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1、作文批改 from high school to collegeFrom High School to College When I was young in the high school, I couldnt help dreaming about my college life every now and then. Suffering from too much pressure from college entrance test, I always admired the relaxed life that college students have. In fact, the c

2、ollege life is busy but wonderful. Having studied in college for nearly two months, I still cant get used to the college life. There are so many differences between high school and college, for me, I still need more time to get used to it. First of all, I want to talk about the study. The most diffe

3、rent is the way we learn. During the past three years, we were taught by our teachers with serious education and great patience. If we get any questions, teachers would explain it to us again and again. Compared with high school teachers, college teachers are more easy to teach. Teachers wont pay mu

4、ch attention on your study, they just tell you how to study, what you should do ,then, study is your own business. Sounds study is not so complicated. In a world, you should learn to study on your own. The other point that I want to mention is the life. In high school, the most important part of our

5、 lives is study. We need to study over and over again. Since we are the college student now, not only study is important but also social activities are becoming more and more important. College provides us freedom and more spare time. Beyond study, we can join some school organizations to improve ou

6、r abilities and make our lives more colorful. Joining some interest groups is also a good way to learn more useful skills and make more friends. What is the most important is that you will be stronger and stronger during the process and enjoy the life as well. Besides these, there are still somethin

7、g same between my high school and my college. First of all, wherever I am, I still a student and the most important thing for me is to study. Secondly, I do everything for my dream and the dream is the same as before. I cant describe my fellings in limit words. But as far as I considered, although t

8、here are many differences between high school and college, I will try my best to do everything prefect. Sooner or later, I will let my dream come true. College is a place where can let me fly high. I love my college, I love my college life! From High School to College When I was young in high school

9、, I couldnt assist dreaming about my college life every now and then. Suffering from too much pressure from college entrance test, I always dreamed about the relaxed life that college students have. In reality, the college life is busy but wonderful. Having studied in college for nearly two months,

10、I still cant conform myself to the college life. There are so many differences between high school and college, for me, I still need more time to adapt to it. First of all, I intend to talk about the study. The most different is the way we take in. During the past three years, we were taught by our

11、teachers with serious education and great patience. If we get any questions, teachers used to interpret it to us again and again. Contrasted with high school teachers, college teachers are more easy to teach. Teachers wont pay much attention on your study, they just tell you how to study, what you s

12、hould do. Then, study is your own business. Sounds study is not so complicated. In a word, you should ingest to study on your own. The other point that I intend to mention is life. In high school, the most essential part of our lives is studying. We need to study over and over again. Since we are th

13、e college student now, not only study is essential but also social activities are becoming more and more crucial. College offers us freedom and more spare time. Beyond study, we can take part in some organizations that founded by the students to improve our capabilities and make our lives more color

14、ful. Joining some interest groups is also a good way to take in more useful skills and make more friends. What is the most essential is that you will be stronger and stronger during the process and enjoy the life as well. In addition to these, there are still lots of same things between my high scho

15、ol and my college. First of all, wherever I am, I still a student and the most crucial thing for me is to study. Secondly, I do everything for my dream and the dream is the same as before. I cant express my fellings in limit words. But as far as I considered, although there are many differences betw

16、een high school and college, I will try my best to do everything prefect. Sooner or later, I will let my dream come true. College is a place where can let me fly high. I love my college and I enjoy my college life! 1.1 When I was young in high school, I couldnt assist dreaming about my college life

17、every now and then. 学习提示 易混词汇: aid, assist, help 均有“帮助”之意。 aid: 正式用词，指帮助他人脱离危险或战胜困难，着重强者对急需帮助的弱者的帮助。 assist: 强调在提供帮助时，以受助者为主，所给的帮助起第二位或从属的作用。 help: 最普通用词，含义广泛。指一般性的或迫切需要的帮助，侧重积极地为他人提供物质、精神或其他方面的帮助。 好评 报错 1.2 Suffering from too much pressure from college entrance test, I always dreamed about the rela

