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1、Continuation WritingMicro Skills,“To show”,细节描写(1),A Slogan,“Show Dont Tell”,必杀技,VS,To tell,To show,概括描写,细节描写,To show: to write with more sensory(感官的) details, allowing your readers to hear, see, taste, touch and smell the same things your characters are experiencing.,example1,To tell:,To show:,My m
2、other was hopeful.,My mothers eyes were sparkling with hope.,sparkle: v. reflect brightly 发光；闪光,写作建议： 心理描写要抓住眼睛， 嘴， 手， 脚等身体部位具体描述，会更加传神。,example2,To tell:,To show:,Mira is lovely and beautiful.,To Miravery gently,she walked near,with breeze kissing her hair,I saw a figure like a lily,lovely and fair
3、,with fragrance filling the air.,亮点：1.词汇： v; adj 及 adv. 运用,Life is like chocolate. You never know what youre gonna get-Forrest Gump,写作建议： 外貌描写要抓住人物主要特征如眼神；头发；走路姿态等详细刻画，运用动词，形容词和副词及高级句式，采用拟人，比喻，夸张等修辞，会更加立体。,2.语言结构：with+ n.+-ing,3.修辞运用：personification(拟人)比喻（Simile明喻和Metaphor 暗喻）,example3,To tell:,To s
4、how:,It was raining hard.,Thunders roaring and icy biting rain violently beating against the windows, I could barely hear any voice.Christopher was nowhere to be found.,roar: v/n. 咆哮；轰隆 the roar of the traffic,biting: a. 刺骨的the biting wind,高级写作句式(2)advanced sentence pattens,To tell:,To show:,He felt
5、 very tired,Tom,fall asleep,have a deep sleep,sleep soundly,in Mothers arms,head on the shoulder,with in a few second,sharpen your eyes,sharpen your eyes,Tom _(get) tired, _(lie) in Mothers arms and_(fall) asleep.,got,lie v. 撒谎 lied; lied v. 躺着 lay; lain,lay,fall- fell- fallen,fell,Tom 感到很累（exhauste
6、d）, 就在妈妈怀里睡着了，小脑袋靠在妈妈的肩膀上。,Tom felt exhausted and slept in Mothers arms,with his head on her shoulder.,1.写作高级句式：连续动做描写,写作建议： 动作描写可以表现人物性格特征， 反应其心理活动，推动故事情节。要选择特定的场景，抓住人物特定的动作反应，采用活跃具体动词搭配高级句式，细致描写更具画面感。,sharpen your eyes,Tom felt sothat,Tom felt so exhausted that he lay in his mothers arms, sleeping
7、 soundly.,so exhausted did Tom feel that he lay in Mothers arms, sleeping soundly.,2.写作高级句式： so+adj./adv.+ be动词or 助动词+主语+that,To show:,3.写作高级句式：非谓语动词作状语“-ing/-ed/to do”,Feeling hungry and exhausted (感到又饿又累)，Tom lay in his mothers arms and fell asleep.,4.写作高级句式：双形容词作状语 safe and sound; cold and wet; d
8、epressed and worried ; delighted and shocked,Hungry and exhausted ，Tom threw himself into Mothers arms and fell into a deep sleep in a few seconds.,summary,1. 三连动（verb1+verb2+ and +verb3）2. 主句+ with 复合结构3. so +adj/adv.+倒装句4.非谓语动词ing/-ed/to do 做状语,“淅沥沥，淅沥沥”又是绵绵细雨的一天。雨就像一个顽皮的小孩子，他从白云里跳下来，跳在屋顶上，跳在大地上，跳在小河里。在教室里读书的我总是不自觉地朝窗外望去，我看到外面的雨真的“不老实”，倾盆大雨“哗哗哗”的声音，就像在开“摇滚音乐会”。,have a try,
