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1、高三英语图画作文指导,2009年江苏高考题,2010江苏高考题,2011年江苏高考题,你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么注意：1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。,范例：.下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。,Overview:,091011,guided writing,unguided writing,英语图画作文观点类,Focus of this class:,南通一模,你的短文应该包括以下内容：1简述照片内容，如情景
2、、人物、动作等等；2结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3举例说明你将选择什么样的志愿者活动并陈述原因。,下面这幅照片展现了志愿者活动的情景。请根据你对照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。,Volunteers make a difference!,观点类图画作文,Step 1.observe the picture to locate the topic and the theme,Pre-writing,Step 2.read the Chinese requirements to get the outline,Step1、observe（读图）to locate（定位）,1.图画的画面,2.图画的文字
3、,who,what,where,when,topic,theme,（caption 文字、字幕、说明）,WhoWherewhat,Volunteers make a difference!,topic:,theme:,two volunteers,a disabled man,on stairs,helping,volunteers,Mistake 1:wrong topic/theme,para.2/1 picture description,Step 2.read to organize(谋篇),你的短文应该包括以下内容：1简述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；2结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想
4、；3举例说明你将选择什么样的志愿者活动并陈述原因。,para.3 personal view,para.4 personal experience or action,Mistake 2:poor organization,The picture shows us a touching moment when two volunteers help a disabled man in a wheelchair This picture reminds me of the significance of volunteersI would be happy to be a volunteer,t
5、oo,para2 picture description,para3 personal view,para4 personal action,Interpersonal skills;A lifelong lesson,Lets practise!,下面这幅照片是老师给高中某班级作一次演讲，内容是中学生如何与人交往。根据你对这幅图片理解用英语写一篇短文。,你的短文应该包含以下内容：1、简述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等；2、结合中学生与人交往的现状和自身实际，谈谈你的感想 3、举例说明你是怎样与他人进行交往的。,As senior high students,we should not onl
6、y focus on our studies but also learn how to communicate and get along well with others.However,we ofter ignore the latter and often feel at a loss when dealing with such a thing.,Para.1,Task 1 Outline,Para.2_ Para.3_ Para.4_,The picture shows us a touching moment when two volunteers help a disabled
7、 man in a wheelchair This picture reminds me of the significance of volunteersI would be happy to be a volunteer,too,para2 picture description,para3 personal view,para4 personal action,1.Develop a paragraph,While-writing,2.Write effective sentences,3.Choose proper words,What is a good paragraph?,Thi
8、s picture reminds us of the great value and significance of volunteering.There are many of them in my school,my community and our country,helping not just the disabled,but also those who cant find their way around,or those who suffer from misfortune.Volunteers make a difference to these people when
9、they bring them warmth,comfort and relief.,Topic sentence,Concuding sentence,Ts-Ss-Ss-Concluding s/Linking s,1、develop a paragraph,Ss,Mistake 3:no TS,SS,CS,messy,no Cs,As is shown in the picture,volunteers make a great difference.Some help the disabled with their daily life.Others offer to help in t
10、he Senior house.Many a little makes a mickle.,Why do we need volunteers in society?For one thing,they bring warmth to those living in trouble.For another,the burden of government is relieved to some degree.Furthermore,their own life is enriched.,Task 2 Lets write a paragrah,2、结合中学生与人交往的现状、自身实际，谈谈你的感
11、想,_,By listing facts and examples,By causes and effects,By contrast and comparison,You can choose from,You must have Ts-Ss-Ss-Cs,While-writing,2.Write effective sentences,句式多样，长短相间,定语从句，名词性从句，状语从句,强调句，倒装句,双重否定句，反问句,We hope in future if disasters come,there will be volunteers.,We do hope in future wh
12、ere there are natural disasters,there are volunteers.,Volunteers provide us with convenience and they also make the whole society more harmonious for people to live in.,Not only do volunteers but they also,With more and more peole involved in voluntary work,we wonder how harmonious the world will be
13、.,With,it is hard not to wonder how harmonious the world would be,While-writing,3.Choose proper words,用词准确，富于变化，善用短语,非谓语动词,动词-动词词组-名词-形容词-副词,It makes you happy and satisfied when you are involved in voluntary work.,Your involvement in voluntary work will,Be involving in voluntary work will,Fully inv
14、olved in voluntary work,you will,Be involved in voluntary work,and you will,We should work hard to do voluntary work.,devote ourselves to voluntary work,be committed to,spare no effort to,There are many kinds of voluntary activities now,for example helping the old man and serving the public.If I hav
15、e spare time,I will choose to take part in some voluntary actities I choose to help the old or disabled people because they have many problems in their daily life.,of which,are admirable ones.,With more spare time,prefer to,who,Lets improve a para,In a word,volunterers make a great difference.,Lets
16、read the para,such as helping,sentence/word,Task3 Lets improve our paragragh.,Sentence structure,choice of words,Check content,Post-writing,Check grammar,Double-check：,1.保证三要素体裁(style)、人称(personal agreement)、时态(tense)正确,.避免图画类作文的一些常见错误 话题、主旨错误,.控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）,.不能没有结尾！,人称混乱！,Too long!,Handwriting1 全文分布合理，留足天、地、边；2 字母大小均匀，圆润适当；3 不能歪歪斜斜，有小又挤；不能该大写不大写，该小写则龙飞凤舞.,Last but not least,Not good!,Worse!,Neat!,一篇好的英语图画作文,Right topic and themeGood organizationWell-structured paraEffective sentenceProper wordsNeat handwriting,Homework:Write the whole article,Thank you!,
