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1、四级写作,-提纲式命题作文,Sample,In modern world,the economy is developing fast and the population is also growing very fast.But do you know our earths healthy become terrible now?As a youth of the 21st century,what should I do to protect our earth?Rapidly,increasing,is becoming,Directions:In this section,you a
2、re asked to write a composition entitled Should people own cars or not?Your composition should be based on the outline given below.Your composition should be at least 120 words.Outline:1、有人赞成个人买车。2、也有人持相反观点。3、你的看法。Should People Own Cars or Not?,Should People own Cars or not?,Now having a car is more
3、 and more popular,so many familys want to buy a car.They think its useful.Some youngs think its cool,and many people think its convenent when they have a private car.They dont need to wait the crowded bus/so they can go to work on time.Its save the time.And they also can drive the car go wherever th
4、ey want to.A family can have a travel togethter.Its comfortable.In a word,they can improve the quality of their life with a car.Especially the increasing of private car can promote the economic.It can lead the development of many industries.Its good for our countrys developing.,四级作文评分原则及标准,14分 漂漂亮亮：
5、切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，连贯性好，基本上语言无误。11分清清楚楚：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。8分马马虎虎：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。5分糊里糊涂：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语法错误。2分一塌糊涂：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严重错误。,Praise,An Important Gift Some people think that critism can change ones view of life.However,many people argu
6、e that praise is more important.In my opinion,praise is more profitable than critism.Praise is like fresh air,without it,our life will become uninteresting and inhappy.Giving praise does not cost the giver a lot,but,the receiver can learn much.There are many people who succeed at last with a praise,
7、Take myself for example.Though it happened a long time ago,I remember it clearly.It was a sports meeting and I attend it.At first,I was very confident and thought I was the best of them,so I had no training.The truth was,during the race,many students left me behind.Then I want to give up and was fru
8、strated.Fortunately,my PE teacher came and patted on my back:”As long as you stick to continue,success will belong to you.I believe you,come on!”He said with a smile.You know,I improved dramatically and won the prize.So,praise is an important gift.,写作对策,内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点作文结构层次是否清晰语言表达是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻辑错
9、误是否能恰当的使用过渡性词语作文字数是否达到要求卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮,写作体裁,议论文说明文记叙文,议论文开头常用句式,Recently,the problem of has aroused peoples concern.has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.Nowadays,has become a problem we have to
10、 face.It is commonly believed that/It is a common belief that Many people insist thatWith the development of science and technology,more and more people believe that A lot of people seem to think that,议论文结尾常用句式,Taking all these factors into consideration,we finally come to the conclusion thatTaking
11、into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion thatHence/Therefore,wed better arrive at the conclusion thatThere is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.All in all,we cannot live withoutBut at the same time,we must try to find out new ways to cope wi
12、th the problems that would arise.,写作类型,提问子类观点类对立观点观点类事物性质利弊子类批驳类办法类原因类,提问子类,Should College Marriage be permitted?1 关于是否允许大学生结婚的讨论在校园里兴起2 我对这一现象的看法,A national debate has sprung up on whether college marriage should be permitted.Many people strongly oppose the permission of college marriage.They hold
13、that the chief task for college students is to study,and marriage will distract their attention and occupy a lot of time.Moreover,students are not economically independent,so marriage will cause a lot of problems such as future job hunting and housing.In a word,they believe marriage will largely hin
14、der both present study and future work.,From my perspective,I think college marriage should be permitted but be practiced with extreme care.For one thing,the right of college students should be respected,as they are adults.For another,the restriction on the age of students was done away with in 2001
15、,and many elder students attend universities.Last but not the least,the time in college is so precious that every student will think twice before they get married.Undoubtedly,few students will ever get married after college marriage is permitted,but the authority should grant them the right.,观点类对立观点
16、,My View on Opportunity1 有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。2 我的看法3 结论,My View on Opportunity,When it comes to opportunity,peoples opinions differ.Some people think that there are few opportunities in the world,while others argue that everybody will have some kind of opportunity along his life route.,As f
