been brought into focus.2.Nowdays,.3.
26、In addition,.4.Many reasons contribute to(1)空格内填最近出现的总体现象(2).空格内填现象的具体表现一。(3).现象的具体表现二(4).过度句到分析原因。,5.Generally speaking,.6.First of all,7.More over,8.Therefore,5承上启下开始列举原因6.原因之一。7 原因二。8 对原因一二进行总结。,9.As far as I am concerned,，10.As we known,11.Furthermore,12.In a word,9.空格内填作者对现象的看法。10.支持看法的理由一。11.理
27、由二。12.总结。,对比选择型作文模板模板一1.Different people have different views on2.Some people prefer,.3.Others tend to,.4.As to me,I agree with/to(1)开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。(2)表明一部分人的看法。(3)另一部分的看法。(4)作者的看法。5.Of course,.6.For example,7.But,8.The following reasons can account for my preference(1)承认自己不赞同的看法有一定的合理性。(2)举例
28、说明支持第五句。(3)转折指出这种观点的不足。(4)启下句过度到下段具体阐述自己所支持的观点的理由。,9.The main reason is.10.A good example to illustrate is 11.For another,12.From the foregoing,9.支持观点的理由一。10.举例说明理由一。11.理由二。12.总结全文，从长远看来。,模板二(1999年6月真题)1.There is no complete agreement among people as to 2.Some people consider,.3.However,others think
29、,.4.Some people may say 5.They hold this opinion because.6.However,others believe,7.They argue that,8.Personally,I am in favor of the9.Firstly,.10.Secondly,11.Most important of all 12.Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration,we/I may reasonably conclude that,(1)开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。(2)表明一部
30、分人的看法。(3)另一部分的看法。(4)观点一的理由。(5)深入阐述观点一的理由。(6)观点二的理由。(7)深入阐述观点二的理由。(8)我的看法。(9)个人看法依据一。(10)个人看法依据二。(11)个人看法依据三。(12)总结全文。,模板三1.When asked about,different people will offer different opinions.2.Some people take it for granted that.3.In their opinion,.4.Besides 5.However,others hold.6.They maintain7.And8.
31、Weighing up these arguments,I am for9.For one thing.10.For another,11.For instance,12.Therefore,as stated above,(1)开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。(2)提出观点一。(3)观点一的理由一。(4)观点一的理由二。(5)提出观点二。(6)观点二的理由一。(7)观点二的理由二。(8)我的观点。(9)个人观点理由一。(10)个人观点理由二。(11)举例说明。(12)综上所述再次强调自己的观点。,Is a test of spoken necessary?A test of sp
32、oken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test(CET).When talking about it,different people will offer different opinions.Some people take it for granted that college students should take a test of spoken English.In their opinion,it is good chance for them to test
33、their spoken English.Besides,it also make them know the importance of the spoken English.However,others hold that a test of spoken English is unnecessary in the university and colleges.They maintain that college students practice of spoken English is not for testing but for daily use.And they think
34、it is hard to manage such a subjective test.Weighing up these two arguments,I am for the first point of view.For one thing,spoken English is very important.For another,a test of spoken English can guide and supervise students to make conversation practice.For instance,when choosing books and other m
35、aterials,students can pick them according to the bands of the test they want to take.Therefore,as stated above,the first point of view can hold water.,问题解决型作文模板模板一1.With the development/improvement of,.2.It is necessary that.3.On the one hand,.4.On the other hand,5.Therefore,how to is worth paying a
36、ttention.6.Firstly7.Secondly8.For example,9.Thirdly,.10.In other words,11.In fact,ways to are countless.12.Its time that,(1)空格一处铺垫，空格二处填写某一问题。(2)关注解决现象引出的问题很必要。(3)解决问题很必要的理由一。(4)解决问题很必要的理由二。(5)承上启下，填要解决的问题。(6)解决办法一。(7)解决办法二。(8)举例解释解决办法二。(9)解决办法三。(10)阐明解决办法三。(11)指出解决问题的办法多种多样。(12)强调解决问题时不可待。,Reduce W
37、aste on CampusWith the improvement of living standard,waste on campus is increasingly serious.It is necessary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus.On the one hand,our waste has already caused a great loss of precious resources,such as water and electricity.On the other hand,our wa
