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1、,Lesson 14 Comments,Writing Task,Teacher s proper comments can motivate students to grow rapidly.At the end of each semester,a teacher should make comments on studentswork and behaviors at school,which will be sent with the Report Card to their parents.This is a way of communication between teachers
2、 and parents,who are all responsible for students.Good comments should be constructive,encouraging and developmental.To encourage all students to make progress,teachers must evaluate students from different aspects.Students can profit from these comments,so teachers should try their best to do it ca
3、refully.Imagine that1.you were an English teacher for Grade 3 of a primary school and also the head teacher of one class;it were the end of the semester.2.you were a teacher of Grade 6;it were approaching to graduation.,Lesson 14 Comments,Writing Task,You are asked to make Comments for the following
4、 students,which will be sent to their parents by them.,A boy is naughty and always makes troubles in class.His parents don t discipline him properly.But other students like playing with him.A girl is quiet and sensitive.She doesn t like communicating with other students.She likes reading and dancing
5、 very well.,Part I Knowledge Bank,Comments sum up students work and behaviors at school and give suggestions for them in the following school year.Writing comments requires educators to consider students learning levels,the ability of accepting criticisms and how to help them progress to higher leve
6、ls.Here are three steps that are necessary for you to write comments on the students.Step 1 Think about each student individually.This is important because each student deserves accurate comments.Try to recall those special things that happened to each student.Step 2 Write the comments for each stud
7、ent.Make sure you write the correct comments on each student.Praise his/her good behaviors and point out his/her shortcomings.It is better to provide him/her clear suggestions for the following semester.Step 3 Check and recheck the comments on each student to make sure you have correctly written the
8、m for each student.Do this 23 times.You should have the comments completed effectively.,Part II Editing&Revising by Yourself,Having finished the Writing Task,you have got your 1st draft.Please revise it according to Knowledge Bank(Part I)and Samples(Part III)to check whether you have missed some ess
9、ential information.If so,please add it.And then finish your 2nd draft.,Part III Samples,You are an open-minded and easy-going boy and have the ability to affect everyone.It impresses me deeply.I like your activeness in class.It will be better if you can discipline yourself more at school.I wish you
10、could get a good performance on all subjects in your study to realize your dream.,Sample 1,Part III Samples,You like reading,and it does really make you knowledgeable.Excellent!Try to be more energetic every day and communicate with your classmates.I hope you can take part in more activities to make
11、 yourself an easy-going girl.And then you will be a pretty and popular girl.,Sample 2,Part III Samples,You are an ambitious,optimistic and sunny boy and an excellent monitor.You can overcome any difficulty.I hope you can pay more attention to your handwriting.A beautiful handwriting will make you a
12、more popular boy.Wish you a glorious future.,Sample 3,Part IV Peer Editing&Rewriting,Exchange your 2nd draft with your partner to revise it again.Then get your final draft.Of course,it is your homework to be handed in.If your work is the best,you can receive a good mark and maybe a gift from your te
13、acher.,Part IV Peer Editing&Rewriting,To draw a small face or to write an encouraging word,such as Great,Excellent,Fantastic,can give students more encouragements.There are more effective comments.You can make comments on your studentsbehaviors and work in Chinese.It is very useful because most pare
14、nts don t understand what you say in English.,Tips,That s great!Please keep up the work.Success comes after hard work and constant efforts.Wonderful!I appreciate what you have done in this term.Insist on doing like this.I believe you will be successful in your study.You are an honest boy.You are goo
15、d at running and jumping.Wish you to be a superstar in the near future in the Olympics.,Part IV Peer Editing&Rewriting,热情大方的你，上课的神情是那么的专注，回答问题是那么的积极、大胆。但语文朗读还需加强。如果你能坚持发扬自己的优点，充分发挥自己的潜能，你将成为勇攀学业高峰的强者。老师期待你这一天的到来！老师惊喜地发现，以前的“小花猫”不见了，现在的你也开始讲卫生了。你瞧，即使很多同学对你有意见，但老师还是能在你身上发现优点，说明你也是个可爱的孩子。老师给你一个方法来改掉你身上的缺点，好吗？那就是：认真。认真完成作业，认真听讲，认真思考，按照老师的方法去做吧，一定会成功的！老师相信、支持你。你是一个天真活泼可爱的孩子，可是不知道为什么，每次你都会玩得忘了时间，上下课、放学后都一样。每当老师看到你那双充满了表现欲的眼睛，总不免替你感到惋惜。只要你上课认真听讲，回家认真完成作业，老师相信，你一定能够在老师面前表现出一个完美的你！加油吧！,Tips,