17、ar as I am concerned,I agree with the latter opinion.For one thing,I firmly believe opportunities are everywhere around us.No person will be unlucky enough to have no opportunities all the time,because every dog has his day”.For another,since opportunities are transient,we have to make good preparat
18、ions and improve ourselves.Just think of Newton,who discovered the Law of Gravitation when many people had watched an apple falling ahead of them.,From what has been discussed above,we may reasonably draw the conclusion that there are quite a few opportunities around us.Only if we get prepared can w
19、e seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by,just as an old saying goes,opportunities are only for the prepared minds”.,观点类事物性质,My View on Double BA Degree1 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见2 我对这一现象的看法,My View on Double BA Degree,Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two
20、 majors at the same time.In this way,they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.,Although it may bring unfavorable consequences,we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole.To begin with,most students will become more hardwork
21、ing and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily.Moreover,with two degrees at hand after graduation,they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition.In the third place,as for todays university students,tuition and fees are becoming more and more expe
22、nsive.If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards,it will not be a big problem.,Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend,we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding.This system not only compels students to work hard,
23、but also prepares them for the coming competition.,认为，主张,argue,maintain,hold,believe,考虑,takeinto consideration,consider,think over,reflect on,认为，思考，考虑,think,下结论，断定,come to the conclusion,arrive at the conclusion,conclude,decide,assert,断定,judge,获得,acquire,obtain,attain,reap,赢得，取得,earn,gain,得到,get,支持，
24、赞成,approve of,in favor of,stand by ones side,agree with,提倡,advocate,recommend,支持,support,利弊子类,The Golden Week1 黄金周给大学生带来的好处2 黄金周给大学生带来的弊端3 我应当怎样过好黄金周,The Golden Week,The golden weekNational Day holidayhas brought a lot of benefits to college students ever since the beginning.First,it gives students
25、time to take a rest after months of hard work.Second,they can conduct social activities to combine book knowledge with practice.Third,they can also use this precious week to make progress in study or carry out specialized research.,Though it does good to college students in many ways,the golden week
26、 can never to be said to bring no problems.For one thing,many students eat and sleep too much during the vacation,which are harmful to their health.For another,quite a few students spend too much time playing video games or going sightseeing.How can they make progress in their study if they do not c
27、herish time at all?,In order to make good use of the golden week,I form the habit of making a concrete plan before it comes.On the one hand,I always set aside enough time for reviewing lessons and reading relevant literature.On the other hand,I usually go to watch a movie and listen to a concert at
28、the Grand Opera.By carefully planning my time,I am confident to spend a meaningful golden week.,反对,oppose,object to,抵制,resist,反对,say no to,意义深远的,far-reaching,profound,significant,重要的,important,充分运用,optimize,make best/full use of,使用,employ,utilize,使用,use,好处，优点,advantage,merit,benefit,坏处，缺点,disadvanta
29、ge,defect,flaw,drawback,deficiency,好处,good side,重要的，有 决定性的,vital,crucial,critical,decisive,应用,apply,坏处,bad side,批驳类,My View on Teenagers Studying Abroad1 现在有很多青少年出国留学2 有些人认为这种做法是有益的3 我认为这种观点是不对的,My View on Teenagers Studying Abroad,Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad
30、,there are more and more teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools.Many people,especially the parents,think it will certainly do good to their children because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance.Moreover,the quality of overseas education is oft
31、en higher,thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.,After careful consideration,I have to say the above view is more than biased.On the one hand,early independent life is not necessarily good,if the child cannot receive proper guida
32、nce and tender care from both teachers and parents.On the other hand,the educational quality is also a question too many foreign schools aim at earning money.When the children come back,who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?,We can see clearly that although teenagers s
33、tudying abroad may bring favorable results,there are still a lot to worry about.It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.,把看做，当做,regard as,consider as,look onas,treatas,viewas,把看做，当做,seeas,全面的，彻底的,utter,thorough,完全的,complete,起作用,解释,难以置信的，惊人的,play a ro
34、le,perform,function,serve,play a part,解释,explain,account for,illustrate,clarify,fantastic,incredible,unbelievable,exceptional,extraordinary,marvelous,amazing,astonishing,起作用,work,惊人的，极好的,great,surprising,办法类(个人问题),How to Succeed in a Job Interview 1 面试在求职过程中的作用2 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是,How
