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1、writing,1. 审题（1-2mins)2. 构思提纲 (3-5mins，确定主题)3. 写文章 (20mins)4. 修改检查 (5mins),写作概述,Steps,Pre-writing :仔细阅读题干，确定写作主题Para.1: describe the picture 简要描述漫画（who, what, when,where ）开门见山TIPS: 1.写作的directions 部分虽然给出了大致的主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述，切忌抛开漫画内容直接议论！TIPS: 2. 漫画的内容一定要符合图片，切忌无中生有！,Para2：全文的核心段 give your opinion a
2、bout the phenomenon conveyed in the picture and interpret its meaning/message 揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。TIPS：可以从2-3个方面进行阐述，也可以将这部分分为两段。,Para3.：give your conclusion. (a) 提出建议，重申观点 主题句 (b) 对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。TIPS：主题句的复述不是简单地重复，通常需符合如果在段末，用强调词转换方式连接。与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。转换方式：词对应，同根，逆向
3、,实例一,看图作文的解题思路应用,1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）： 漫画信息 “focus on the topic about making a life plan and explain why it is important for young people to do”,确定写作主题：年轻人应该做好人生规划以及人生规划的重要性的原因,2. 作文提纲 （结构）,第一段：简要描写图画内容（who, what, when, where）:爷爷教导孙子：如果年老的时候写自传，你会看到自己去过哪里，（where you have been）如果年轻时候写，你就会知道你将去哪里(will see w
4、here you are going)。,The picture depicts a young man sitting in front of a computer and typing something with his grandfather standing behind. The caption below says, “When you write your autobiography in old age, youll see where you have been, but when you write your autobiography at a young age, y
5、oull see where youre going.” It reveals profoundly that young people should shape their own future and make their own life plans, which is cosistent with what I advocate.,第二段：解释图画深刻含义 （揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。,Firstly, planning your life helps you set up specific life goals and follow through on your goals.
6、 When you have specific goals, youre more likely to be self-motivated. Secondly, life planning helps you have a full understanding of your life deficiencies and make prompt adjustments. If you fail some of your life goals, you can re-examine your life plan and decide whether to make more efforts to
7、fulfill those goals or change some of your goals. Last but not least, you can meet many new opportunities after some of your life plans come true, because success breeds more success and opportunities bring in more opportunities.,第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）。,To sum up, it is quite essential for young
8、people especially the university students to make life plan early so as to face the challegings confidently after graduations. What we should do is to take actions immediately, including choosing core coures and interest-based minor courses and figuring out exact schedules for study or future career
9、. Only in this way, can our university time is rewarding in the long run.,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of taking precautions. You should
10、write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,实例二,看图作文的解题思路应用,1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）： 漫画 “express your views on the importance of taking precautions”,确定写作主题：To take some measures before something had happened.(未雨绸缪),2. 作文提纲 （结构）,The picture focuses on a person who is standing in front of the sea, wat
11、ching the tide rising. Above the picture, there is a thought-provoking sentence which tells us that we should take some measures before something had happened.,第一段：简要描写图画内容（who, what, when, where），并揭示图画深刻含义（揭示主题）。,第二段：针对图画所表达的观点（主题）进行举例论证 Life is not always full of happiness and fortune. Therefore,
12、we are supposed to be aware of the potential risk and danger. For example, when the economic downturn is around the corner, an employee with vision should analyze the current situation and either learn more to stabilize his position in his company or get ready to find a new job. It would be late if
13、he had been laid off with no other job opportunities available.,Writing Techniques: A General Point Supported by Examples Life is not always full of happiness and fortune. Therefore, we are supposed to be aware of the potential risk and danger. For example, when the economic downturn is around the c
14、orner, an employee with version should analyze the current situation and either learn more to stabilize his position in his company or get ready to find a new job. It would be late if he had been laid off with no other job opportunities available.,第三段：总结全文。 All in all, it is advisable for anyone to
15、make precautionary preparations for the unexpected difficulties or disasters in life in advance.,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You shouldYou are required to write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,comment on the
16、role of mobile phone in peoples communication.,The Role of Mobile Phone in Peoples Communication,The popularity of smartphones has exerted great influence on the way people communicate, so much so that an increasing number of individuals contend that face-to-face communication is being replaced by t
17、exts and images on the mobile phone.,There are more than one angle to consider this phenomenon. On one hand, it is pleasantly acknowledged that smartphones shorten the distance between families and friends. Even people from different sides of the globe can share pictures, feelings and thoughts throu
18、gh various types of apps on the phone, thus building a long-distance connection. On the other hand, as the picture warns us, too much smartphone addiction interferes with peoples real-life communication. Statistics show that over 70 percent of face-to-face communication consists of facial expression
19、s and body language, which is why people should stay away from mobile phones when they have the chance to actually talk and communicate with others.,In a word, mobile phones act as an appropriate platform where people can always stay in tough however long the distance is, but a wise man should know when to put down his phone.,