18、xed life that college students have. 学习提示 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。 college: 多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。 university: 主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。 institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。 school: 指大学所属的学院或系。 academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。 好评 报错 1.3 In re

19、ality, the college life is busy but wonderful. 学习提示 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。 college: 多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。 university: 主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。 institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。 school: 指大学所属的学院或系。 academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。 好评 报错

20、 第2段 2.1 Having studied in college for nearly two months, I still cant conform myself to the college life. 学习提示 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。 college: 多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。 university: 主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。 institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑

21、学院等。 school: 指大学所属的学院或系。 academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。 好评 报错 2.2 There are so many differences between high school and college, for me, I still need more time to adapt to it. 学习提示 易混词汇: adapt, adjust, conform, accommodate, suit, fit 均有“使适合，适应”之意。 adapt: 指人或物在原有情况下作某些改变以适应新的环境或不同的条件，强调改变的目的和重要性。 adju

22、st: 与adapt含义很接近，但adjust所改变的幅度要小一些，侧重过程，主要用于调整角度、高度、光点等。 conform: 多指与某模式或规则相符，也引申指改变习惯等以适应新的环境。 accommodate: 书面用词，指以外部条件标准改变自己或某事以求得适应，着重改变或调节的有利。 suit: 指适合要求，从而使人满意愉快。 fit: 含义广，指人或物适合或适应某一目的或用途。 好评 报错 批改提示 注意difference和disparity，distinction区别。 名词difference和disparity均可表示“(两者间的)不同”，但difference 表示“不同”，

23、“相异”the state of being unlike，强调两者毫无相似之处；而disparity却表示“不平等”，“不一致”the state of being unequal，强调一者比另一者差。 好评 报错 第3段 3.1 First of all, I intend to talk about the study. 学习提示 易混词汇: intend, mean 均有“想要，打算”之意。 intend: 较正式用词，但常用，指对未来的行动做出打算，并力争实现。 mean: 口语多用，指怀有作某事的想法或希望得到某物，特别用于效果不好而动机良好的场合。 好评 报错 3.2 The m

24、ost different is the way we take in. 学习提示 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。详情点击 different: 普通用词，强调事物间的区别或本质的不同。有时侧重对比，不着重差别。 various: 通常强调种类的数目。 diverse: 语气较强，指性质完全不同，着重显著的区别。 好评 报错 3.3 During the past three years, we were taught by our teachers with serious education and great patience.

25、学习提示 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。 big: 常用词，使用广泛，较口语化。多指体积、重量或容量等方面的“大”，有时也用于描写抽象之物。 large: 普通用词，含义广，指体积、面积、容量、数量以及程度等方面的大，具体或抽象意义均可用。 great: 普通用词，可指具体东西的“大”，但更常指事物的重要，人的行为、品格的伟大等，带一定的感情色彩。 grand: 侧重指盛大、绝大，有气派。 好评 报错 3.4 If we get any questions, teachers used to interpret it to us again a

26、nd again. 学习提示 易混词汇: explain, interpret, illustrate, clarify, account 均有“说明”之意。 explain: 含义广，最普通用词，指把某事向原来不了解、不清楚的人解释明白、说清楚等。 interpret: 着重以特殊的知识、经验来解释难理解的事情。 illustrate: 多指用实例或插图、图表加以说明。 clarify: 指把已发生的事件。情况和现状说清楚。 account: 说明某事物如何符合自然法则或逻辑。 好评 报错 批改提示 get+宾语这种结构不能用于正式场合。如果这句话并没有出现在正式场合，请忽略此提醒。 Whe

27、n I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed. Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词，如become, receive, find, achieve,等等。 好评 报错 3.5 Contrasted with high school teachers, college teachers are more easy to teach. 学习提示 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之

28、意。 college: 多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。 university: 主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。 institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。 school: 指大学所属的学院或系。 academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。 好评 报错 批改提示 注意contrast和compare区别。 动词contrast和compare均可表示“比较”，但contrast表示“对比”，“对照”compare so that differences are made clear