35、 to Succeed in a Job Interview,A job interview is vital to the job-hunting process in that if you are successful in it,you stand a good chance of final obtaining the ideal job.Then how can we succeed in job interview?,In the first place,you should dress and behave properly in order to leave a good f
36、irst impression on the interviewer.In the second place,when it comes to talking,you should speak of your expertise and special abilities clearly and honestly.Whats more,self-confidence is also an important factor,telling the interviewer that you will face the challenge whenever you encounter difficu
37、lties.,You will succeed in a job interview as long as you put the above principles into practice.As a result,you will probably obtain the job you have been dreaming of.,勤奋的，勤勉的,diligent,industrious,勤奋的,hardworking,认真的，谨慎的,conscientious,cautious,认真的,careful,serious,冷静的，清醒地,sober,reasonable,sensible,r
38、ational,聪明的,bright,intelligent,wise,brilliant,平静的,calm,适应,be adapted to,be accustomed to,be adjusted to,集中精力于,focus on,center on,concentrate on,聪明的,clever,适应,be used to,专心于,set ones mind on,注意,Pay ones attention to,原因类,Harmfulness of Fake Commodities1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象?2.举例说
39、明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。,Nowadays a lot of fake commodities flood into the market and do great harm to the consumers and the whole society.Why are there so many fake commodities?The first reason,in my mind,is that some people dream of earning a large sum of money easily and quickly.Furthermore,the gene
40、ral social atmosphere is somewhat unhealthy-many people attach great importance to money instead of honesty.Last but not least,some government officials are not doing their jobs.,Harmfulness of Fake Commodities,The harmfulness of fake commodities has become more than obvious at the moment.First of a
41、ll,The consumers are the direct victims,they spend money buying unqualified and even useless products.In the second place,the authentic producers also suffer great loss.Thirdly,fake commodities may even be dangerous sometimes,such as fake food and medicine,which are a threat to peoples health.Conseq
42、uently,it is high time that we made great efforts to put an end to fake commodities.,如何写好英语说明文？,审题（what,to whom,how,etc.）开好头写好主题句注意行文的统一性和连贯性注意说明方法的选择（eg.:举例法、过程分析法、分类法、因果分析法、比较法、细节法，etc.）注意说明顺序（eg.:空间顺序、时间顺序、逻辑顺序、认识顺序，etc.）结尾（重述主题而非重复主题；简短自然，避免介入新的话题）,常用句式和常用表达,列举：for one thing,for another,finally,
43、besides,moreover,oneanother,still another,first,second,then,also,to begin with,first of all,in the first place,last,next,above all,last but not the least,first and most important举例：for example,for instance,one example is,besides,moreover,furthermore,in addition,a case in point,that is,incidentally,a
44、s an illustration,such as,in fact,in general,in particular,to illustrate,namely定义：refer to,call,mean,比较a.相似的比较：likewise,in comparison,similarly,in the same mannerb.相反的比较：on the other hand,conversely,on the contrary,whereas,instead,in contrast,nevertheless,compared with表示时间：later,next,then,finally,at
45、 last,eventually,meanwhile,from now on,at the same time,for the time being,in the end,immediately,in the meanwhile/meantime,recently,soon,now and then,during,nowadays,since,lately,as soon as,afterwards,temporarily,earlier,after a while,now,表示方位和顺序：before,behind,below,beneath,between,here,there,where
46、,beyond,nearby,under,above,over,on the right(left),in(the)front of,at the back of,in the middle of,at the bottom of,opposite to,next to表示概要和结论：in a word,in short,in brief,to sum up,on the whole,by and large,all in all,so far,therefore,thus,in summary,in conclusion,to conclude,to summarize,to end wit
47、h,Fast Food Restaurant,1.快餐馆简介2.去快餐馆的好处3.快餐馆的发展趋势,Fast Food Restaurant,If you are too busy or too tired to cook,please go to the fast food restaurant where various kinds of ready-made food are served.Some serve fish or chicken,some serve sandwiches or salad,and some also serve drinks,coffee,and so o
48、n.,Fast food restaurants are very convenient.You just go there,order your food,wait only for a few minutes,then when the food is ready,you carry it to your table yourselves.you can either eat it in the restaurant or take the food out in a plastic container and eat it at home,in your office,in a park
49、,or anywhere you like.,Nowadays,fast food restaurants are getting more and more popular in China because of their convenience and low price.They save peoples time and energy as well.This is very important for many people,especially those who are too busy or too tired to cook.,题型概述,记叙文的写作要注意交代清楚六大要素，
50、即时间(time)、地点(place)、人物(character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果(effect)。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式：正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，插叙很少用到。尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词 eg.:for one thingfor another、on the one handon the other(hand),etc.要多用四级词汇如有可能，引用一两句名言或是谚语,常用句式及表达,表示时间：after a short(long)time(period),afterwards,as soon as