38、ste adds our parents as well as our society a burden.Therefore,how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention.Firstly,we should turn off the light when we leave our dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as possible.Secondly,we should stop wasting water when we bath,or was
39、h clothes and dishes.For example,we should use a basin when we clean faces.Thirdly,we should be economical.In other words,when go shopping,we should buy only what we really need.In fact,the ways to reduce waste on campus are countless.Its time that we cultivate the habit of thrift in every possible
40、way.,模板二1.There has been a discussion recently about.2.It is obvious that.3.Additionally,.4.So it is high time,5.First of all,6.The reason is7.Secondly8.That is to say,9.Thirdly,.10.In fact,more than three ways can be adopted,11.As for me,12.All in all,1提出现存的问题。2解决问题很必要的理由一3解决问题很必要的理由二。4承上启下，说明解决问题的
41、必要性。5解决办法一6解决办法一的理由.。7解决办法二。8.阐明解决办法二。9.解决办法三。10.指出解决问题的办法多种多样。11.小结解决问题的根本途径。12.总结全文。,模板三(2001年1月)1.It is certain that.2.For one reason,.3.For another,.4.However,some still puzzle on how to.5.Here come some suggestions.6.To begin with,7.Secondly8.For instance,9.Thirdly,.10.That is because11.The sol
42、utionvary according to different situations.12.Therefore,1提出问题及解决的必要性。2解决问题很必要的理由一3解决问题很必要的理由二。4转折到如何解决问题。5呈上指出解决问题的方法很多。6解决办法一.。7解决办法二。8.阐明解决办法二。9.解决办法三。10.其理由。11.解决问题的办法随具体情况不同而变化根本途径。12.总结全文，要灵活地依据具体情况处理问题。,观点论证型作文模板模板一1.It is true that.2.However,.3.I think.4.can be listed as follow.5.First of al
43、l,6.Secondly 7.For example8.Thirdly,9.A case in point is.10.It goes without saying that11.There is no doubt that 12.In conclusion,1提出普遍存在地观点。2谈不同地观点。3自己地观点，即文章地论点4过度句，转折到观点地论证，由题目选择具体的词。5论证理由一6论证理由二。7举例具体说明理由二。8.论证理由三。9.举例说明理由三。10.提出执行该观点时应注意的事项。11.得出结论。12.总结全文。,It Pays to Be HonestIt is true that m
44、ost of us value honesty highly.However,nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating,overcharging,fake commodities,etc.I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only the whole society.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly,only honest people can be truly resp
45、ected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time.Secondly,honesty,which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people,can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example,consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are honest,and on the contrary dealers
46、 can win more customers.Thirdly,honesty can make our society.A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the same and the individual.There is no doubt that
47、we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion,laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.,模板二1.Some people believe that.2.The truth is deep and profound.3.As we know,.4.In addition,.5.There are numerous examples 6.A case in point is7.There is close to suggest8.For a
48、nother example9.Moreover,.10.All mentioned above tell us11.But one thing we have to notice is that 12.In a word,1直接提出本文的观点。2进一步强度观点的正确性。3论证理由一4论证理由二5承上启下。6举例一具体论证。7总结例一。8.举例二具体论证。9.举例三具体论证。10.总结上下，重申论点。11.指出该论点应注意什么。12.总结全文。,It Pays to Be HonestSome people believe that many dishonesties,such as chea
49、ting,overcharging,fake commodities,etc.ruin our normal life,and they maintain that being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to oneself.The truth is deep and profound.As we know,if one is honest,other people will deeply respect him or her,and are willing to make friends with him or her.
50、In addition,being honest can make peoples life easier and more harmonious.There are numerous examples supporting the argument.A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.This is close to suggest that honesty can make our