29、，着重差异，对比的双方的类型、性质或不同，或相反，没有“比作”之义；而compare却表示“比较”examine things to show how much alike or different they are，着重异同、优劣，有时只比较相同点，如比较的双方属同一类型或同一性质，与介词to搭配， 表示“把比作”。 好评 报错 3.6 Teachers wont pay much attention on your study, they just tell you how to study, what you should do. 学习提示 易混词汇: learn, study 均含“学

30、习”之意。 learn: 常指一般性的学习，尤指初级阶段的学习，表示摹仿实践的过程；着重成果时，作“学会”解。 study: 着重指学习过程和高深的或周密的研究，尤指从书本上学习。 好评 报错 3.7 Then, study is your own business. 学习提示 易混词汇: affair, business, matter, concern, thing 均含“事情”之意。 affair: 含义较广，侧重指已发生或必须去做的任何事情或事务。复数形式多指重大或较复杂的事务。 business: 通常指较重要或较难而又必须承担的事情，也可指商事。 matter: 普通用词，着重指一

31、件考虑中的或需要处理的事。 concern: 往往强调与个人或团体利害有直接或重大关系的事。 thing: 用作“事情”解时，词义较笼统、含糊，多用于指不很具体的事。 好评 报错 3.8 Sounds study is not so complicated. 学习提示 易混词汇: complex, complicated, sophisticated, intricate 均含“复杂的”之意。 complex: 侧重内在关系的复杂，需通过仔细研究与了解才能掌握和运用。 complicated: 与complex的含义接近，但语气更强，着重极其复杂，很难分析、分辨或解释。 sophisticat

32、ed: 侧重指事物发展到或达到高级的程度所体现出的复杂。 intricate: 着重指错综复杂，令人迷惑理解。 好评 报错 3.9 In a word, you should ingest to study on your own. 批改提示 on ones own表示“独自地”。注意与of ones own的区别。 好评 报错 第4段 4.1 The other point that I intend to mention is life. 学习提示 易混词汇: intend, mean 均有“想要，打算”之意。 intend: 较正式用词，但常用，指对未来的行动做出打算，并力争实现。 me

33、an: 口语多用，指怀有作某事的想法或希望得到某物，特别用于效果不好而动机良好的场合。 好评 报错 4.2 In high school, the most essential part of our lives is studying. 学习提示 易混词汇: basic, essential, fundamental, radical, vital 均有“基本的，基础的”之意。 basic: 普通用词，指明确、具体的基础或起点。 essential: 语气比basic和fundamental强，强调必不可少，暗含某物如缺少某部分，则失去本质特征的意味。 fundamental: 书面用词，不

34、如basic使用广泛，侧重指作为基础、根本的抽象的事物。 radical: 着重指事物的根本或其来源。 vital: 正式用词，侧重指维持生命、活力必不可少的，或生死攸关的。 好评 报错 4.3 We need to study over and over again. 学习提示 易混词汇: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少，短少”之意。注意require和need的区别。 lack: 指完全短缺或数量不足。 need: 语气较重，指需要必不可少的东西，强调急需。 want: 侧重缺少某种必需之物，或个人渴望得到的东西。 require: 使用广泛，语气较轻。强调

35、急需时可与need换用，但有时暗示所需的人或物是完成某一任务必不可少的。 好评 报错 4.4 Since we are the college student now, not only study is essential but also social activities are becoming more and more crucial. 学习提示 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。 college: 多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。 university: 主要指综合

36、大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。 institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。 school: 指大学所属的学院或系。 academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。 好评 报错 批改提示 注意activities和activity的区别。 好评 报错 4.5 College offers us freedom and more spare time. 学习提示 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。 college:

37、多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。 university: 主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。 institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。 school: 指大学所属的学院或系。 academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。 好评 报错 4.6 Beyond study, we can take part in some organizations that founded by the students to improve our capabilities and make our l

38、ives more colorful. 低频警示 part in some organizations 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评 报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 improve.capability 在教材中出现过 146 次 SeeAlso: improve capacity72 好评 报错 学习提示 易混词汇: ability, capacity, capability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。 ability: 普通用词，指人先天的或学来的各种能力。 capacity

39、: 侧重指人的潜在能力，通常不指体力，多指才智，尤指接受与领悟能力。 capability: 多用于人，指胜任某项具体工作的能力，也指本身具有、尚未发挥的潜在能力。常与of或for连用。 genius: 语气最强，指天赋的高度才能与智力。 talent: 着重指人某方面具有可发展和倍养的突出天赋才能，但语意比genius弱。 competence: 正式用词，侧重指令人满意的业务能力与水平，达到胜任某项工作等的要求。 faculty: 指特殊的才能或智力。 gift: 着重个人的天赋的才能或在某方面的显著本领，常暗含不能用一般规律作解释的意味。 aptitude: 多指先天或后天习得的运用自如

40、的能力，常暗示接受能力强，能迅速掌握一种学术训练或艺术技巧。 好评 报错 批改提示 take part in表示“参加”。注意与join in的区别。详情点击 好评 报错 4.7 Joining some interest groups is also a good way to take in more useful skills and make more friends. 搭配统计 动名搭配 join.interest_group 在教材中出现过 4 次 SeeAlso: join interest12 好评 报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 take.skill 在教材中出现过 173 次 S

41、eeAlso: have skill2601,take acquisition23,take accomplishment13,take science11 好评 报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 make.friend 在教材中出现过 1965 次 SeeAlso: make acquaintance162,do friend70,make ally69,cause friend10 好评 报错 学习提示 易混词汇: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意。 friend: 一般用词，指某人喜爱并乐意与之相交往的人。 mate: 最普通用词，既可指好友、同事

42、，又可指合伙人，还可指配偶的一方。 acquaintance: 指彼此相识，但交往不甚密切，相互间没有深厚情感的人。 pal: 口语用词，指十分要好的朋友。 好评 报错 4.8 What is the most essential is that you will be stronger and stronger during the process and enjoy the life as well. 低频警示 stronger during the process 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评 报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 enjoy.life 在教材中出现过 1397 次 See

43、Also: love life399,savor life26,relish life26,enjoy living24,enjoy animation8 好评 报错 学习提示 易混词汇: basic, essential, fundamental, radical, vital 均有“基本的，基础的”之意。 basic: 普通用词，指明确、具体的基础或起点。 essential: 语气比basic和fundamental强，强调必不可少，暗含某物如缺少某部分，则失去本质特征的意味。 fundamental: 书面用词，不如basic使用广泛，侧重指作为基础、根本的抽象的事物。 radical

44、: 着重指事物的根本或其来源。 vital: 正式用词，侧重指维持生命、活力必不可少的，或生死攸关的。 好评 报错 批改提示 注意enjoy和appreciate的区别。 appreciate: 多用于文学方面，强调对事物有深入的理解能力，且能鉴赏。 enjoy: 普通用词，使用广泛，程度不及appreciate,多指从外界事物中得到喜悦与满足，领略到乐趣，享受意味强。 好评 报错 批改提示 注意the life/life的区别。 朗文解释： When life means the way of life that is connected with a certain situation,

45、group or occupation, it is usually used without the: I found city life too stressful.Life in New York is full of excitement. What do you think of married life? 好评 报错 第5段 5.1 In addition to these, there are still lots of same things between my high school and my college. 学习提示 易混词汇: college, universit

46、y, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。 college: 多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。 university: 主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。 institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。 school: 指大学所属的学院或系。 academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。 好评 报错 5.2 First of all, wherever I am, I still a student and the most crucial thing for me is to study. 搭配统计 动名搭配 still.student 在教材中出现过 21 次 SeeAlso: calm student5,calm_down student4 好评 报错 学习提示 易混词汇: pupil, student, learner, scholar 均含“学生”之意。 pupil: 特指中小学生，尤其是小学生。 student: 普通用词，可指中学生，但主要指高等学校或专科学校的学生。 learner: 通俗用词，指某一门学问上的初学